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abhi thodi der mein edit karti hoon dabba!
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wow!!! awesome OS tora...! kitne perfectly you described each one's feelings...whether it be Alina...Jeh...Abhay...aur Piya...beautifully written...have no words to describe this OS... nice tora...Hats Off!!!
last waala Abhiya moment... I am waiting...ki kaash aisa kuch ho asli mein... mazaa aa jayega...nai? Aline ki line "Who will I betray" Abhay? or bhai?" was perfect!! aur phir...Piya ke emotions... Abhay ki smile... Jeh-Armaan convo... was a delight to read!!
continue soon and PM me!!
arey haan...main bhul hi gayi... dekho...silly me!!! yay!!! me first!!!! lol!!
pehle aane pur...and for a beautiful OS...!!!
Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 12 years ago