NEW OS:A Night to Love, A night to Lose(pt4,pg-24)

Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
resd

abhi thodi der mein edit karti hoon dabba!

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wow!!! awesome OS tora...! kitne perfectly you described each one's feelings...whether it be Alina...Jeh...Abhay...aur Piya...beautifully written...have no words to describe this OS... nice tora...Hats Off!!!

last waala Abhiya moment... I am waiting...ki kaash aisa kuch ho asli mein... mazaa aa jayega...nai? Aline ki line "Who will I betray" Abhay? or bhai?" was perfect!! aur phir...Piya ke emotions... Abhay ki smile... Jeh-Armaan convo... was a delight to read!!

continue soon and PM me!!

arey haan...main bhul hi gayi... dekho...silly me!!! yay!!! me first!!!! lol!!
pehle aane pur...and for a beautiful OS...!!!
Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
awww...dt ws so beautiful tiora...lvd it cmpltly ...wtng 4 jeh's plan to reveal n abhiya wr so dreamlike...do cont soon...n plz pm me...
Posted: 12 years ago
res

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really an awesome OS at ur first attempt.🤗
plz update soon!!Edited by ANTARA-2244 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Tora i loved it khub bhalo os thanks for pm aaj kal abhay kafi naughty ho gaya hai lol
Posted: 12 years ago
hye tora thats fo beatuiful, continue soon, pm me ok
Posted: 12 years ago
wow..wow..wow..wow..wow..wow..
Tora..it's Amazing..Awesome...

Posted: 12 years ago
Really nice tora🤗
so back with a bang ðŸ˜³
Edited by black_scorpio - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
i loved it

mind blowing
 great job well done  
abhiya romance was great  jey & woh vampire  plan to kill abhay & great idea serial mein to us vampire ka maksad pata hi nahi cahlta ke vo kis liya aya hai  cont.soon and thx 4 pm


Posted: 12 years ago

Wow Tora, love the start of your new OS...
I just enjoyed the room scene
oho ! Jeh n armaan r plotting against abhay!
I'm sure abhay inka BBB nikale ga. . Hehe
continue soon
thanks 4 d pm

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