New FF:Teri Meri Prem Kahani part 5 pg14 upd 30.11 - Page 7

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by balhfan


nice... plz continue... 

thanks glad u liked the update
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by nypunya


nice update mnh
continue soon
thanks

thanks glad u liked the update
next update asap

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by prachimishra85


Very Nice update... Guess what's behind the property stuff
I hope Ram agree for the marriage without making any tanatrums
Thanks for the PM and Cont. soon
 
 
 
❤️ Prachi

thanks Prachi glad u liked the update
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by parulkhare13


TOO GOOD and Interesting update. Can't wait to see what happens! next and what is the matter of property which is making priya to get married :) plss update soon waiting for next part eagerly   :)

thanks glad u liked the update
next update asap

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by SriB


Sounds very interesting .cant wait for the next update

thanks glad u liked the update
next update asap

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by vrsha93


wonderful ff...waitin for da nxt update.😊

thanks glad u liked the update
next part asap

Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends sorry for the delay in the update
here is the update

Part 3

In US a man was seriously involved in the discussion with his friend regarding the project, at the same time the phone was ringing in the reception

Receptionist: yes mam how can I help you

Lady on the other side: can I speak to Mr.Ram Kapoor please

Receptionist: mam I'm sorry he is busy

Lady: please transfer the call

Receptionist: mam sir ordered me not to transfer any calls

Lady: just tell him the call is from his home

Receptionist: may I know your name mam

Lady: Neha... Ram's sister

Receptionist: sure mam I''l inform Ram sir about it

Neha: not informing I need to talk to him right now, it is very urgent

Receptionist: k mam I'll ask sir can you wait for a moment

Neha: k thanks

The discussion was still gng on and the phone rang, the man picked it up irritatedly

Man: I asked you not to disturb right

Receptionist: sorry to disturb you sir but your sister called and said that she needed to talk to you immediately

Ram: Neha

Receptionist: yes sir

Ram: please connect me to the call

Receptionist: yes sir and she connected the call

Ram: Neha what is this cant you wait for sometime

Neha: sorry bhai but it is very important, I needed to talk to you

Ram: why is you voice sounding so tensed... what's the matter

Neha: bhai maa is not well you need to come immediately

Ram: what?? You are telling me that now... how is maa

Neha: bhai maa is fine...

Ram: how did it happen?

Neha: bhai maa fainted bcoz of high BP

Ram: how is maa now

Neha: bhai... bhai don't worry maa is fine now  

Ram: Neha take care of maa I'll come by next flight

Neha: yes bhai... bhai can you bring Rishabh with you

Ram: Rishabh... but why him I'll take care of everything

Neha: I know bhai you'll take care... Rishabh finished his exams so I thought maybe he too wanted to come home

Ram: k I'll call him

Neha: k bhai don't worry abt maa I'll take care of maa bye

Ram: bye he immediately called his secretary and asked to book 2 tickets for India by next flight itself he was about to call Rishabh but Rishabh called him

Ram: Rishabh how are you

Rishabh: bhai... how are you I'm fine

Ram: I'm leaving for home today

Rishabh: can I come with you bhai

Ram: I was about to ask you that

Rishabh: k bhai when do we have to leave

Ram: today itself we have flight in 2 hours

Rishabh: is everything alright you sound worried

Ram: yes everything is fine

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Ram was tensed all along the way Rishabh who observed it asked while they were coming to their home after landed in Mumbai

Rishabh: bhai is everything alright

Ram: yes

Rishabh: no bhai I don't think so you seem so worried

Ram: ntg Rishabh

Rishabh: please bhai tell me what the matter is

Ram: actually Neha called me and told that mom had high BP attack

Rishabh: bhai how is maa now and why didn't you tell me before

Ram: already I was worried, I didn't want you also to face the same situation by the time they reached their home both of them rushed to their mom' room

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Ram: maa...  maa he went towards her and held her hand in his

Neha came towards Ram kept her hand on his shoulder: bhai maa is fine, now everything alright she is sleeping now please you freshen up yourself and take some rest by that time mom will wake up

Ram: no I'll not go from here till I speak to mom

Neha: please bhai...

Ram: Neha please I don't want to go away from mom

Neha: k bhai Rishabh atleast you go and take rest

Rishabh: k di bhai I'll be back soon and he left to get freshen up

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After some time he came and saw that Ram was still sitting hand mom's hand in his and Neha was sitting on the other side

Rishabh: bhai now you go please

Ram: no Rishabh how can I leave maa

Rishabh: bhai I and di will be here only atleast you freshen up after a lot of insisting Ram went out of the room as soon as Ram went out Rishabh went towards the door and locked it from inside

Shailaja thought about a plan and called Neha

Neha: maa how are you

Shailaja: Neha I want you to help me

Neha: yes maa tell me

Shailaja: I have found a suitable bride for Ram and need your help for making Ram agree to this marriage

Neha: sure maa even I wanted bhai to settle down now... maa we'll involve Rishabh too

Shailaja: sure I'll call him and she later called Rishabh and told him everything

Rishabh: k maa I'm ready to do anything for bhai

Shailaja: great then Neha will call Ram and will lie to him about my health, I'm sure he'll come back even Neha will tell Ram to bring you along with him you just behave as if you don't know anything

Rishabh: wow maa you have become expert in planning

Shailaja: what can I to do if I have a son like this who is not interested in marrying then I have to do something na

 Rishabh whispered: maa... maa now you can wake up

Shailaja opened her eyes: Ram went away

Neha: yes maa

Shailaja: thankgod atleast now he left the room otherwise I don't know for how long I had to act like this only

Neha: maa you only gave this idea now you are only saying like this

Shailaja: Neha I know this was my idea but I didn't know then that sleeping all the time would be this difficult

Rishabh: maa you have forced bhai to come home but now how will you make him agree for this marriage

Shailja: you just wait and watch and by the way I didn't call you both to watch the drama over here you both will also help me for this... right

Neha and Rishabh: yes maa we are with you, we also want a bhabhi we have been waiting for so long

Shailaja: what are you 2 doing speak slowly if Ram comes to know about it, he'll never agree for the marriage

Both Neha and Rishabh came towards her: we are with you... the mission of bhai getting married will definitely be completed this time and all three of them hugged, there was a knock on the door

Ram: Rishabh... Neha... open the door hearing Ram's sound Shailaja lay down on the bed and Neha was sitting on the bed holding her mother's hand and Rishabh went to open the door

Rishabh: bhai you came back so soon you should have taken rest for some time

Ram: no I'm fine... did mom wake up

Neha tensed that he might have heard tried to cover up: no one bhai only 3 of us

Rishabh: yes bhai mom is asleep only we two are there

Ram: then how come I heard 3 voices and were you guys laughing I mean I heard...

Rishabh: no bhai me and di were discussing about mom's health

Neha: bhai actually we were thinking... why did mom get high BP attack... is she worried about something

After hearing this Ram became thoughtful: what is that, that is bothering mom I should ask her there Shailaja was silently listening to the conversation she knows very well about her son she know what he thinks she was already prepared for his questions 
Edited by M_n_h - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update yaar really waiting for next one great work :) 
Posted: 12 years ago
Good work, like it. W8ing for next update Its my request to u to write the recap of previous update to understand the situations & minds of characters. Each time before reading the update we need to rush to previous update. Hope u don't mind. Once again good update, keep updating. Thnkx
Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting eagerly for the next update.

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