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xXShriyaXx

@xXShriyaXx

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Posted: 12 years ago

that was wonderful...pls add me to ur pm list

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tvmylove

@tvmylove

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

superb... continue it...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Edited by lyraa - 12 years ago

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Sexy Sobti

@--BSI-FaNaTic--

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Posted: 12 years ago

Please continue 👏

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Iyra!! I just read ur FF.. It is amazing and take off was really good.. The way Arnav and Kushi's feeling for each other was said well..👍🏼

Please add me to your PM list as well!! 😳

Update soon.

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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 12 years ago

It's superb...continue soon!!!

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

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Posted: 12 years ago

Fab update dear!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Edited by Lyraa99 - 7 years ago

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice one hun!

I really liked the jealousy element. You've written Arnav and Khushi's feelings beautifully!

😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Not because she was scared of finding something in his eyes, but she was scared of what he might read in her own'..

wonderful dialogue.

continue sooon.

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