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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 9 years ago

Beautiful poem Ravi! 👏👏👏⭐️⭐️

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radianteyes.

@radianteyes.

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Posted: 9 years ago

I am wonder struck . truly amazing
I have no words to describe the beauty of the poem
You are incredible bhaya
Every stanza provided with such an imagery . beautiful
simply speechless

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Jackles

@Jackles

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Posted: 9 years ago

You are an amazing poet bro 👏👏👏

Seriously! this was the line when i felt so grief stricken

"Am I a blot upon the name of women, after all the effort and perspiration?"

Hats of to you bro. This is your best piece of poetry 👍🏼

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nsapo

@nsapo

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Posted: 9 years ago

wohoo bro! the poem is just brilliant.👏..First when i saw it i was like I wont understand this level..but lo i did😆 Wonderfully captured

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Secret

@Twilight123

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Posted: 9 years ago

Excellent Ravi bro...👏👏⭐️

Directly from the soul..loved it to the core...😊

some lines were really touchy...😭

You know bro that scene really makes me emotional whenever i watch...😭

And perfectly described in words...thank you bro...

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@ANGELICEYES

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Posted: 9 years ago

Excellent piece of poetry Bhaiya ⭐️ .. The siggy's enchanting too..

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Ravi

@DemonStar

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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank you so much, everyone. 🤗

Posting my VM dedicated to Purvi di here as well. (Edit: Added Dailymotion link.)

http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x2y34ix_shieldmaiden-of-c-i-d-inspector-purvi-ansha-sayed_tv

This is the first time I've used PowerDirector, and I have been working on it from February. There are some glitches but I hope to overcome them in future works.

I hope you like it. 😊

Edited by DemonStar - 8 years ago

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Secret

@Twilight123

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Posted: 8 years ago

Aaw...i was waiting for your VM bro...thank u so much...🤗

A treat for me... i m going to download and watch it..😃

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@Twilight123

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Posted: 8 years ago

What a beautiful VM you made bro.😛👏⭐️..really i have no words to say..i m totally in love with this... ❤️ ❤️

The first part was perfectly chosen to describe crime against women..👏.👍🏼

Action,disguise part was superb...👏

Loved how you showed her bonding with seniors Acp sir,Daya,Abhi,freddy sir,Rajat and salunke sir...i loved this a lot bro...😊⭐️

Abhi-Purvi scenes always i love to watch...😊

I hope Mam watch this VM..😊

Bg music was nice...👏

I will save this for forever in my collection..thank u so much bro...🤗

Edited by _Ecstasy_ - 8 years ago

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Padmpriya

@Padmpriya

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Posted: 8 years ago

Its AMAZING bro 👏 looking forward to more from you 👍🏼

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