||*INVINCIBLE*|| (new poem on Page 21) - Page 7

Posted: 10 years ago
finally i watched:-)
it ws fantastic
Posted: 10 years ago

I actually wanted to include about 7-8 more scenes (Rajat and Sachin's injury scenes you mentioned too), but ran out of space because the music track was only so long, so I kept the highlights. Good point about the resignation/scolding scenes, I should have thought of that.

Thanks a lot for your honest feedback, GD. πŸ˜ƒ I will keep it in mind next time.

Posted: 10 years ago
Watch it soon Ravi bro 😊
my net is nt working 4 youtube
Posted: 10 years ago

OK, as promised, here's my poem on FW for giving us a decent 1000th episode. For some reason I wrote it all in Hinglish; hope it's not too much of a distraction in this already lousy poem. πŸ˜† Also I declare this to be the official thread for all my creations, since I won't be making VMs on a regular basis. 

Ye poem hum karte hain dedicate

Ek bahut anokhi team ko

Jinhone har creation se kiya indicate

Ki kitne amazing hain woh

 

You developed every show well

Ho woh comedy ya thriller

CID ke liye toh one can tell

That it is an absolute killer

 

Dekhte dekhte ho gaye

Saal saath mein kitne

Par har case ke andaaz naye

Isliye appealing hain woh itne

 

Writers, directors, technical team

Sab ka hai great contribution

Unke bina, we can easily deem

Our show would've never come to fruition

 

Soch ke hi lagta hai darr

Kahan hota CID aapke bina

Hum sab aakhir hote kidhar

Aapke iss anokhe show ke bina

 

We'd like to express our gratitude

Despite thode se quirks

An incredible experience, to conclude

Many thanks to you, FireWorks

Posted: 10 years ago
Awww... Awesome Ravi bhai... You're multi talented...πŸ‘
Loved the poem... Beautiful way to express it in a different mannerπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Every line was superb..!!πŸ‘πŸ‘

Great Job..!πŸ‘πŸΌ
Posted: 10 years ago

⭐️poem⭐️

wonderful expression
πŸ‘
Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful poem Ravi πŸ‘β­οΈ
Very well expressed!! πŸ˜ƒ
 
Sorry... my 'like' button not working... will 'like' it afterwards πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Ravi bhai...πŸ‘
Loved the poem...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘superb..πŸ‘πŸ‘
Great Job.πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago
Great job Ravi... Kya dil se taarif ki hain πŸ˜†
But loved the poem πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome poem ravi bro!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
no words to describe it!
superb poem!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

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