Originally posted by MuktaJaiswal
๐Hey Neha ๐ค
Finally got tm 2 comment๐ฅณ
I kn I m late fr commenting bt hd a valid reason yaar,๐
Job , ghar ka kamm, n lotsss of pwr cuttsss๐
Well enough of excuses by m,๐
hey di ๐ค
long list for commenting late ha ๐
No probs di we understand ๐ณ
After reading intro m knw ur SS will be very emotional n a
bit on darker side.๐
Bt nvr thgt ths Story.๐ฒ
I myself was thinking a FF or SS like ths bt ths is beyond
my imagination๐
U thought n hv written very well dr.๐๐
M confused๐, 1st make m clear bth Simple n Arpi r preg na๐
thanks di ๐ณ
both simple n Arpi are preg ๐ณ
@BIYA 'Part III
Appreciated Arpi fr standing fr her baby,๐ ๐its nt Avi ๐ก2
decide has he hd already relinquish them both.
Bt confused abt her marriage,๐ yes she suld stand 2 sv
marriage also,๐ bt avi dsnt lv her ๐maybe nvr lved her๐ฅบ n he lves simple thn shuld
she continue the marriage.๐
Bt if she leaves him she should definitely mk him feel abt wt
he is loosing n hw wrng is he in leaving her n their baby.
Arpi will fight for her child n husband for sure but due to some mistakes in past Avi couldn't accept her
Avi is only one who suffers most here
Nw fr the other 2 parts. Don't know wt I thgt is wt u wrote,
reading both parts the first thg I felt ws, (as describe by Nida Fazli)
@BIYA 'Part I : (spec the 1st n 4th para- highlighted)
kabhi kisi ko mukammal jahaan nahin milataa
kahin zamin to kahin aasamaan nahin milataa
jise bhi dekhiye vo apane aap men gum hai
zubaan mili hai magar hamazubaan nahin milataa
kabhii kisi ko mukammal...
bujhaa sakaa hai bhalaa kaun vaqt ke shole
ye aisi aag hai jisame dhuaan nahin milataa
kabhi kisi ko mukammal...
tere jahaan men aisaa nahin ki pyaar na ho
jahaan ummid ho isaki, vahaan nahin milataa
kabhi kisi ko mukammal...
@BIYA 'Part II :
maanaa teri nazar men teraa pyaar ham nahin
kaise kahen ke tere talabagaar ham nahin
sinchaa thaa jisako hamane tamannaa ke khoon se
chaman men us bahaar ke haqadaar ham nahin
maanaa teri nazar men teraa pyaar ham nahin
kaise kahen ke tere talabagaar ham nahin
Neha is a poet when ever she has time... ๐
bored dr.๐ฅฑ very long comment na๐
hehehe ๐bhout zyada ho gaya na๐. truth is I lk ths type of
emotional stories so''.๐ณfelt very sad ๐ n emotional๐
N gt tm nw, so hd 2
comment fr all the 3 updates.๐ณ
No matter how long or short the comment dnt matter...you guys take your precious time for us and we love you also appreciate it very much ๐ณ
Hehehe๐ dnt woory next comment will nt b boring, ๐ as ths
(well it
depends on ur next UD)๐
Waiting eagerly fr next UD.๐
N Don't forget 2 PM me.๐ก
she will pm you di ๐ณ
love ya
Neha n Priya