SS-"Back in Your Arms"Updated,Pg-7 - Page 5

Posted: 12 years ago
Heyyy samosa..

I didnt comment yet๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ sryyy๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Ok... here I go...

Arpi stood for herself nd baby!! yayyy!!

I agree.. Avi should support their baby.. how can he tell to abort the child.. He has to support her and specially the baby...

If avi dsnt love her and wants to live with Simple..thn she should let him do it๐Ÿ˜Š

when u r updatin next?? story is becoming interesting as ever๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Love ya sweets.. update soon๐Ÿ˜‰
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by suvarnaawt


awww avi aisa kyu kar rahe ho๐Ÿ˜ญ awsm update๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผplzzz gkd jaisi sad ending mat karna๐Ÿ˜” waiting for next update๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks for your comment ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Avi loves his sweetheart like any obsessive lover but due to some circumstances he got married to Arpita ๐Ÿ˜Š

Dnt worry hun this will be NOT ending as our beloved show ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Take care

love ya 

Neha n Priya 

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by jes_jade


Neha dear !!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿค—

I am so sorry dat I didn't reply earlier...

Ur 1st update made me think abt a Silent type hero & Chulbuli heroine..

But frm 2nd part..omg...hw can AST be so cruel & heartless..& he is in love with someone else..๐Ÿ˜ญ

Feeling so pity for Arpi..

Plzz...Cont soon..๐Ÿ˜Š

Saku-chan ๐Ÿค—

Missed Ya ๐Ÿ˜ญ

NO need to say sorry...My heart bleeds when you say those words ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

As far as Story concern " Wait Panne unnaku story tanale puriyo "

luv ya 

Syao-Kun n JB

PS i love you more than her โ˜บ๏ธ 

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by coolguy3


really sad ๐Ÿ˜ญ ... poor Arpi ... why did Avi marry her if he luvd Simple n also if he actually luvd Simple then hw cud he even consumate wid Arpi ... smth is amiss  ... there has 2 b a reason ... How can Avi b so cruel ...

hey hun 

thanks for commenting 

hun due to circumstances Avi n Arpi got married and as far as their consumate Avi was drank also Arpi still loves RV her ex-lover who his Avi best friend 

stay tuned for Updates

love ya

Priya n Neha 


Edited by yoga23priya - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by MuktaJaiswal


๐Ÿ˜ŠHey Neha ๐Ÿค—
Finally got tm 2 comment๐Ÿฅณ
I kn I m late fr commenting bt hd a valid reason yaar,๐Ÿ˜Š
Job , ghar ka kamm, n lotsss of pwr cuttsss๐Ÿ˜”
Well enough of excuses by m,๐Ÿ˜Š


hey di ๐Ÿค—

long list for commenting late ha ๐Ÿ˜†

No probs di we understand ๐Ÿ˜ณ


After reading intro m knw ur SS will be very emotional n a bit on darker side.๐Ÿ˜Š
Bt nvr thgt ths Story.๐Ÿ˜ฒ
I myself was thinking a FF or SS like ths bt ths is beyond my imagination๐Ÿ˜Š
U thought n hv written very well dr.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
 
M confused๐Ÿ˜•, 1st make m clear bth Simple n Arpi r preg na๐Ÿ˜•


thanks di ๐Ÿ˜ณ

both simple n Arpi are preg ๐Ÿ˜ณ

 
@BIYA 'Part III

Appreciated Arpi fr standing fr her baby,๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘its nt Avi ๐Ÿ˜ก2 decide has he hd already relinquish them both.
Bt confused abt her marriage,๐Ÿ˜• yes she suld stand 2 sv marriage also,๐Ÿ˜Š bt avi dsnt lv her ๐Ÿ’”maybe nvr lved her๐Ÿฅบ n he lves simple thn shuld she continue the marriage.๐Ÿ˜•

Bt if she leaves him she should definitely mk him feel abt wt he is loosing n hw wrng is he in leaving her n their baby.


Arpi will fight for her child n husband for sure but due to some mistakes in past Avi couldn't accept her 

Avi is only one who suffers most here 

 
Nw fr the other 2 parts. Don't know wt I thgt is wt u wrote, reading both parts the first thg I felt ws, (as describe by Nida Fazli)
 
@BIYA 'Part I : (spec the 1st  n 4th para- highlighted)
 
kabhi kisi ko mukammal jahaan nahin milataa
kahin zamin to kahin aasamaan nahin milataa
 
jise bhi dekhiye vo apane aap men gum hai
zubaan mili hai magar hamazubaan nahin milataa
kabhii kisi ko mukammal...
 
bujhaa sakaa hai bhalaa kaun vaqt ke shole
ye aisi aag hai jisame dhuaan nahin milataa
kabhi kisi ko mukammal...
 
tere jahaan men aisaa nahin ki pyaar na ho
jahaan ummid ho isaki, vahaan nahin milataa
kabhi kisi ko mukammal...
 
 
@BIYA 'Part II :

maanaa teri nazar men teraa pyaar ham nahin
kaise kahen ke tere talabagaar ham nahin
 
sinchaa thaa jisako hamane tamannaa ke khoon se
chaman men us bahaar ke haqadaar ham nahin
maanaa teri nazar men teraa pyaar ham nahin
kaise kahen ke tere talabagaar ham nahin 


Neha is a poet when ever she has time... ๐Ÿ˜†
 
bored dr.๐Ÿฅฑ very long comment na๐Ÿ˜‰
hehehe ๐Ÿ˜†bhout zyada ho gaya na๐Ÿ˜†. truth is I lk ths type of emotional stories so''.๐Ÿ˜ณfelt very sad ๐Ÿ˜” n emotional๐Ÿ˜”
N  gt tm nw, so hd 2 comment fr all the 3 updates.๐Ÿ˜ณ


No matter how long or short the comment dnt matter...you guys take your precious time for us and we love you also appreciate it very much ๐Ÿ˜ณ 

 
Hehehe๐Ÿ˜† dnt woory next comment will nt b boring, ๐Ÿ˜Š as ths 
(well it depends on ur next UD)๐Ÿ˜‰
 
Waiting eagerly fr next UD.๐Ÿ˜

N Don't forget 2 PM me.๐Ÿ˜ก

she will pm you di ๐Ÿ˜ณ

love ya

Neha n Priya

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by prash_t


Heyyy samosa..

GJ 

I didnt comment yet๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ sryyy๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

No probs hun ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Ok... here I go...


Arpi stood for herself nd baby!! yayyy!!

I agree.. Avi should support their baby.. how can he tell to abort the child.. He has to support her and specially the baby...

If avi dsnt love her and wants to live with Simple..thn she should let him do it๐Ÿ˜Š

i think you are correct from your POV but wait until story unfolds ๐Ÿ˜‰

when u r updatin next?? story is becoming interesting as ever๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Love ya sweets.. update soon๐Ÿ˜‰

Love ya too GJ

JB n CIC 
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by yoga23priya



hey hun 

thanks for commenting 

hun due to circumstances Avi n Arpi got married and as far as their consumate Avi was drank also Arpi still loves RV her ex-lover who his Avi best friend 

stay tuned for Updates

love ya

Priya n Neha 




Dats a sad part ๐Ÿ˜ญ

@bold - bt till nw it does nt luk like it...its like she luvs Avi only ... well hope dey dont separate n r 2gether wid their child
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by yoga23priya



Saku-chan ๐Ÿค—

Missed Ya ๐Ÿ˜ญ

NO need to say sorry...My heart bleeds when you say those words ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

As far as Story concern " Wait Panne unnaku story tanale puriyo "

luv ya 

Syao-Kun n JB

PS i love you more than her โ˜บ๏ธ 



Ye lo ye love birds yahan bhi start ho gai ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
"My hearts bleeds when you say those words"๐Ÿ˜ hailaaa kitna love hai naa is couple me ๐Ÿ˜‰
btw Love yaa for replying all comments CD ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Guys first of all a biiig thanx and hug to all of you for liking Tamanna this much
n about ma Editor's replies all i can say just wait and watch ๐Ÿ˜‰

we are trying to tell a story now can't say  how will it end.

just keep commenting because its not unfolded yet ,

you can't predict anything when the Jhatka queen is associated with it ๐Ÿ˜‰


Here is the Pre for the next part hope you will like it too ๐Ÿ˜ณ

"Disgusting" that's what came on my lips.

"I don't know anything Avdhesh ji, Now you have to answer me" I determined and reached his office...

 ...


"Please Avdhesh ji, Stay with me, even if you don't love me, I love you, your are everything to me..(my sobs were chocking my voice but I had to say it all to him, I had to convince him at any cost, it might be my last chance) everything to me, Please stay with me. Ok if you want to marry that girl, go ahead I will not say a word. I will sign these papers with pleasure, but you have to promise me that you will stay with me. I don't care what world will call me, keep, second lady whatever..  all I want is you. I will not ask anything for me and my baby, I promise, I promise. If you go away from me I can't live I will die Avdhesh ji. I can't breathe when I think myself without you.."


That's all for pre will update as soon as possible as m bit stuck in studies which m not doing at all hehe๐Ÿ˜†


Posted: 12 years ago
its awesome dear..well done

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