Hello lovely readers on IPKKND forum! Well, it's the FF/SS/OS fever on right now, and unfortunately (fortunately) I have caught it too. So here's something that I thought would be quite different from the other FFs, although I am a fan of a lot of on-going/finished works! I mean they all are based on such fantastic plots with a huge variety of writing styles, they all just blew me away! Anyways, I hope you'd like this Mystery/Humour/Romance genre FF that I'll write, and I hope you'd return the favour by giving constructive criticisms! Yup, I'm a sucker for long reviews! :D haha! But no pressure! Anyways, so here it goes.
IMPORTANT! (below)
Oh wait wait wait... before I begin, the different characters' personality is almost the same as in the show, but I'll be adding a new dimension to the story (which is why the FF would fall into the mystery category). This new dimension is in the form of a new character, a new personality trait and a unique timeline/chronology of events. Yup, I'm a sucker for complicated stories too! haha! Anwyays, I hope you'll enjoy this. So here goes the Prologue! Do let moi know if I should continue or not!
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Prologue
Year: 1998
The almost dried up series of puddles splashed as much water as they could as a pair anklet-clad, tired, bruised, and bloodied feet could. These few drops of dirty muddy water, as a result of heavy rain during the day, drenched the beautiful and intricate gold borders on a designer red saree of a woman. She huffed, panted, half-sobbed and half choked on her tears and saliva, as she struggled to survive. To survive. To live to tell the world what she saw minutes ago, in an expensively furnished room with series of bookshelves and a huge teakwood study table with minimal stationary to adorn it. Outside the room, the beautiful music of shahnai could be heard; tinkles of women laughing in a seemingly joyous day filled the halls, the corridors of a home, a palatial home called Sheesh Mahal. But all of that, she was slowly leaving behind her, as she continued to run across the dewy lawn of her home. Suddenly, she sees a shadow move in front of her, and upon looking up, she comes face to face with the one man she was running away from. She saw a smirk creep onto his youthful face, before she gave in to eternal darkness.
Year: 2011
The almost dried up series of puddles splash as much water as they could that a pair of 5 inches stilettos-clad, tired, bruised and bloodied feet could. These few drops of dirty muddy water, as a result of heavy rain during the day, drenched the beautiful and intricate silver borders on a designer red lehnga of a woman. She huffed, panted, half-sobbed and half choked on her tears and saliva, as she struggled to survive. To survive. To live to tell the world what she was being chased down an unkempt lawn for. Inside the building, loud music burst through the walls, making her heart beat as fast as the beat, rhythmically, as if taunting her to try and change it so that her life does not reach the climatic end that the music would eventually reach; a huge number of BMWs, Mercedes and various other luxurious cars bordered the fence area of a hotel, a palatial hotel called Sheesh Mahal. But all of that, she was slowly leaving behind her, as she continued to run across the rough, dried-up and brown lawn of this strage, eerie place. Suddenly, she sees a shadow move in front of her, and upon looking up, she comes face to face with the one man she was running away from. She saw a smirk creep onto his youthful face, before she gave in to eternal darkness.
History is back to haunt the one man who tried everything to avoid what happened in 1998, so that he or his family would not have to undergo what they faced all those years ago. But this time round, times have changed, his situation in life has changes, game plans have become deadlier, opportunities to win on both sides have increased as the threats to each side have increased. But most importantly, he has the chance to save the one he loves, as he could not back in 1998. The one chance he didn't even have last time, has been given to him this time round, as he will fight all his demons once and for all. The Hunter of Life made his life hell back then; but he, as the Gatherer of knowledge, triumphed over him. The Hunter (a newer, deadlier and a more ruthless one) is back, and the Gatherer has to stand equally strong, if not more.
So, let the deadliest of all games, begin.
Trailer 1 - Based on Prologue
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=6tISoNKqOjM[/YOUTUBE]
Chapter Contents:
i. Prologue - what are you looking for? JUST LOOK ABOVE THIS!
ii. Background Info (IMPORTANT FOR YOUR UNDERSTANDING)
iii. Characteristics Revealed (IMPORTANT FOR YOUR UNDERSTANDING)
1. Chapter One - INK (Page 8)
2. Chapter Two - AFRAID (Page 13)
3. Chapter Three - IN (Page 18)
4. Chapter Four (Part 1) - INTO (Page 26)