IPKKND FF - Hunters and Gatherer (note P96) - Page 5

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

WOW Shalu!

I'm touched that you've dedicated this to me. I'm feeling sinfully proud!

The prologue is fantastic!

I loved everything about it.

You've given so much but at the same time you leave the reader wanting more.

I notice no mention of any character by name as of yet, except that the Gatherer is a 'he'. Arnav perhaps, although he's got characteristics of a ruthless hunter!

I love the comparison between the different eras and the symbolism of colour!

The setting is perfect. The Sheesh Mahal does offer both a sense of security and a sense of seclusion. There is something sinister about that building.

You are a genius sweetheart and I can't wait for you to weave magic with this story!!

It'll be fab I'm sure!

Looking forward to the first chapter.

Zeba

😊

Edited by FebruaryFlower - 12 years ago

Quote

sharneil92

@sharneil92

IF-Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

@Zara and Zeba: I replied to you guys via PM! 😳

Originally posted by: lwfw
please pm me 😃

sureee!!!😃 omg! i'm so glad you're hereee!!! 😃😳

Quote

shybabe

@shybabe

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

you r great writer hon..👏...if you have put so much effort in your prologue😃...i can't even imagine how beautiful the story is going to be...😳.

Quote

Nadia

@naddiya26

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

amazing yar i missed it plz pm

Quote

..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

wow, what a description...you just pulled me in further...I can tell, you've given this a lot of thought...really looking forward to reading it...can't wait for Saturday

Quote

..Anita..

@..Anita..

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

i loved the prolouge...and this description is making ne even more impatient than the prolouge made me...i can't wait til saturday!!!! this ff sounds amazing

Quote

Silvy

@SilverBell

Viewbie

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Alright Waiting For It.

Quote

arnavforever

@arnavforever

Groupbie

Posted: 12 years ago

OMG no words to describe such an inquisitive perfection!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I just love it. I am so engrossed in it, that i forgot writing another part to my ff!

I love it! Its awesome how u r so perfect in decribing so much details.

U remind me of my AP english teacher, and the class.😛

R u an english major?😳

U know all perfect tools for a perfect piece of writing.👏

U R AWESOME.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

It felt like i am reading a masterpiece by some one famous.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Unbelievable!!!!!!!!⭐️

Please Please update ASAP.😛

I love it!😃

Quote

Mahi

@_mahi_

IF-Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

Okey😲.. your pre-prologue has, however, sent shivers down my spine😲😆

I am very much excited dear😃😃😃

BUT😉

one thing for sure, i am not going to read any of your updates at night time😆

that would for sure give me a sleepless night😆

but that doesnt mean that i wont read them😃

I seriously love the new story line😳😳😳

I am excited as to I would get to witness an extraordinary saga😃😃

thanks a lot😃.. good luck with the first chapter👍🏼

Quote

.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

im just wowww.open mouthed..tooo goood

Quote

1 ... 3 4 5 6 7 ... 69

topics	author	replies	views	reply
♡ Fan-Fiction Book Cover Shop #25 ♡ [Note Pg 20] Grey-licious 198 11019	Grey-licious	198	11019	3 days ago LadyWhistledown >
Jab Mila Tu\|\| DT NOTE P.1\|\| Farwa_Afaq 4 357	Farwa_Afaq	4	357	11 days ago benisfroms >
✍️Submit a Writing Prompt ✍️ Note P 48 LizzieBennet 401 36210	LizzieBennet	401	36210	1 months ago BrhannadaArmour >
📘📙Fan Fiction Recommendations📙📘 Mod note: P2 LizzieBennet 25 9594	LizzieBennet	25	9594	3 months ago BrhannadaArmour >

IPKKND FF - Hunters and Gatherer (note P96) - Page 5

Related Topics