VirMan OS&SS : Note - pg.70 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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MY dearest Ashuma 🤗🤗🤗 Ohh i cant thank you enough for this OS...can u make it into a FF soon? Like i keep saying ur my Fav writer amongst IF...u knw what a pagali i am about ur vampire FF and this adds to it. When i asked u to write a OS i so knw it will be what i want to read  but u knw what...this is EVEN better. 

My God u kept the characters intact...the masti...nok jhok is still there... along with Virat's worry for manv...fun and sweet alltogether...Ohhh i love it,i can go on forever...ok PLEASE telll me u will continue, DONT leave me hanging on...u will continue for ur shovu soon naaa?? and when u do email me plz... dont want to miss it for the world. 


again supurb...Especially ur ending...heheee cant wait to read the next part.  Also this OS shout be read by Sid sir...really this is too good, i hope we see something like this in the show

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lakshm thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
god loved it was imagining the scenes good one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
really nice
loved reding it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: NivRenDeewani

🤗

MY dearest Ashuma🤗🤗🤗Ohh i cant thank you enough for this OS...can u make it into a FF soon? Like i keep saying ur my Fav writer amongst IF...u knw what a pagali i am about ur vampire FF and this adds to it. When i asked u to write a OS i so knw it will be what i want to read but u knw what...this is EVEN better.

My God u kept the characters intact...the masti...nok jhok is still there...alongwith Virat's worry for manv...fun and sweet alltogether...Ohhh i love it,i can go on forever...ok PLEASE telll me u will continue, DONT leave me hanging on...u will continue for ur shovu soon naaa?? and when u do email me plz... dont want to miss it for the world.


again supurb...Especially ur ending...heheee cant wait to read the next part. Also this OS shout be read by Sid sir...really this is too good, i hope we see something like this in the show



thanx dear 🤗...luv u too...
wasnt sure how much true to their char it was...glad it was upto ur expectation..
ff? d last time i wrote an os, it turned into an ff but i'm still confused how to proceed dat storyline...let me think abt it...maybe few more scenes...but no promises atm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lakshm

god loved it was imagining the scenes good one...


thanx a lot... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roking_nidhi223

really nice
loved reding it


thanx...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashred12


thanx dear 🤗...luv u too...
wasnt sure how much true to their char it was...glad it was upto ur expectation..
ff? d last time i wrote an os, it turned into an ff but i'm still confused how to proceed dat storyline...let me think abt it...maybe few more scenes...but no promises atm...


U were spot on with the characters...trust me it was great. 

Ok fine dont need to turn it into a FF but just write a few more scenes when u get  inspiration ok? 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear! 😉

Super cute OS - I really liked it! 😍 Aww, Virat caring for Mannu, so sweet 😳 You portrayed the characters well, don't worry about that 😊

And thanks for the PM, otherwise I wouldn't have found this 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww.viraat! aww woh aapki akher hai kaun?  aww his care for maanvi was just too cute! i hope this happens in the show! that would be soo cute! I loved how you did the 'score' system! aww he is soo confused! loved it! keeep writing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ur OS is so gud...loved the playfull banter b/w VirMan n hw it ended wid Virat's confusion abt his concern for her...i cud visualize d whole scene... Do come wid more n plz PM me venevr u do😃