Hi All,
Before I start with the Thank Yous for the last part, I want to tell you guys that I felt ecstatic seeing your comments.
Writing the last part was difficult because it held pain, and it was very important that you people feel what I was trying to convey.
And when you guys say that you felt the pain, and that the part was very emotional - your comments made my day.
BIG THANK YOU!
Will Individually respond to all your comments before I post the next part.
Now going on to the next part,
First of all, Sorry for not posting the next day as I promised, but there is a reason (Isn't there always!! :)
Well - the next part is even more difficult - and it has to be done right, and I just hope that when I post it, it was worth the wait!! :)
But I promised an update, and to make up for it - here is a little promo (This also goes to show I am actually writing it, and it's not abandoned!! *grins cheekily
Mrids
*~@~*PROMO*~@~*
Gopi sat on the bed - a magnificent album lay spread on her lap. She wasn't looking at it. She wasn't anywhere. She seemed to be lost in space, staring at a fixed spot in the air before her.
A tear splotched down on her hand, when she felt a soft tug.
She jerked away from her memories and looked down. Aham ji was tugging the
album away from her.
Frantically she gripped the album tighter and looked up at
him, "No, Aham Ji. I am not ready yet" she said, her voice shaking, "don't take
this away from me"
Her plea was a hammer to his heart. His resolve strengthened even more then - he was going to put an end to this today.
All her suffering, her pain, her guilt. They were ending today.
He knew it wouldn't happen like a switch going off - but he would make sure it would be a start.
Today, right now, was the beginning of the end.
