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FF - VIRAT N MANVI - YEH PYARR HOGA HAI DOBARA

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BREIF:-

MANVI
VIRAT

THERE IS HPPING WEDDING:- U WIL SEE

JEEVIKA
VIREN

Y VIRAT COMES TO COLLGE

N WHT MANVI IS REALLY
N THE FAMILY.. OF

VIRAT  N MANVI.. WHO IS REALLY R N WHT HPN

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART ONE:-

manvi is sleeping also dreaming but it is 8am
within the dream
manvi were at collge and a new person comes n took her hand
thn we bth look each other but i did not see her face becuse he putting a mask on
thy bth look at each other for 5 min (dream end) thn manvi mom came at her room and open the curtain
from tht light of sun thn manvi woke up

manvi said to her mom y u open the curtain
manvi mom said if i do not open it thn u should not go to collge
manvi mom said get up n wash your face n thn come downstir to eat breakfast thn go collge

manvi went to bathroom that is next to her bedroom
manvi mom said to manvi whn u coming downstir first ready your bed thn come downstir
manvi said ok thn manvi mom went downstir to cook a breakfast for manvi

manvi came downstir n
thn she sid on a chair
 n eat a breakfast n drink milk
manvi said to her mom y u wake me up
manvi mom said u will be late
manvi said to her mom i got dream
manvi mom siad what sort of dream it is
manvi said to her mom i got dream that i was in collge n some person hold my hand
thn he pull my hand n i was going around and around thn he hold me
manvi mom said wht u mean he hold u
manvi said i was going around and around thn whn i was falling down
thn he hold me by putting his hand under my body thn we see each othr for long time thn u woke me up that wht a dreams is
manvi mom said have u seen his face
manvi said no to her mom

manvi mom it nothing n do not think about it
manvi said ok
manvi said to her mom i going to collge n come bk at 5pm

bye manvi said by manvi mom

manvi went outside the door and went to collge
manvi mom was thinking wht tht will mean also she was thinking i will talk with my manvi dad about it as soon as possible



manvi

went to collge n gone to lesson
she has finish her lesson
thn manvi went to canteen to see her mates

manvi was going to canteen but manvi mates call her from back
thn manvi turn back n look at her mates

manvi mates came forward to manvi and said to her
someone is coming tody as a new student

manvi mates said we should do something
manvi said wht will we do

manvi mates said we should take one girl n thn she go to her n give a rose to him n said i love u
manvi said who that girl will be

manvi said i knw who it will be
it should be her (she is pointing to someone which thy hate becuse she think i am better thn anyone else)
manvi mate said her (panchi)... manvi said yes panchi

manvi said to her mate i will go to her n said those stuff to confised her to do it
manvi n her mate agree

thn manvi went to panchi and said to her
someone is comming tody and he is a new student
also i heard he love tall girls and which has short hair with makeup styles

panchi said to manvi is tht true
manvi said yh it is true panchi and also u can ask my mates about it
panchi said no it ok

i will do more makeup thn i will come front of him n said i love u
manvi said to panchi tht good n go n have a new makeup

panchi said to her mates come n join me
thn thy went

whn thy went thn tht time manvi and her mtes jumping n enjoying
thn manvi mate said to manvi u did it
whn thy r jumping tht time manvi mate see one of panchi mate looking at us

manvi said we should stop her until she tell panchi about it thn it will have a problm
thn manvi mate went to her

whn thy reach to her tht time panchi mates r going to bathroom where panchi was
but manvi mates pull her back n said to her
if u tell her about us we knw about your weak stuff

tht time panchi mates went to bathroom n did not say anything to her

PRECAP:-

Virat has going to canteen tht time or some how manvi angle turn
virat comes to hold her n take her to canteen by holding her arm on her neck

everyone is looking at thm

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manvi n her mtes went to canteen where the new student coming with the headteacher
also
manvi see there is a new student
also manvi mate said he looking hot
manvi said to her mtes just shut up

thn she see panchi also came to canteen with her mate
n thy see a new student
n said to manvi thnks 4 it ..

i just hte and do not wntd to see your face but other way tdy i loving u for it
n she (panchi) went to him
but manvi mates has a idea
whn panchi r going to meet new student
we will make her fall onto a new student

tht wht thy did
panchi were going to fall down but new student has put his hand front of her neck to hold on

also people r laughting at her... wht has hppn to panchi
headteacher said just shut up

panchi was looking at him.. she was thinking he looking hot n
panchi were liking him

thn panchi trying to say "i lve u" but

headteacher said just stand up n move from him
panchi said bye to him with a sweet voice

but a new student laught little wht has hppn
n
thn headteacher said to him come to canteen so i will introduce u with every student
new student said ok

thy reach to canteen
n
manvi said to her mates i going to libry n thn come bk

manvi mate said u just waite a min
after we knw who he is n wht is his name thn we bth going togther

manvi said no i got to go becuse libry is going to close
manvi mate said ok

thn thy both went to libry
n the new student has been introduce to every student

headteacher said his name is Virat and
Virat pervisly in other country
thn thy family came to goa n thn he came to over collge
n we r so please of him as a high student who study with us

n thn headteacher said to panchi where is manvi
panchi said she was here a min ago
but do not knw where she went

thn headteacher said to panchi u should take care of Virat n show the collge to him
panchi said ok to the headteacher

n every student said hi Virat n welcome to collge
also Virat said hi to thm

thn
Virat said to panchi .. who is manvi
panchi said to virat
manvi is like my mates but she was gone somewhere
n also she said to me

whn the new student coems u alwys should go with him n show everything at the collge

virat said ok to panchi
panchi said knw we can go
n wntd to see the collge

thn thy went to the hall so tht panchi should show each room where it is

thn on tht time whn thy r going to hall
tht time manvi also coming on the right (going to canteen)
but on the left (going to libry)

thy bth (manvi n virat) were coming closer
but manvi is talking with her mate about the book which she took from the libry

also virat is speak with panchi

thy both on side by side
at tht time
whn thy came closer

thn manvi & virat goes apart (look like as a 1 feet size)
on tht time

whn manvi n virat is going apart tht time the dupatta
hit virat face

n pic frozen for a min (tumse... tumse.. hai... hamare... pyar... ki... kahani) with the lvily voice backgrund
thn it strted again

n the dupatta which is on virat face has been moving out of his face
thn virat were looking back n see who it is
but he did not seen it

beucse on tht time whn virat were looking back
manvi turn to the classroom to have lesson n did not see

panchi said to virat where u looking
virat said nothing

thn thy went forwrd to libry

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after 5 min

Virat was walking with Panchi to see what the collge has at the plygrund
thn panchi said to virat let sit on tht seat thn we will talk each other
virat agree n
thy went n set on the seat

on the right there is manvi lesson
the one girl look outside n see virat was sitting on a seat

thn she said there is virat
every girls look at virat n say he look hot

also manvi mates look outside n see
there is virat sitting on a seat

but manvi mates tell manvi u should look outside n see how sweet he is
manvi said i doing a project

manvi mates said that ok thn do it

thn the bell rings

whn the student going outside the room
teacher said u all should give me the draft project by next week

thn thy went out of the classroom

whn thy r going manvi looks outside n did not see virat
manvi said to her mates he is not there

manvi mate said he was there but he gone

thn thy went out of the classroom
n thn manvi said to her mate i going home n i see u monday

whn manvi was going outside of the collge gate
manvi mate call manvi

thn manvi said what it is to her mate

manvi mate did not hear wht manvi has said to her becuse thy both r too far distance


thn manvi mate run to manvi n said
i coming to your home
manvi reply y u coming to my home

manvi mate said i going to do shopping n i will take u with me
manvi said ok tht fine

thn manvi went home and said bye to her mate

on tht time
virat came out off a collge

thn manvi mate see virat
n she said hi to virat

virat said hi
manvi mate said it is u
the new student who came tody

virat said yh i am the one
manvi mate said ok

also she said r u going home
virat said no i going work

manvi mate said wht sort of work it is
virat said i working at the hotel

manvi mate said wht sort of it is
virat said i talking order n giving a meal to the customr aka waiter

virat said i was late so thn bye to u n see u on mondy
thn virat sat on a motocyle

n thn he went to work
thn manvi mate said bye virat

thn thy went

precap:-
thy r at shopping area n manvi n virat was walking .. but manvi came out of the shop n wntd to go to next shop.. n virat going out of the shopping area

but thy crash each other n thy both shopping bag fall down

...

manvi went home
n

she bell the door

manvi mom open it
n she said hi n u came early

manvi said yh the lesson finsh n do nt wntd to sty in a collge
also it is 3pm.. tht ok

manvi mom said tht good u came early
also i told wht u have said to me in the moring to your dad

thy said u should get mrrid n it is time to be

manvi said i do not wntd to get mrrid
also i wntd to study more

manvi mom said u can cont. it after u done the wedding

manvi reply no to the question

thn manvi mom said k n come n eat something thn go to your room

manvi said i coming in a bit first i go to my room

to chnge my clothes thn i come bk

th wht it did n she came downstir to the kitchn
n sat on the chair

n manvi said to her mom wht it is

manvi mom said i have make for u a pizza which is your fav
manvi reply thn give me i wntd to eat

thn thy got wht manvi wnted n thy both r hppy

whn thy finsh it

manvi said to her mom

my firend coming 2mrrow n we bth going shopping

manvi mom said tht ok n wht time it will be

manvi reply it will be 9am - 11am

ok reply by manvi mom

...

thn manvi said bye to her mom
manvi mom said u going to sleep
manvi said yes i going upstir n going to sleep

manvi mom reply n said ok thn bye n tc see u in the morning
manvi said ok n u should woke me up 2mrrow

manvi mom reply ok manvi n bye

thn manvi went upstir n trun of the light of her bedroom
n went to sleep

thn at night time everyone sleeping

manvi having a dreams tht
she was in a some one wedding area n

manvi was dancing in the rain
n smiling

thn some how one person come to hold me whn
manvi going to fall in down

n manvi only see tht he was wearing a white clothes n tall

thn manvi gone faint

thn a person took manvi into a house

but on tht time whn manvi is going to wake up n see who tht person is

it has become morning
n manvi mom open the curtain

n manvi woke up

thn manvi wnt to bathroom
n came downstir to eat breakfast

thn on tht time bell rings

thn manvi said it will be my firend she has came

...

thn manvi mom open the door n see manvi mate
n manvi mate said . hi aunty
manvi mom reply to her by hi

thn manvi mom said to manvi mate comes inside
thn manvi mate came inside the house
manvi mom said come n sit on a sofa

thn manvi mate sat on a sofa and
manvi mom said to manvi mate
u wntd to eat or iget something for u
manvi mate reply nsaid nothing aunty but i alrdy eat

manvi mom said ok
thn manvi has eat n said to her mom i going knw n come back in 4 hours time
manvi mom said k be safe n come early
thn thy went outside the house also thy bth said bye to manvi mom

...

manvi n her mate went out of her home
n

thy were going to shopping

whn thy r going thy see
tht it has new cafe shop has open

manvi mate said when we come back we should go to this cafe shop
manvi agree with her mate

thn thy went to shooping mall

it around 10 min walk

thn thy have enter the shopping mall
n went to inside of one of the shop

n whn thy enter the shopping mall
thy see tht it is big n it has ground floor upto third floor

each floor it has different types of shop

thn thy went to colthes shop
n thn manvi mate chsing the clothes which is interesting

n manvi was interesting on one suit
n thn she get her suit

manvi n her mate got those clothes but
manvi said to her mate
i do not have a money beucse my mom did not give me
manvi mate said ok

manvi said u knw y

manvi mate reply yes i knw y
manvi reply thnks 4 it

n i will pay u

thn thy went to checkout
n

thn manvi mate pay for her clothes as well manvi items
thn manvi n her mte left the shop

n trying to go next shop to see it has a nice product

whn thy went out of a shop
n strted walking throuhg the hall of the shopping mall

n there is a pillar
in the middle of the hall

n whn
thy both moves to the right side

thn someone on the other side a person

coming from the shop n going out of the shopping hall
also manvi n her mate walking n see other shop

manvi mate said come n we go on tht shop to get electrnic stuff

whn thy r going to tht shop

manvi is on right n the person coming at left

thn thy both colide each other
n thy bth shoping bag fall down
in a slow motion.. whn thy both hit each other

becuse manvi is talking with her mate
also

tht person is looking down n forwrd...

whn thy bth hit each other.. he looking down n manvi talk to her mate

. thy bag fall down

n thn manvi n tht person are trying to drop down to get shopping bag

whn thy both going to sit down. thy head touch each other

n thy both said / ouch. ouch

thn tht person said sorry to manvi
manvi reply n said it's ok

thn thy getting the shopping bag

thn thy r trying to get up

tht person has stood up n alrdy get thy shoping bag n trying to walk n go out of the shopping mall
manvi reply.. oi. u

manvi said. who the hell r u
n u do not have manus (do not have brain)

if a girl not going to get up
the person will help thm

n tht person turn
thn manvi mate were thinking who is he

she was thinking n thn she speak
n said it is u the new student from the collge

he reply yes.
n thn manvi mate said to manvi

it is him
manvi said who to her mate

manvi mate said virat
the new student in over collge

manvi reply ohh

tht y he do not care wht hppn to other people n only care about thmselves

virat reply n said..
who u talking to

manvi reply n said

to u dump dick

virat said i am dump dick
i think u r more dicker thn me

but manvi mate laugthing

thn manvi mate said to virat

come virat help manvi to pick up so she stand up

virat repply n said ok

thn virat trying to pick her up by ..
putting his hand to manvi
n said hold my hand
thn i pull u will stand up

tht wht hppn
thn manvi stand up

n said to her mte
tell him

thnks wht u did

virat reply
y can't u speak to me
n said thanks

manvi said u r a dump dick n i do not talk people who is like tht
virat said tht ok

i am not interesting in you

thn manvi mte invloves in those Conversation. thn she has stop thm becuse it is too much
n people r wtchig thm

thn manvi mate said to manvi come on

n manvi mate said to virat leave it n u can go now

thn thy both turn other way n trying to walk
n whn thy r walking

manvi dupatta the other half becuse it is too long dupatta

has been flying by a air
n it hit virat face

thn the scence stop for a min


precap:-

virat was looking outside at the rain
n see manvi was dancing
but the people was calling virat to get the order

but he did not listen

...

the scence has stop for a min

n the song sing like this...yeh yeh hai pyarr ki karni... itna hai zindagi is pyar ko

thn

the scence finish

n manvi went to the other shop
also virat went out of the shopping hall

thn manvi is getting clothes also her mate as well
n

thn thty went to payment desk n pay

n going out of shop n walking to go out of shopping hall

n tht wht thy did n

thn manvi mate said it is time to go home
thn

manvi siad to her mte

we said each other tht we should go to tht cafe shop n thn we go home

thn manvi n her mte agree n went to cafe shop

whn thy bth walking n reach closer to tht shop

the rain came fast

heavy fast

n some people on the road run n gone home or went

but manvi n her mte was getting wet

n manvi mte said come on we will go to tht shop so we do not get more wet

tht wht manvi mate did

but manvi was dancing on a street
thn manvi mate call manvi

come here

but manvi did not listn n do wht ever she is doing

on tht time .whn it is raining
manvi mom is getting upset where is she.
n also it is raining
fast

manvi was dancing
n people were looking at her n also people who sit at the cafe shop

thy also said wht tht girl is doing on a street n it is raining
thn

manvi mate call manvi but not reply

n also virat was a waiter at the cafe shop

n he was looking outside whn people said wht the girl is doing on a street at the raining time n y she is dancing n smiling
it look like she was lving it

but virat was looking at her
n

people aka customer call a waiter (virat) but he did not listn
n

he only look at her n see how she love it.. n how she dancing

thn at cafe shop
other waiter came to him

n said virat
thn said
virat

no reply came

thn other waiter touch virat

n thn virat moves

n said wht it is
another waiter said

the customer is calling u

thn virat said ok
thn virat was going to customer
thn

tht waiter which he touch to call virat

he reply n said i have wrote wht thy requried to eat

n it is your turn to give it to thm
virat reply  n said ok

n thn

whn virat going to kitchn n get a meal
thn
manager said if u do like tht it will be not good for u

virat reply n said sorry sir
n
it wil not hppn again with nice voice

manager said ok n plz remember

virat reply n said yes sir n i will

tht wht hppn

thn manvi was dancing n did not stop
thn manvi mate
went to manvi n took her

so tht she will come to the cafe shop

tht wht hppn

n thn manvi went with her mate
into the cafe shop

with a wet clothes

thn whn thy enter

the people were looking at thm
n thy did not mind (manvi n her mate)

n thn thy said to the person who welcome thm
manvi mate said

where is bathroom

he reply n said it is over there on the left
thn manvi mate said to him
thnks for it

n thn thy went
n after few min

thy went out of bathroom
n was going to sit on a chair

tht wht hppn n thy set

whn thy set

thn manvi said to her mte
i have a good time in rain

n also said to her mte
y u stop me
i wntd to do more

thn manvi mate said if u become ill
your mom will kill me

manvi reply n said tht nothing will hppn

thn manvi mate said to manvi

i will call waiter n eat somethng thn we go home
manvi reply n said it ok n let we do it

thn manvi mate call the waiter

n the waiter came

n on tht time whn waiter said

to thm

yes madam

n thy bth look at him

precap:-
light become off

n candle light came

thy bth (manvi n virat).. look each other for a few min

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THN

thy bth set on a chair

n one person came bck

from manvi side

n said in polite way

i will pull the chair bck thn u should sit

tht wht hppn

n tht person were came forward to get order

whn he said to manvi

wht u wantd madam

n manvi was looking at the menu
n

tell manvi mate

wht u wntd to eat

n thn the order has done
n manvi n her mate told to the waiter

we wntd this food to eat
n

thn he wrote on a paper n went to the kitchn to get it from it

but thn virat came to get food to serve manvi n her mate table

thn whn thy wear serve at manvi table

n were said to thm

here it is your food which u order
on tht time

the light trun off

thn manvi mate siad to waiter aka virat wht hppn

virat said the switch turn off
manvi mate said ok

n

thn manager said to everyone

u should stay at your place n sty there until the light comes out
n also

thy call all the waiter n said to thm

plz bring all candel
n put it on each table

thn

the candel has came n

virat was going to manvi table to put candel on it
tht wht hppn

whn he is going to put candel on manvi n her mate table
he aka virat said

where i will put this

manvi reply u do not knw where to put it

virat said i knw
but u r a girl

so first we ask u
thn put it on it

thn
manvi reply n said put it in the middle

thn virat said which middle
manvi reply n said

just give me
virat said ok

n whn he is given to manvi a candel
thy bth hand touch each other first

n

thn

manvi said to virat wht u doing
n y u touch me

virat said it is not my fault
u touch me

manvi reply no i did not it is u
n

thn virat said no it is not
n u (manvi) told me ./. tht u should give me a candel

manvi said yes i did
virat said ok

here it is thn a candel

but thy touch each other again by holding a candel

n thn manvi get upset n get up
also slp the waiter aka virat

evryone was looking

but thy did not see who slap who

thn the candel fall down
by whn thy bht hodling a candel n manvi get up

tht time candel fall down

thn manvi has sit on a table told by manvi mate
n thn

manvi said .. i going home to manvi mate

thn manvi mate said ok .
come one we should go

thn thy were going
also manvi mate given 100 rs on a table

for wht thy drink

on tht time
whn the cndel fall down n slp hppn

virat was going to get a new candel n put it on a manvi table

whn manvi n her mte going out of  cafe shop

thn virat was coming with a new candel

n thn it is dark

n virat was coming n

manvi was going out of the cafe shop

but other customr leg pull over

manvi was forwrd n back is her mtes

thn

manvi is hit by a customer leg n jump forwrd to fall down

whn tht hpppn

thn manvi mate said

manvi.. with high voice

n

thn virat was walking to manvi table to put a candel
tht time

he heard a voice n see manvi

has jump n going to fall down

n thn virat was running
to get manvi until

she fall down

tht wht hppn

on tht time whn she is going to fall down
virat also jump to get manvi

thn manvi mate said to the customr

u can't see
the custmer said wht hppn

manvi mate said
manvi fall down becuse u pull out your leg

the customer said

tht manager has told us all tht customr should sty on thy chair until the light comes out

thn manvi mate said i knw but we r too late

n aslo if waiter has fall down thn

the custoemr reply n said

to manvi mte
i am so sorry

manvi mate said u will be

n thn manvi went

until.. whn virat was jump to get manvi

on tht time

manvi was on top of virat n roaling down becuse it is down hill
thn
manvi is at bottom n virat is on top
n so on

until manvi is on top n virat is down
 n also

manvi lips touch virat face but people see tht thy kiss each other but tht not hppn
n it sty for a min

thn lter on manvi is trying to get up

thy bth r looking each other beucse the candel

is near to thm
n

thy bth see each other

n manvi hair is cover her face

n virat is trying to  move her hair back to her ear

n virat has did tht

n thy were looking each other for few min

thn

manvi mate said to manvi

come on we should go

thn on tht time

manvi was trying to get up but she did not get up n slip again  n
fall on virat

n thy flight comes

manvi said to virat it is u

virat said

yh it is me

n wht hppn to u

manvi reply n said

y u fall down on me for

virat said it is not my fault

u were falling down

n i was going to hold u

tht wht i did

manvi reply n said thn u should move
virat said first u on top of me

manvi reply k i will move
n did not hppn

thn virat said to manvi
just waite

thn

virat push little n said to manvi can u move at right plz

manvi has did tht
n thn virat was get up

n manvi did not get up
n thn

virat give his hand to manvi to hold on

thn manvi

has hold virat hand to get up
n

manvi was getting up
but she slip again

n virat hold her on her arms
n thy look each other

thn manvi mate said a a a

thn virat pull her

n thn manvi stand

thn manvi said to her mate
come on we going home

n tht time light came out

manvi mate see virat n said thnks 4 it also she said it is u

but whn manvi was walking forwrd
n  virat was looking at her

n
thn

manvi looks back n simle n went out of a cafe shop

precap:-
virat was dancing with viran family

thn manvi said to her mom i wantd to go outside to dance with tht wedding people

mom reply yes u can
n manvi reply thnks mom n i love u

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Posted: 12 years ago
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