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Sanjana

@VirManandJeeVi

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Posted: 12 years ago

I love it! Can you plzzz pm me when you update next? 😃

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--Suhani--

@--Suhani--

Goldie

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 2-This is really cute part! Hope you guys like it!!!😊

It was 12 o'clock at night at both manvi and virat called her and wished her happy birthday and suddenly there was some one else also calling manvi and it was her di so told virat i will call you later and then she picked up her di's call

Her di knew manvi was talking to virat and so thats why she called her at 12:05:

jevika and viren- happy birthday manvi!!!!

manvi- thanks di, thanks jiju

then they talked for couple of minutes and then biji told manvi to go to sleep. so then they hung up and manvi went to sleep.

10 o'clock in the morning at virat's house!

virat waked up early in the morning and was going to jewellery shop but just then viren saw him:

viren- virat mere bhai muje pata hai ki manvi birthday lekin tu itni subha subha kyu ootha hai.

virat-vo bhai mein bahar ja raha hu kya hai na ki muje kuch kam hai or aaj mein apane friend ke ghar rehana vala hu.

viren- par virat aaj to manvi ki birthday hai

virat bhai mein usa wish kar dunga or ab mein late ho raha hu to mein jata hu.

viren- thik hai. or tu vapas kab aayaga?

virat- vo mein raat ke 11 bajase pehala aa jaun ga.

Then virat quickly went to the jewellery store to buy something.

Manvi was in restuarent whith her family but she was really sad that virat did'nt call her and she said "i m not going to talk to him"

When manvi got home she saw a mail near the entrance door and it was from her di and then she opend it and had a smile on her face and every one asked her what is in it and she said its my picture from my child hood with her di, mom, and dad, and another picture is with all her family(biji, chacu ,chaci, dabbu, badi bi ji, and her di) and they were in a nice photo frame.

At night her friends picke her up to restaurent and they all brought a cake for her and wished her happy birthday.

When they were done eating and were paying the bill she heard the sound BUZZ! BUZZ! and it was her cellphone and it was virat:

Manvi-guys mein abhi aati hu

ritika-thik hai jaldi aana

manvi-ok. and she picked up virat's call:

manvi hello

virat-jaldi de balcony mein jave

manvi- lekin ky?

virat tum bahot saval karti ho, jitana kaha utna karo and no more question

manvi-ok

Manvi went to balcony!

Manvi-(really shoked and happy) virat tum yaha

virat-happy birthday mame

manvi-thanks chape!

Ritika, navya, and appy went to check were is manvi!

virat sat on his knees and proposed manvi!

virat-will you marry me?

manvi-put her hand in virat's hand and said "yes chape"!

virat put the ring on manvis engament fingure.and manvi told him that ring is really pretty.

virat told her now i will leave i have to get back home soon because i did'nt tell anyone.

virat:ok bye! or yeh ring tum koi dusre ungli pe pehan lena.

manvi- ha think hai. bye!

Ritika, appy, and navya saw that!

then manvi quickly put the ring on different fingure.

Ritika, appy, and navya went to the car and then manvi also went to the car.then her friends asked her:

ritika-manvi yeh teri ring to bohot acchi hai...kisne di tuje?

manvi-a vo meri di ne di hai

manvi was came home:

ritika-anant, ranbir tu do no yaha ruko haume manvi se kuch jaoori baat karni hai.

ritika-manvi vo ladka kon tha?

manvi- kon sa ladka?

appy-vahhi ladka jo restaurent mein tuje milne aaya tha or ab tu hame se jhoot mat bol humne sab dekh liye hai

manvi- vo na virat tha mera jiju ka bhai

navya- or tu useke saat hi

and her friends started laughig...

manvi-oye tum lok hase kyu rahe ho

ritika- kuch nai...tere di aur jiju ko pata hai?or tere hitller biji ko?

manvi-ha di aur jiju ko pata hai lakin biji ko nai pata.

appy-ohh...tu ne hum se kaha bhi nai na

manvi-sorrey yaar

ritika-chal think hai maaf kiya

navya- chal thik hai bye...vo do no wait kare raha hai.

manvi- thik hai yar!

manvi was in her bedroom now and was talking to virat and she told she loved his suprice and told him about her friends got to know and she also told him that there was going to be some tension because bua was coming and she can fell it...they talked all night were sleepin in morning until 11 o'clock!

HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE THIS!

DONT FORGET TO COMMENT!!!😊

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Sanjana

@VirManandJeeVi

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

Awww...It was really cutee! <33333

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princess14

@princess14

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

great update once again and thanks for the PM...can i make a small request??? can you plz post the link on the PM when you send them out?? thank you very very very much!!

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695726

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Posted: 12 years ago

It's so cute can't wait for the next part!!!!:)
Plz pm me for the next part!

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--Suhani--

@--Suhani--

Goldie

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks for the comments and i will surely put a link when i pm you!!!

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unnatia

@unnatia

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

Really sweet part! And thx for the pm :)

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanx 4 d pm nd continue it.. U r dng a gud job

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luv.u.zindagi

@luv.u.zindagi

Senior Member

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Posted: 12 years ago

hehe so sweet! please continue 😊

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--Suhani--

@--Suhani--

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Part-3

9 o'clock in the morning at virat's house

viren- virat ooth...virat...9 baj gaya hai

jevika- viren aap yaha

viren- ha vo mein iss a ootha na aaya tha

jevika-mai bhi vo maa na kaha ki virat ko ootha doon...(she suddenly saw cellphone on virat's hand)yeh phone to chalu hai

viren- ha matlab manvi aur yeh baat kare te kare te he so gaye...

then viren hear a voice waking up manvi and he turned on the speaker:

viren- jevika yeh suno

chachi- manvi ootha beta

manvi- (in sleepy voice) kya hai?

chachi-tuje collage nai jana kya aur na aaj tu collage se jaldi aa na vo kya hai na ketki ben ji aa rai hai na

manvi- pehali baat aaj mein collage nai ja rahi aur doosri baat mein ghar jaldi nai aa sakti kyuki mein navya, ritz, aur appy ke saath bhar ja rai hu

chachi- lekin

manvi-lekin bekin kuch nai mein jaa rai hu matlab jaa rai hu aur mein ne biji se baat kare li hai

chachi-thik hai tere marji aur yeh tere phone chalu lagta hai

manvi- vo navya ka phone tha

chachi- thik hai

jevika-manu

manvi-di aap

jevika-ha mein...aur tu kaha ja rahi hai

manvi-vo kuch dino mein navya ki sagayi hai to mein uske saath bahar jaa rahi hu.

jevika-lekin manu bua aa rahi hai to

manvi- to kya huva di vo to vase bhi

jevika-thik hai thik hai ab tu suru mat kare de

vanshika- viren beta jaldi se virat ko ootha do

viren-thik hai maa

viren-virat ooth

virat-kya hai bhai etni subha subha kyu ooth rahe ho

viren-tu pehale ootha ja

virat-hmm thik hai bhai

jevika- aur tum dono suno aaje se tum dono raat ko baat nai karonge

manu- hmm thik hai didi

virat-thik hai bhabi

viren-lakin kyu?

jevika-kyu ki bua aa rahi hai

manu-di mein aap ko bata na bhul gai vo navya ki sagai hai na to is weekend hum sub friends use ke ghar reha na vala hai

jevika- lakin biji se pooch le na

manvi-haa didi...thik hai mein ab ready ho jati hu varna mein late ho jave gi

At night 11 o'clock!!!! (manvi come's back home)

manvi enter's the home talking to virat:

manvi-thik hai mein tume kale phone karun gi...thik hai ns...bye

virat-hmm thik hai...bye

(jevika took phone from virat's hand)

bua-yeh koi ghar aana ka time hai

manvi-vo mein apni friend ka ghar pe thi

bua-aaj ke baat 9 baje ke baad ghare ke bahar jana bandh.

manvi- yeh mera ghar hai or meri marji muje jab tak bahar rehana honga tub tak mein rahungi

bua-bilkul aapni maa ki taraha

manvi- bua app please mere mama ke bare me kuch nahi bola to zayada aacha hai aur uneha in sab mein mat gashit yeh

Manvi went to her room and she saw her cell phone was on

manvi-hello

jivika- manu gussa chod aur so ja.

manvi- thik hai...good night di...

jevika-bye good night.

Next morning- 11 o'clock

manvi was getting ready for collage!

BUZZ!BUZZ!BUZZ!

manvi-hello

Virat- hello! madam kaisi ho?

Manvi -thik hu...thik hai tum phone chalu rakho mein collage mein jaa rahi hu...thik hai?

Virat- thik hai mame!!!

jevika and viren came and virat turend speaker on!

bua- maa mein vo kya soch rai thi ki abb tanisha(bua's daughter) aur manvi ke liye ladke dekhna suru kar dena chaya.

tannisha-mom please!

biji-mai bhi yahi soch rahi thi

manvi- lakin abi to

ritika came to the house!

ritika- manvi kaha hai tu? collage nahi aana kya?

manvi-ha baba aa rahi hu...biji mai jati hu...

(manvi saw tanisha crying in the garden)

manvi-virat mein tu mai badme call karti hu.bye

virat-bye

manvi-ritz tum car me batho mein aati hu.

manvi walked over to tanisha!

manvi-tanisha kyu ro rahi ho?

tanisha- nai mai kaha ro rai hu

manvi- jooth mat bolo mene dekha aur mene dekha jab bua shaadi ki baat ki tabhi bhi tum bohot pareshan ho gai thi.

tanisha-vo manvi mein kartik se pyaar kar ti hu aur yeh baat maa ko pata hai lakin vo love marriage ke sakt khilaf hai.

ritz-manvi jaldi kare na.

manvi- mein aati hu. tanisha tu chinta mat kar hum kuch karenge.

manvi was coming back from collage and then she called her di, jiju, and virat and told them about tanisha and her di told her not to worry they will do somehting. But jevika was really worried and virat and viren asked her what happend she told them that she is worried about manvi because her bua called her to talk about manvi's marriage and tols her that she had seen a boy for manvi and she will tell it to manvi today.

jevika-Aur bua jo ek bar fashala le lati hai na to phir biji bhi kuch nai ketchi aur ab to tanisha ki bhi chinta hai muje kuyki vo iss shadi se kush nai hai na.

viren- kyu?

jevika- vo kartik se pyaar karti hai.

virat-oh no so yeh to sab se bada problem ho ne vala hai. bichari manvi.

viren- chinta mat karo kuch nai hoga!

Hope you guys like it and next part is going to be the most intresting part...

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