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Posted: 12 years ago
nice flash back...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey fiza ..
congos 4 ur new ss!
just read d concept n 2 chps! its nyc!
cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Cute si update hai...

Their meeting ws bilkul mayurish...gussewali nups and give a damn wala mayank...

Loved that intro part...also how they shared their notes...

And nupur is still angry..hmm i know mii mayu will manofy him jald hi..vaise bhi meri mayu se koi zaida der tak naraz reh sakta hai kya...his one smile will melt nupur at once na...

Loved it..Cont dii...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh God Itne sare parts ho gaye...
will catch the story soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

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cute update👏Edited by clustersofstar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
loved their first meeting

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Posted: 12 years ago
Story is good but pic was mindblowing;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

 
 
 

 

Nupur: mayank bus aj k liya itna buhat hai…

It has been 2 hrs they were doing combine studies, as exams where pretty near, and nupur was hell tired…

Mayank: nupur mjhy yeah complete kerna hai ..i wont be having time jab mein hostel jao ga tu…

Nupur: ufuu mayank ek din nhi parho ga tu fail nhi hojao gay

Mayank: janta hoon per skool k topper k achi tacker dayni hai tu ..pls let me study…

Nupur: ary yaar woh tu tum day hi doo gay, aur schlorship tu hai hi tumahri u know mein schlorship nhi layti….chalo na aj thori masti kertay hain…hey aj tu Saturday hai…so no tuitons na…?

Mayank: han..but pls mjhy yeah kahtam kerny do…

Nupur: mayank marr jao gay agar life k itna seriously lo gay….thora enjoy kero mind relax kero …

Mayank: nupur meray pass tumhara deemgh nhi hai jo 2 ghante parhy aur sab yaad hojay ..mjhy time dayna partha hai

Nupur: woh islyan k already tumahry deemgh mein itna sab kcuh jo chal raha hota hai…hum sab aj bahr ja rahy hai..abhi hostel jao change kero….mein ek ghante mein hostel k bahr milti hoon

Mayank: nupuur….

Nupur: mayankk….plsih na.plissshhh….she made a baby face..

Mayank: he smile..pori nautanki ho tu…thik hai…chalo…

They collect things and was leaving when mayank's cell buzz..

Mayank: hello…really…wao maa..mein abhi 5 min mein arah hoon…cant wait to see u

Nupur: tum kaha ja rahy hoo…..she said angrily

Mayank: nupur maa aai hai aj….mein un se mil ny jarah hoon..masi k ghar hai..i just cant wait to see her…mein poray 6 months bad dekho ga unko…pls aj mein nhi rukho ga

Nupur: mayank relax..tumahri maa aai hain..us mein kya hai…

Mayank: kya us mein kya hai…nupur…MAA aii hai….ek kam kero tum bhi chalo…I talk about u all so much with her that she already knew u all…aur tu koi ha nhi abhi so tum hi chalo…

Nupur: tum apany friends k baray mein mom se baat kertay hoon..

Mayank: han she is my bst friend..

Nupur:hain..kya..bst frnd…...aur mein kya kero gi mil ker

Mayank: chalo na pls…mjhy ach alagy ga…tumhan bhi maza aay ga….

Nupur: ok…per meri car mein..no auto…

Mayank: acha thik hai chalo jaldi pls…

He prees the bell n was standing impatiently on door , n she was looking at him surprisingly and was a bit nervous too…she though a boy mom will be …in dark glasses, on her nose, a cooton sari, with a stern face, with a bun tighten on her head….with strick hindi speaking lady..so apparently nupur k yaha koi kam nhi

The door open n she was shocked…and mayank threw himself on his mom….

Mayank: maa…I missed u so much..

SA: missed u too beta…

She was sweet woman in her early 40, yet she seems so vibrant , her hairs left open, and was in very trendy shawlar kameez…in short she was utterly beautiful and her smile wch she gave , when nupur did namsate to her was to be complete in aww with….nupur are u falling for a woman…shutup…its just tht..

SA: hello beta…she said touching nupurs cheek lovingly….she is nupur right…

She asked mayank ..who was behind his mom n his chin on her shoulder…yes maa

Nupur: hello anty…kasi hain ap..

SA: mein tu perfect hoon beta…tum sunao..yeah kamal kasay hogaya …

She said asking her to cum in n siting beside her, where mayank was behaving like a 3 years old boy, who was still holding her mom from shoulders, side hugging her, resting his head on her shoulder, where shilpa was stroking his hairs, it was such a pleasant sight to watch, so much affection ..waoo

Nupur: kya anty..

SA: aray mayank ki friend woh bhi itni khubsoorat….

She blushed a bit and smiled in thanks..

Nupur: but anty ur so beautiful

Mayank: uff nhi yeah pls kitty party language mein maat shoro hojana ap dono…wasy mjhy jasy handsome k asay hi  dost hongay

SA: oye…teray dost hi ho  jay na wohi buhat bari baat hai..tumhain pata hai aj tak is k koi bst frnd nhi hai

Nupur: woh tu anty I can guess why..

The both giggled…

Mayank: tum tu anhi rahi thi aur ab maa k sath mil gain…very baad…

Nupur: tu mein ny socha  tumhari MAA…tumhari tarha hi hongi..sadu ..ki maa..but yaha tu kuch aur hi nikla..anty tu itni cool hain..aur tum

SA: kafi na maqool hai..

There time passed with so much fun, that nupur almost forgot that she meat SA first time, she felt a strange warmth around her, she was so loving and caring, such a giver. No wonder why mayank miss his mom so much, cuming out of his massi's house where he is now staying as maa is there, she has already start missing her…

SA: ok beta cya soon thik hai

Nupur: ji anty ..zaroor…

Shilpa came forward n hugged her, she smiled it was new thing for her…she left

Mayank: ap yahin raho gi kya nupur gai

SA: achi bachi hai, masoom se

Mayank: kya, masoom…the prankstar hai yeah apko masoom lagi ..had hai mom

SA: kafi khamosh bhi

Mayank: yeah tu ek aur joke hai…sirf yeah bolti hai baqi sab sirf suntay hain…

SA: mein us khamoshi ki baat nhi ker rahin hoon..kuch hai is k andar…

Mayank: ma pls yeah hindi film ki heroni k tarha dialogues maat maro ….aur mjhy bhook lagi hai ..mjhy aj apk hath k kuch khana hai..

SA: taphar chaly ga

Mayank: doray ga…

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Mayank: mein nhi aao ga..

Nupur: tumhara tu baap bhi aay ga

Mayank: nupurrr..

Nupur: sorry I didn't mean that yaar…kya masla hai aany mein

Mayank: yaar farwell raat mein hai bacho k papers chal rahy hain ..mein tuitions skip nhi ker sakta..

Nupur: tu un ki preparatory leave hain un ko subha parha do na…

Mayank: aray yeah tu mein ny socha nhi….he bite his lip…idea acha hai

Nupur: deemgh ki dahi….khabi tu aqal se socha kero, sirf ek hi direction mein chalta hai, parahi, carreer, ambition..uff…

Mayank: acha thik hai bus….

At school..

Mayank was dressed up in a white jacket and black pants, and nupur was dressed in a black sari, they weren't matching each other it was dress coat.

Mayank: aray nupur tum tu aj larki lag rahi hoo

Nupur: hai na ..jasay tu aj insaan lag raha hai..

Mayank: wah kiya tareef hai meri…hato..wasy sheen any itni achi tareef ki…

Nupur: acha really…tu  tum aj us k sath dance kero ga

Mayank: mjhy meri izaat buhat pyari hai…

Nupur: sary aam laut jay gi…

They both laughed…

Mayank: ur looking different today..achi lag rahi hai…

She smiled and was about to rply

Hey guys how ru just friend couple

Mayank: hum pretty much a friendly couple..he said sarcastically

Nupur: yeah log baz nhi aay ga….wasy mayank tu tu aj handsome lag raha hai

Mayank: yeah koi return gift nhi hai, jo tum return tareef ker rahi hoo

Nupur: hello its genuine hai..

The lights were dimed and it was time to dance on floor…it was a dedication moment, and everyone has dedicated some song previously.

Mayank: wanna dance

Nupur: why not. She forward her hand and the proceed to dance floor

Mayank: yaar yeah hamesha romantic song kyun hotay hai, dosto per koi kyun nhi hota

Tum se mil k , asa laga tum se mil k

Nupur: dekh soch per hai…hear this song, if u take it other way it meant for us…

Mayank: phir bhi..mein kuch dedicate kerta..

Nupur: rukhain tu ap janab,  dosti per bhi gana milay ga

Mayank: kahan..mein tu aj tak nhi suna

Nupur: tum Shakespeare ki speech se bhar niklo gay tu kuch sunay ga na

Mayank: nupur..

Nupur: mayankkk tickling nhi dekh dance floor hai

Mayank: as if I care…

The next dedication is from nupur to mayank…he looked to her with  surprise

sub say mahangee hai
chalti rahtee hai
rookti nahin dosti dosti
trey
mary
aisy dosti

tere liya maray liya sub kay liya
dosti dosti
woa hal jal ka aisy dosti

he pulled her towards him, and the dance with all the full on masti they have..they twirl and the moved, together the have the best of all

duck suck sahti hai
pal pal bahtee hai
dehkoo dosti dosti
tery mery aisy dostiii

yadain bhi hain sapnay bhi hain
garoo main kuch jahaan apnay bhi hainnn
hooohooo

sub say mahangee hai
chalti rahtee hai
rookti nahin dosti dosti

tere liya maray liya sub kay liya
dosti dosti

ahhh ur the grtest friend ..thnku…saying so he pulled her in to tight hug, making her of her feets, the whople class was adoring them as a couple..the most loving one..

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Thanks…he said smilingly walking on road beside her, n her car was following them behind, as nupur was in mood for walk…

Nupur: kyun…

Mayank: aj kitny dino bad I came out actually…

Nupur: humary sath raho k tu ash kero go…lol..anytime…thora relax kero tu zayda acha deemgh chalta hai..aur wasy bhi ab tu exams kahtam..skool khatam..ap strt hoga colloge..wao im so excited..

Mayank: hmm so tu hai..dekho hum logo k kaun se colloge mein admission milta hai…bus excel mein scholarship program mein agr mera admission hoga ya …tu wao

Nupur: hojay ga…tumhara nhi hoga tu benji k hoga kya..

Mayank: yaar I wish hum sab sath hoon..maza aay ga…

Nupur: yeah tu hai

Mayank: tum itni raat ko meray sath ho ..tumharay parents kcuh nhi kahy gay

Nupur: un ko pata chaly ga tu na

Mayank: matlab…

Nupur: dad is out of country ya city I donot know…as usaual…aur mom ki koi party hai, so she will be late tu un k late matlab subha….aur koi ghar per hota nhi so mein yaha..

Mayank: he stop…u miss ur parents…

Nupur: mayank woh zinda hain….she faintly smile n walk ahead

Mayank: so u miss ur parents….islayn tum hum sab k sath pora time spend kerlayti hoon..haina…

Nupur: she sigh..han…u know I donot really miss them..actually I nevr know the feeling of parents being around or family around….

It was a weekend and so nupur mayank benji diya went out for a movie than to have dinner, wch was on as usual nupur…though mayank tried to excuse himself before dinner, he never  wanted anyone paying for him…but he has no way out as diya benji wanted there privacy and nupur said I 'll be alone .so u cant go..as this maybe last time they r meeting as skool friends, than skool will be out of the course

Nupur: im waiting jab tumhari paki job lagay gi

Mayank: kyun..

Nupur: us din tumhari pehli salary pori hum uray gay….

Mayank: dosri….

Nupur: kyun

Mayank: pehli maa ki hai…

Nupur: hay hay mera chand k tukra…she said in nazar utaro style…n he chukled…

Mayank: nupur…abhi jaho tu I can offer u icecream…

Nupur: han..really…chalo mein driver se bolti hoon..

Mayank: nhi woh samny dekh rahi hoo…waha chaltay hain …tum ny itnay baray restaurant ki kahi hai na..aj yaha ki kaho…road side cabin ki…

Nupur: thik hai chalo…

She was enjoying eating the ice-cream and mayank was too enjoying it, yet is clam face was troubling her so much, looking beside she found sum ice cube there..n wicked smile cowered her face.she came near him..n sliped the ice cube beside his neck into his shirt

Mayank: aww..nupur….deemgh karab hai tumharay….he made them fall down

Nupur: she was laughing out loud…

Mayank: nupur ab nhi bacho gi tum ….he run towards her …n griping her hands he tok the ice cream n spread it on her face…

Nupur: mayank k bacahy….yeah kiya hai

Mayank: is ko revenge kahtay hain….

Nupur: teri tuu….

They were running beating n pulling each other leg…enjoying there togetherness..

 

 

 

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was damn cute update..
awesome part...i really loved mayurhere... nups is bublly yet brilliant and mayu is sadu, intelligent and friendly... loved the way u r developing their frship.. such a cute bonding b/w them... awww mayu and S.A bonding just awesome. nups got a bit surprised after seeing such a nice bonding. poor nups she really miss her parents love and care...mayur and S.A scene was brilliant.. loved it so much.. and the most beautiful part was mayur ice-cream scene . it was damn cute...i was totally engrossed in this update.. it was beyond my exception...
loved it  to the core.
keep it up
take Care...


Edited by -Faria- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update API...
i loved it lodsss...
MayUr frndship is really cute na adorable...
n i jst love SHILPA aunty to d coreee...
she is most fav on-screen MOM...By God!!!
i jst love her lodsss...
aww...poor Nupur...
feeling bad for her...
it was an adorable update...
ice-cream part was too cute...
loved it lodsss...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: B4 i forgot it again...😳
    u know API...jab se maine 1st time a title parha tha na tab se kehna chahti thi...u know wen i was kid i used to watch dis song n evn keep humming dis song..."Tum se mil ke as laga tum se mil ke"😆😳😆 so u make me rmmbr dat...😳 i still like dis song lodss😳
Edited by 18anila1 - 12 years ago