ff on kriya and sharon - Page 6

Posted: 12 years ago
hey Its Really nice You Should Continue 👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Guys, I am back with my next update after a long time and hope u guys will like this…

In canteen all the dazzlers and weaklings were having fun except kria and reyansh…

Neha: what happened kria? Why u looking sad?

Kria: acha… tumne notice kiya varna yaha kon he jo meri care karta he(looking towards rey)?

Vicky:meri dewani he hi aisi sabki care karti he…(lost in deewani's eyes)

Reyansh: oye… Vicky kyun meri story me tang ada raha he…

Vicky:tang??kyun mujhe disturb kar raha he…(again lost in deewani)meri dewani aaj kitni cute lag rahi he…

Reyansh (irritated)(to himself): baat-cutter bhi choti choti baton me naraz ho jati he…ab me kya karu…kiski help lu?vicky ya swayam ?wo dono to busy he…universe ji aap hi help karo…

Reyansh want to talk with kria but kria... (Girls are Girls)

Kria:guys mujhe late ho raha he me ghar jaa rahi hu…

Reyansh(holding kria's hand) : me tumhe ghar drop kar deta hu…

(everyone was shocked to see that rey was holding kria's hand except viha and swaron as they were "busy"…)

Kria: me chali jaaongi ap meri fikar mat kijiye…

Reyansh(left kria's hand): kria par me tumhe drop kar doonga…

Niesh:rey kabhi tune mujhe drop karne ke liye itna insist nahi kia samaj gayaa…ek ladki ke liye bhai ko bhul gaya…

Reyansh(pursuing nilesh):kyun tum log meri band bajane me lage ho…

(in meanwhile kria left for her home)

Reyansh(to himself):Baat-cutter tum mujhse bahot der tak naraz nahi reh sakti…here I come…

Kria (at her home) found the note of her mother that she had left for Pune for conference and she will come after two days…

Kria: Maa aap ko bhi abhi jaana tha…

Kria was in kitchen trying to make something to eat…

Kria: bahot bhukh lagi he…kash aaj kuch acha khaane ko mile…

(Reyansh was listening to kria as he was at her home!!)

Reyansh(suddenly came out of her bedroom): Will you come with me for a dinner date?

Kria: tum…mera matlab aap?aap yahan…

Reyansh:Wo mein…

Kria(as always cutting the lines): mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni he…aap chale jaiye…

Reyansh: Listen to me… I know ki tum mujhse baat karna chahti ho…par tumhe bhukh lagi hai isliye tum aisa bol rahi ho…(teasing kria)

Kria:Bhukh…aap ko kaise pata chala??

Reyansh:Baatcutter tumse related sari baton ka pata chal jata he mujhe…

(Eye –lock between kriyansh)

Kria:Rey…aap chale jaiye agar kisine dekh liya to…

Reyansh(keeping his hand on kria's mouth):Five minutes ke baad mujhe gate ke pass milna…I'll be waiting for u…

 

Precap:Kria and rey enjoying their first date…

If you guys want this ff to continue please give comments and like my ff…

Thanks for reading…

Posted: 12 years ago
Hey i want this ff to continue plz... And don,t forget to pm me nxt time...
Posted: 12 years ago
sapna plzzz do continue...u r an amazing writer
Posted: 12 years ago
nice update👏..thnx for the pm and plz update soon😉

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