Prishna FF (continued..)

Posted: 12 years ago

1st of all srry guyz i dnt noe hindi much cz i am frm U.S.A but i am indian so some of the things might nt seem 2 make sense srry bout tht! i couldnt wait so i posted this now N the words i dnt noe in hindi i'll say it in english ok? Enjoy write ur cmments n ur story underneath my ok? Then we'll hve a contest whose story ws the best k? N every1 hs 1 week (7 days only) 2 write a story underneath my after tht no mre entries n we'll start a new competition k?

*Krishna's House*

It was really brezzy n also started 2 rain slowly. Swati di Chanchal and me were taking all the clothes that was outside in our house. Ravi bhaiya and dad was busy talking the heavy things inside the clock striked 8:00 a.m.

Krishna: "Hey bhagwan hum toh ajj coaching class ki liye late he ho jayenge! Humai abhi nikaal na hoga."

Mom: "Krishna kaha ja rahe ho?"

Krishna: "Coaching ma"

Dad: "Bitiya chalo ajj hum tum hai chor attai hai"

Krishna: "nahi papa hum chale gayenge"

Krishna went without an umbrella n the wind ws stronger so strong tht she couldnt even move

*Pintu's House*

Babloo: Pintu! Pintu wuto(Get up) ! Yaad toh hai na ki ajj bhi humai coaching ja na hai!

Pintu: Bhaiya dekho na ajj toh bohat windy hai and it's raining 2 q na hum ajj coaching na jayi.

Babloo: Nahi i will count till 3 n u have 2 get up "1...2..."

Pintu: Thik hai hum ready ho tai hai.

Babloo went in a car n as usual Pintu went in his motorcycle n this time he didnt forget to get 2 helmets as he remembered wt Krishna said so then while Pintu ws going he saw Krishna n he went up 2 krishna in his motorcycle as he saw how Krishna was all wet and couldnt walk faster

"Be-beep! Be-beep!" Pintu pressed the horn krishna looked back n saw Pintu so she started walking again. Pintu came in front of her

Pintu: "Ao hum tum hai coaching lai chaltai hai hum bhi toh waha he ja rahe hai"

Krishna: "nahi hum chud chale jayengi"

Pintu: "Tumhari wish hum toh is liye kah rehti taki apko late na ho gai. Or hum aj doh helmet bhi layi agar tum chaho toh pahen sakti ho"

Krishna had no choice as she ws worried she might get late so she put the helmet on n sat behind Pintu n on the way Pintu was talking while Krishna was ignoring him.

Wen they reached the coaching Babloo saw Krishna behind Pintu n came out n said

Babloo: "Pintu phele baar humai asa lag rahe hai ki tum koi acha kaam kiya hai"

Then Krishna said "Thank u"

End of 1 episode TO BE CONTINUED...

GuYz all the episodes tht i write is gnna b posted in this thread k?
Edited by sukirti415 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Wow beautiful I liked it you are gonna continue it na.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Cutie-NivRen


Wow beautiful I liked it you are gonna continue it na.
if there is a lot of likes perhaps 5 likes then i'll continue it n thank u
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice indeed. I'll try to read the parts as you post but can't promise to be regular reader and commenter 😳 But do continue for other's sake :)
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by sukirti415


if there is a lot of likes perhaps 5 likes then i'll continue it n thank u
Please Do continue as I am sure there will be many likes don't worry about that
Posted: 12 years ago
nice episode...hope to see krishna pintu bike scene in the show  as well
Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice dear . Plzzz continue . Would love 2 read it ðŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guyz shud I write episode 2 underneath in the comment or make a new post? N r u guyz gnna pot ur episode or nt cz it's a compitition remember?
Posted: 12 years ago
U can post it in dis thread only dear as a new post. n Yes Do give some time I m sure many of will come wid their own episodes as well ðŸ˜Š
Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful and nicely written continue soon. 😊 ðŸ˜ƒ

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