BALH-Written Update 16 jan 2012

Posted: 12 years ago

               BADE ACCHE LAGTE HAIN
                  written update 16 Jan 2012

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Wish you all a very happy Pongal & Makar Sankranti.Hope you had a great festival weekend.Today is also the first anniversary of my job as written updater for IF.I started writing updates for my only true love Dutta Saab Patil's show Laagi Tujhse Lagan exactly a year ago on Makar Sankranti 2011.How time flies...'sigh'๐Ÿ˜ณ


Episode begins with a bright new morning at Kapoor House.Golu has woken up with a massive headache & is seen stumbling around in his bedroom. His eye catches his beloved tablet jar & after furtively looking around makes a beeline for it.He looks at it longingly & is about to open it when in walks Priya in a lovely pink salwaar suit with a bright "Good Morning".She has gotten Golu's breakfast for him.
She then catches the medicines in Golu' hand.He looks away like a guilty school boy & offers a  tame explanation of having a headache.The school marm scolds him that he's got a headache because he hasn't eaten since the afternoon the day before .(Haila! ๐Ÿ˜ฒRam has gone without food for a whole day?) She tells him to eat his breakfast & he'll be alright.But Golu begs for just one small dose saying what's the big deal with one tablet.Priya is having none of it & insists he eat his naashta pronto snatching the dawa ki baatli๐Ÿ˜†.Priya orders him to sit & starts serving him his food with a lot of noise cursing him for his awful ways.Golu asks her if he is related to Hitler to which Priya answers an emphatic "Yes".๐Ÿ˜† She then asks him if he has brushed his teeth.๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ(What about bowel movements,Pippu dear?๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†)Golu sulks & says he has brushed his teeth.
He then notices his food.His beloved "Aloo ka paratha" is MIA. He gathers enough courage to ask Priya about it.She turns on him yelling that no more parathas every day.He can eat them once a week if he badly misses them.She orders him to eat the healthy one in front of him.Golu then meekly tucks into his "Anda Bread" & Priya watches him lovingly.๐Ÿ˜ณ She lectures him that once the food id digested his headache will be gone and he simply gulps medicines unnecessarily. Golu continues munching on tamely.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†

What a lovely PriAm scene! ๐Ÿ‘It was an ordinary morning for this extra ordinary couple yet they played it out so superbly with their simple bonding over breakfast. Ram's school boy expressions were too good.I really need to hit the dictionary to find more words to appreciate this man's immense talent.Saakshi too was cute & lovable as always.

Sharma House.

๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒMay be I missed it but this is first time I am seeing a certain Mr Karthick getting ready to go to work. Good to know the guy actually has a job.Ships comes to give him his lappy bag & looks at him very sadly.He too looks back at her dazed & miserable.In walks Niharika dressed in "Shokh sabha" whites.๐Ÿคข She tries hard to exude a sadness which she doesn't feel an iota of at the loss of Nutz's child.She recites a few lines of condolences to Karthick but Karthick politely yet firmly points her towards Nutz's room & leaves for work.Niharika is stumped at the snub.๐Ÿ‘Shipra too motions her towards her DIL's room.Ships & Sudhir look weary & heartbroken but Nutz in her room looks chic in black on black with lots of make up on.She is fiddling with her phone probably planning to torture toyboy Shaks again.Niharika then begins her recital again but Nutz cuts her short asking her to shove her empty words up her @&#.๐Ÿ‘Niharika's is stung.Nutz then reveals about the abortion & the miscarriage drama.Niharika is pissed & tells her daughter to stay out of trouble as she will not be helping her if worse came to worst.Nutz retorts sarcastically that she has already received loadz of help from her mom & doesn't need anymore.She then tells her about Priya being aware of the subterfuge.Niharika thinks she just received a bonus ammunition to blow PriAm apart.(I am so waiting for you to use this latest ammo.Make sure this time they fall right into each other's arms๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ)

Ships is heartbroken & lies quietly on the bed.Sudhir becomes concerned for her health.Ships laments over the loss of her light of happiness.Sudhir tries to pacify her with words of comfort.Ships says they will cope with their heartbreak but she is worried about Nutz & Karthick.

Ram's Office

Ram is still battling his headache at office & is unable to concentrate on his work.He excuses himself & his associate leaves not before offering him a pack of Crocins.He says it will take care of the headache soon.Golu looks at it & has a flashback of the promise he made to his wife as my most favourite background score plays. Vikram then arrives there to ask about Nutz miscarriage & offers some words of comfort.He notices Ram is not well & becomes concerned. Ram tells him its just headache.Vikram's asks him to take one of the tablets to which Ram says he can't.Viks is shocked that his tablet guzzling friend is suffering in silence.Ram then tells him about the promise.Viks is amused & begins to tease Ram that he is in love.Ram pretends to be offended & quickly gulps a tablet down just to save himself from further embarassment.Viks challenges him that Priya will definitely find out he has broken his promise.He gives his usual marital gyaan about beewis.๐Ÿ˜†


Nightime at Kapoor Mansion.

Golu walks in happily into his room & Priya greets him heartily while preparing to sleep. Golu gives her an unnecessarily long report about his well being throughout the day.He thanks her profusely for her "No tablet" rule & says he is already feeling immensely the benefits of it.Priya's hacles are up & she demands how many tablets he has downed.Golu has a"Caught-in-the-headlights' look.๐ŸคฃHe tries to deny it but Priya is onto him like a hound dog.He finally admits that he did take one.Priya expresses disappointment in Ram for not only for the breach of promise but also for the initial denial.She protests by way of boycotting his room & stomping off to sleep on the couch outside the room.She mutters curses under her breath & calls Ram "Tablet Kapoor".Ram is massively dismayed that his wife has left him & tries to pacify her.She ignores him & he goes off to prepare for bed sadly.
After dressing for the night he sits on his bed & looks longingly towards Priya.โค๏ธHe has a flashback of the HM night when she had asked to hold his hand to sleep. He worries that Priya might be scared all alone out in the hall.(Aww...Cho chweeet!) He decides to go near her & finds her dozing on one arm.She then opens her eyes to find him lurking near her bed.She asks him if he plans to pace all night aroung the hall.He says its his house & he'll do as he pleases.He will walk all night if he wishes.Priya then jumps up saying in that case she might as well use the room to sleep since its going to empty for the night anyways.She hps & skips into the room & Ram is shocked.He mutters that the woman will drive her crazy & follows her into the room.๐Ÿ˜†

The evil trio are hiding & watching all this from the staircase.Niharika says she senses trouble brewing already in PriAm Paradise but Mama says this is a small nok jhok which will only bring PriAm closer.We need a bigger fight to drive them apart.Niharika spews some "Villainess-in-Chief" lines & screen freezes for the day on her "botoxed" lips.๐Ÿคข๐Ÿ˜ก


Precap: PriAm eating breakfast.Ram sends away the paratha which the server had brought & asks for fruits & cornflakes glaring all the while at Priya who looks back at him in amusement.She then dumps a huge dollop of butter over the paratha & says the parathas should never be so dry.


Lovely PriAm scenes.The USP which will carry this show forward & try & tame the soapish effect the Niharika tracks bring to it.I wish her villainy had more class & subtlety. Her lines & demeanor is so 90's!

Sorry!having Net issues could not much edit.Please do comment.Would love to hear from you.

Take care & Good night

Edited by ZubyDutta - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
ZubyDutta,

Excellent writing, very descriptive and good choice of words.  Enjoyed reading.  Keep it up :)
Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the wonderful update! Congrats on ur update journey!
Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the nice update
Posted: 12 years ago
Happy Pongal and Makar Sankranti to you too Zuby and to everyone here  ๐Ÿ˜Š  

Thanks for the wonderful update .. another 5 hours till its telecast here...
Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the update Zubby...๐Ÿค—
Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the lovely update!
Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the super update and congrats on your one year anniversary. Looking forward to many years of your updates.
Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks Zuby.. ummm.. ZubyDutta.. for such a lovely update with cute comments

 
Posted: 12 years ago
res ๐Ÿ˜›
welcome back๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
sweets runs in to hug her Mrs.D ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ toppling aviva๐Ÿ˜›, maris๐Ÿ˜›, maria๐Ÿ˜›, sriB๐Ÿ˜›, sai๐Ÿ˜› and the rest๐Ÿคฃ
ZubesEmbarrassed congrats on your first anniversary as updater๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ‘ will come back and comment๐Ÿ˜ƒ...first have to catch up๐Ÿ˜• been a long time
 
edited : Wishing everybody a very happy makar sankranti/ pongal from me too๐Ÿ˜› 
Wow you began your updater job on such a shubh day Mrs.D๐Ÿ˜ƒ and is it a coincidence that you have started again this year during pongal after a brief gap๐Ÿ˜ƒ well... u sure have served us "sarkarai pongal" (meethe chawal) with a wonderful PriAm episodeEmbarrassed.
 
The scene starts with our fav jodi PriAm๐Ÿ˜› Golu has woken up with a headache  thanks to his choti๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก all that concern and worry caught up with him๐Ÿ˜ญ.
Pips ๐Ÿ˜› walks in "fresh as a daisy"Embarrassed but old habits die hard๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•... she begins her lectures๐Ÿคฃ when Ram begs her to allow him one tablet๐Ÿ˜† and relentlessly turns the "Punjab da puttar" into "Peter da puttar"๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† bread, omlette, juice๐Ÿ˜ƒ  while continuing to taunt him ๐Ÿคฃ..goluji welcome to 'marriage hood'๐Ÿ˜ˆ ... the best part for me was "did u brush your teeth"๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† pips he is 40 not 4๐Ÿ˜ƒ
 
You are bang on Zuby, a simple scene made superbly hillarious by ram and sakshi...am running out of adjectives tooEmbarrassed
 
Sharma house ๐Ÿฅฑ๐Ÿฅฑ๐Ÿฅฑ get over it guys...your bahu/ship's doll is not worth it๐Ÿคข if that was not enough madam snow white too shows up for offering her condolences only to get snubbed by all and sundry๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†but does manage to bag a trump card to keep PriAm apart nutz and her BIG FAT MOUTH๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก literally๐Ÿคฃ
 
Ram in his office and enter Vikky boy๐Ÿ˜› Zubes u had it all today๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Vikram is stumped๐Ÿ˜ฒ as his friend is not taking tablets b coz he promised priya EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed how sweet is that๐Ÿ˜› now now... viks aisa mauka chodega ๐Ÿ˜‰ he teases Ram about being in love with Pips and golu swallows a pill only to prove him wrong๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† by the way that coin he tossed and put a cup on was done before i went on 2 vacations...koi safaayi nahi hoti kya golu's table ki๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
 
nightime at kapoor mansion๐Ÿ˜› wah wah epi began with morning PriAm and now ends with night PriAm...ye ho kya raha hai๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜†
golu proves once again the fact that men can never lie to a woman๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† the way he exagerates about Pip's being the reason for his relief from headache sure makes her sense "daal mein kuch nahi bahut kuch kaala hai"๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† loved the way Pips gave him a "yeah whatever look" cut him short and asked him bluntly how many tablets he took๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
golu plays his cuteness cardEmbarrassed and pleads guilty ๐Ÿ˜” but no... Pips feels highly offended at being lied to and does her phamus 'blanky tucked under her arm ๐Ÿ˜›walk out' swearing she would never sleep with a liar๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...oye madam soch le, aisa hai toh u would soon be homeless...your sasural is filled with liars๐Ÿคข (kyon ki dadi to nazar nahi aate aaj kal๐Ÿ˜’)
Sakshi was just too good in this scene with her muttering and mumbling and pretending to be very cross but finally hiding a smile calling him "tablet kapoor" once again๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
OMG golu misses PipsEmbarrassed but pretends he is more concerned that she would be scared of sleeping alone...oh i missed this hand holding scene๐Ÿ˜...so he walks up to her. the sleeping beauty notices her prince charming checking on herEmbarrassed but knowing too well his intention teases him about his 'night wandering'๐Ÿค” poor golu gets annoyed and tells he would wander around the whole night as it was his house, Pips double checks with him and then picks up her bedding and nonchalantly walks back into their bedroom telling the bed would be free now๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† 
 
avi๐Ÿ˜› it is golu now who is hit by "Hurricane Pips"๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ and he swears by her blanket that she would drive him crazy one day
 
eeeooowww the evil trio... watching all this๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข and plotting as usual on how to keep PriAm apart๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก good luck guys the more you try the better for us . nice precap๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† golu trying to make amends and pips teasing him still๐Ÿ˜...
 
lovely update zuby and take a big hug from me๐Ÿค— 
sowwie girls...maria, avi, maris, kinnu, sai, sriB and the rest, will try to be more in the forum from now on ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and this has nothing to do with Mrs.D๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
 
 
Edited by chithoo - 12 years ago

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