Her complete submission-#5 lnk Thread 6

Posted: 12 years ago

I am really thankfull to all of you due to whose support, likes and comments I am opening the new thread for this FF.
 
Thanks and 🤗 to all of you.
 
Story so Far
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Maan comes to stay in Geet's house to build up his career and get a family love at the age of 16 as he is completely broken due to losing his parents.
 
He was Geet's good friend but due to the situation he has completely changed. His complete concentration his on his career and he don't let anything other effect him. While he is Geet's house Geet starts falling in love with him, she can feel his pain and admires him for his dedication and hard work. She wants to sooth him.
 
But Maan starts getting effected by Geet's presence, she effects him badly and thus he tries to keep her away from himself. And in that process he use harsh ways and words towards her. Maan's ego also doesn't like him getting effected by Geet and he starts getting angry on her whenever she approaches him and uses hurting words. Geet is so much in love with him that she takes them all.
 
Maan leaves home for his career and re-establish his family bussiness while Geet goes to college to pursue higher studies. They meet after along time in Geet;s sisters marraige and some ccircumstances happens then and family start looking for Geet's Match which Geet doesn't like at all. She knows Maan doesn't love her but she has given herself to Maan.
 
Maan gets restless that Geet will be married to someone else and he comes and proposes to Geet and they immediatly get married.But Maan ego is not liking the fact that he have to bend in front of Geet to make her marry him. And this ego of his starts giving a silent torture to Geet. his behaviour towards her keep breaking her from within slowly but his humiliation doesn't stop and Geet starts going away from Maan while he starts falling for her charm but wont accept. One day Maan says something so harsh that the already broken Geet breaks down completely and her love for Maan goes in Remorse.
 
Geet decides to go to London for 3 months on office appointemnt and it was then that Maan realises how much he loved Geet and also how much pain he has Given her, still not knowing how much broken she was.
 
He plans to fix everything once Geet is back but when Geet comes back she is all changed. She have decided to keep away from Maan so that he is not able to break her again but Maan wants to repent. He tries hard but Geet is not giving him any chance, she is confused with his new behaviour and feels it is all fake.
 
Both are in pain. Geet decides to Go to her parents house for 10 days, Maan does not want her to go but he feels he has no right to stop her.
 
Geet goes to her parents house but without Maan but Maan cannot take it this pain and in frunstartion crushes the glasses and cuts his whole hand badly to feel the physical pain... Geet feels restless and have intition that there is something wrong with Maan... she rushes to him at night... Maan is surprised to see her back but Geet is all angry on him for doing this to himself. She is badly pained to see his pain but hide her pain in terms of anger...
 
Maan feels sad to see her in pain but tries to make her happy by making light talks... Geet doesn't show any melting but takes proper care of him and leaves for her home again after two days...
 
He tries to gift her again but she throws it in bin to unmask him and bring his anger out... but Maan is not angry... she later feel bad for doing this with him
 
there Maan reaches her home after 2-3 days and is lost to see his beautiful wife... he tries to get intimate and Geet also looses them but soon the reality stuck them and Geet again talks harshly with him... Maan feels the reason for her rudness... he feels guilty... geet is restless whole night for speaking bad with Maan... Maan decides to give some space to Geet... though he will keep trying to bring happiness in her life...
 
He somehow took her signatures for the new venture which he is starting for her.
 
Thus starts the series pf gifts, flower boquets and sweet notes from Maan to Geet... but she always receives them in his absence... geet keeps his gifts safely without opening them.
 
But they never discuss about anything together... Maan is waiting for Geet to say something so that he can confess his fault but Geet is not giving him any chance...
 
Months pass this way... one day again Maan looses his patience again and badly hurts himself in Gym... Geet again gets intution and find Maan in Gym in that condition... she is upset, pained and again angry on him... but she herself nurses him and takes care of him... Maan again feel guilty of making her go thru all this...he listens quietly to all her scolding... Geet is startting to feel weak within again for him but she does not show him... she is in fear that if he knows she is weak he will break her again...
 
Then after few days Maan have the party launch for his new venture but Geet does not know about it and goes to Yash's b'day party but when she comes to know how much humiliation Maan have to go thru because of her she comes back to support him...
 
They together go to press conference and take everyone on their side...
 
Geet now thinks that if she does not change her attitude with Maan he will keep on harming himself... He staking his reputation for her was a big thing... she realizes that he is doing all this as she has changed her behaviour towards him and that she did because she started having expectation...
 
Now once again she decides to live for Maan and not herself and love him without expectation...
 
Maan on other hand decide to give her all happiness in life...
 
Geet slowly wants to forget her fear of futre and wants to concentrate on present which is the most beautiful time in her life as Maan is showering all his love and attention to her. Maan is still guilty and decides to get close to Geet only after winning her trust back.
 
He does several things to feel her speacial.
 
They are currently in Darjiling where two of them alone it is getting hard for them to control their desire. But Maan wants to control himself while Geet now badly falling for new gesture of Maan wants to take their relation to next level of their marraige life. Maan makes their anniversary special for Geet who is overwhelmed by his gestures and falls in love with him all over again. They are spending time with each other in Darjeeling and opening up more with each other.
 
Thanks
Anu
 
 
 
 
 
INDEX
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 Part 51

Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
congrats for the new thrad😉
Posted: 12 years ago
congrats for the new thread !!! update soon 
Posted: 12 years ago
me waiting
pls update soon...

Posted: 12 years ago
Congrats on new thread.. Update soon.. ðŸ˜Š

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