New ff MAUSAM love in seasons updated16/3 page7

I am writing a new ff called mausam. It has gohem and raji both. It will be a journey of all four of them from their childhood to the the time they fall in love lose their love and how they get it back again.

comments and criticizm welcome. If you want a pm then press like and i will send out one. Edited by vibz88 - 12 years ago

The harsh summer sun was wearing him down but he would not give up.he had accepted the challenge to beat these kids in football.he had come to his mom s village like every year for his summer holidays and this was game had been the trend every summer vacation.he always considered himself superior to every one.he was AHEM MODI. He was the boy who had the biggest birthday parties the best sports shoes the best and latest video games.no one could dare beat him at any thing.he always won he was always first in everything he had ever done or participated in.these kids could never learn every wear these village kids would gang up on him and try to defeat him but would miserably fail.that was the price for challenging ahem modi.he had turned thirteen this year and this dint excite him anymore.he dint like coming to this dirty muddy place where there was no ac tv and all the luxuries.he had to pass time by reading story books and comics but he had finished all of them.he needed a change.he loved spending time with his mom and nani. He knew that he was his mom s favourite and he always used to get what he desired.his own sister kinjal was jealous of him.but right now he was jealous of his own cousin jigar who had been sent to summer camp.he would do anything to trade places with him though and he knew so would jigar. His mom and nani treated him like a rajkumar (prince )but all his friends had gone to exotic vacations for the summer and would come back and show off while he was trapped in this hot place.


Jigar hated his father.it was oly coz of him that he was forced to come to this pathetic summer camp.it was a total waste of summer holidays he could have got up late lazed around watched all his favourite cartoons and play all ahem bhais latest video games his heart desired like he did every summer when bhai used to go to his nani s house.but this summer all his dreams were crashed when his dad had told him he would be attending this camp for a month.a month without his parents was enough to bring tears in his eyes he had begged and pleaded not to go but his dad had not agreed at all.he had gone crying to his mom and asked her how could dad take such a harsh decision of sending him away for a month dint they love him?was this because he had not been able to give exams this year as he was not well and had to repeat the same class again?his mom had wiped his tears and reassured him that they loved him and it was nothing to do with school he was being sent to learn discipline.jigar knew there was no way out of the situation he had to attend the camp now usually he could get his way with his mom but once his mom had formed an opinion about something or somebody nobody could change it.he had packed with a heavy heart and now he was here in front of this camp all alone with his huge rucksack.his dad had left him till the gate and gone back .he had to enter this strange new place all alone.


And and and YES THATS A GOAL ahem screamed THIS IS HOW IT IS DONE.ahem turned around and smirked at the other kids. He picked his ball and decided to go back to his nani s house.he knew he would be greated at the door with a cold glass of lemon juice but today he was going to throw a tantrum and would ask for his favourite cococola.he knew that everybody always fulfilled his tantrums. No one ever say no to him        Edited by vibz88 - 12 years ago

Suddenly a stone hit him and he turned around to see who dare hit him.a small girl wearing a dirty frock and had tied her hair in two plaits glared at him.the girl came running to him and hit him with her small fist and screamed gadheda (donkey)what do you think of yourself? You think you are very good at this game with the ball why dont you play mein tumhe dhool chataungi (i will make sure you bite dust)
ahem :eh bandari (female monkey )you will play with us boys and you want to challenge me?go home and play with your dolls dont irritate me go.she tried snatching his ball but when she could not make him release it she bit his hand ahem could not bear the sharp sting and lost the grip on the ball for a moment. The girl snatched his football and ran away called the other kids and the whole group ran away the gal who was the youngest looked like their leader.the seven year old twit turned showed him her tongue and ran from there.

Ahem reached home in a fowl mood and threw his shoes and refused to eat and drink anything. Finally after his mom pampered him a lot he told her that he would eat his fav dhokla.his mom agreed to make it for him and asked him to freshen up and come down as the pandit ji would come in some time to give the list of items necessary for tomorrows puja.ahem changed his clothes finished his prayers and went in the hall and to his suprise the ball thief was sitting happily on HIS mom s lap while she was feeding her dhokla which was supposed to be made for him.his mom turned to the pandit and said your daughter gopi is really very cute panditji. Ahem was furious to see his mom petting and feeding the girl who stole his ball called him a gadheda and bit him. He strode towards them.


Jigar was really sad he had to get up early now exercise regularly and learn to play a few sports.he hated physical activities he was not really good at them and he lost everytime to his ahem bhai that dint help either.but he lost at everything not oly to his ahem bhai but to everyone he was an average student bad at games and really shy he could never makes friends easily.how would he survive this one month he had no idea.he struggled to hold his huge bag and started to go to the camp incharge.suddenly two boys came running towards him and one of them banged into him and he fell down.both the boys stopped and started laughing at his state.they called all sorts of dirty names to insult him and jigar had tears in his eyes.suddenly a plump angel in a lime green dress came to his rescue she glared at the bully s and screamed YOU WANT TO INSULT SOMEONE LETS HAVE A MATCH THEN. I will fight you. She flew and landed on one of the bully the coz was on the ground and the plump girl was throwing punches like an expert and abusing at top speed.he had never heard such curses from a boy in the eleven years of his existence but this girl uttered them without hesitation.the other bully ran away from the scene the tennis ball then got up and kicked the guy who had laughed at him and came near him and gave him her hand.he got up with her help she looked at him and gave him a tissue to wipe his tears.she looked like a terror herself thank god she dint insult him for crying when she saw him struggling with his bag she lifted it with one hand and started walking with him and said i will walk you till the camp incharge s office.he thanked his lucky stars now no one could pick on him again. When they reached the office she dropped his bag and advised him to stay out of trouble and when she was about to go she screamed i am rashi and you are...?


This is the first encounter between gohem and raji let me know how you feel about it      Edited by vibz88 - 12 years ago

That's a sweet storyline.  Nice introduction.  Can imagine the girls as little tomboys and the two rich kids, ahem being so self assured and stuck up and jigar hating having to do anything active.  Look forward to more.

vibha nice start dear...very interesting and very different...
oh little gopi is so brave in this and rashi helping jigar lol wonderful dear
loved the story...update soon

Cute 😊 Loved it.. 👏

wonder start vibz...love how uve introduced all the characters...like how gopi seems to have a fun and free chidhood...

 a different and sweet imagination...liked it Vibha😊...would like to see how it turns up and how they grow up and become friends.😊...Gopi seems to tackle Ahem in your story right from the beginning😆

Amazing start Cant wait to read the next part pleas pm me when you Update

great start!!! cant wait for the next update👏