Tum jaha..Main Waha ( Dakshna FF) part 4

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lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys

Gham se bahar aane ka one way I know FF's...iss liye😉

Back ground of story

Daksh is head over heels in love❤️ with naina but has not yet realised this fact.He is going through the after effects of falling in love for first time😆😆...thinking of naina all the time..not able to concentrate on work and other matters😲. na bhook ,hain na pyas😉, hain na neend aati hain.🥱..hamara dakshu darling confused hain ki mere saath ye kya ho raha hain😲

On other side naina is completely unaware of dakshu ka this condition.

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One day

Daksh in office...

Kaam main maan nahi lagraha tha..kyunki kisi ki bahut yaad aa rahi hain tho😆..naina ko phone lagata hain

Lekin switched off.😲..Lil worried phir se try kiya..phir switched off.😲..

Daksh; arey; switched off!...kya karu?.thinks for a while..he calls up aku...

and then aku drops bomb ki naina darjeeling chali gayi kuch zaroori kaam aagaya..iss liye suddenly chali gayi...kab aayegi pata nahi...

Daksh shocked.😲..😲; kab gayi?lekin usne mujhe bataya nahi ki woh..aise kaise achanak chali gayi..sab teek hain na...

Aku.; usko call aaya tha apni mom se iss liye.. ek gante pehle hi nikal gayi shayad station pahuch gayi hogi😛

Daksh; acha!..kitne baje ka train hain..😕

Aku; pata nahi dada...

Dakshu ; teek hain phir..phone rakhdiya

Dakshu already started missing naina..tho sab kaam chodkar bhaag chala station...beech main traffic jam

Daksh; shit; ye traffic jam bhi abhi hona tha😡😡..agar naina ko miss kardiya tho upar se phone bhi nahi lag raha...damn it..😡

Phir traffic jam clear hua..dakshu gaadi ko dauda tha hain..reaches station ...goes to enquiry and finds about train..runs to the platform...badluck 😕he missed the train in fraction of second..😕...dakshu runs behind train..lekin train chala gaya.

Daksh train ki taraf dekh raha hain aur uski aakhon se small tears roll down😭 and he says; I will miss u naina...

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Sadly he reaches home...poora mooh pulakar as if he lost everything...

Ayi as usual khaatirdaari karke..dakshu ko coffee deti..

Daksh looks at coffee and remembers naina.😍.thinking of time they had coffee together..*sigh*..he doesnt feel like drinking...he leaves the cup moves towards his room..just then uski nazar padi naina ki room par...Felling lil sad proceeds into his room..change karke...

He comes and sits on bed...aur apne aap main baat kar raha hain

How can she just go away like that? didnt she feel the need to call him once and tell him that she's going...didnt even think for a second ki mera kya hoga..

Actually mujhe kya hogaya hain 😲..kyu itna upset ho raha hoon ..wapas tho aayegina..permanently thodina chali gayi.😊.jab aayegi tab uska ache se khabar lunga.himmat tho dekho mujhe chod kar chali gayi..

Next min

apne ghar hi tho gayi hain..phir mujhe itna bhura kyu lag raha hain.😭..kyu?aisa kyu lag raha hain ki ..bahut jayada yaad aa rahi hain uski.😕.samaj nahi aa rha hain ki maine aise kyu ho raha hoon😲...oh naina pls jaldi wapas aajavo..❤️.

Iss tarah Apne khayalon main khoya rehtha hain aur dinner time hogaya call aagaya..

Dining table

Ayi sabko khaana lagati hain lekin hamari hero ki naar tho usko bhagal main waali chair par hain jaha par naina bet thi hain.😍..just then landline main call aata hain...

aur ayi jaakar call utati hain..

Ayi; excited; naina beta...

Bas dakshu sunte hain uska chehre main 1000 waat glow aajata hain..😃

ayi; acha ..thodi dher main pahuchegi...

ayi is speaking just then daksh comes running there and

says ayi mujhe de snatches away the phone...😲

daksh; hello naina..kya naina..mujhe bataya nahi..main kitna pareshan ho raha tha kitne baar phone try kiya ..lil gusaa aur phone switched off kyu hain.aur tum..

Naina ; daksh woh..actually mom ne bulaya tho..aur mera charge...

Charge kahatm hogaya aur phone disconnect hojaata hain

Daksh; naina..hello naina...naina..hello..gusse se woh phone ko neeche rakdeta hain and turns back and sees ki everybody is looking at him..all p-zoo..he realises ki his reaction was not normal iss liye..😲

Daksh; ayi woh disconnect hogaya tho...(mumbling)

Ayi; uspe kyu chilla raha tha...woh thi itne achanak nikle ki..charge bhi nahi tha phone ka maine hi kaha off karne ke liye..gahr pahucthe hi phone karegina..chintu tu bhi na..chal khaana khaa...

Dakshu chup chaap aakar khaana khaa leta hain jaldi jaldi..

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LadyMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

aku, wah! kya bomb hai?👏 poor dakshu😔

Dont ever stop writing ur FFs lucky...they are just too too good😃 r u gonna make it a happy ending?

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LadyMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

2nd part is so damn funny!!!!!!!!!!!🤣🤣

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Neethu

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Posted: 12 years ago

🤗so far i was too upset. but now... how easily u brought smile on my face??? u took me to the old golden cute days of SSBN. thanks alot dear! luv u...!!! 😳😳

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lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Dinner khatam...

Daksh in his room..still wondering y he reacted in such a way.😲.he remembers the way he snatched the phone from his mother's hand.😲.his desperation to just hear her voice😲 and spk few words with her.😛..his disappointment when phone got disconnected...

He sleeps on bed..but still not able to sleep...Lots of thoughts running in his mind..

Daksh;Pehli baar itni bechaini ho rahi hain..kyu? kahi mujhe..pyar?❤️

In next min

Nahi nahi..main aur pyar..kabhi nahi..; shayad naina ki aadat padgayi hain iss liye ajeeb lag raha hain bas..kal tak sab teek ho jayega..😛

He comforts himself and then gets up to drink water...jug empty..goes down to get water and happens to hear conversation of ayi and shyamal in hall

Ayi; mujhe naina kii bhaut chinta ho rahi hain shyamal...pata nahi itne achanak..sab kuch teek hogana..

Shyamal; vaini..aap fikr kyu kar rahi hain..kal subha jaroor phone karegi thak gayi hogina..issliye nahi kiya hoga...waise bhi aap aise kyu soch rahi hain..ye bhi tho ho saktha hain ki..naina ki maa uske ke liye koi ristha dekhliya ho..shayad ladke se milne ke liye bhulaya hoga..😆😆

Heraing this unknowingly dakshu's hand tighten over the jug very hard😡..aur uske hrt main iss baar gira atom bomb😆..😆.LOL..

Ayi; arey haan ye bhi tho ho saktha hain..

Daksh ka dimaag bandh hogaya hain.🤢.Matlab he is nt able to concentrate on the remaining conversation...He starts walking towards him room with empty jug like lost somewhere with the words of his kaki running through his mind😕😕

He puts jug on table..sits on bed and then his thoughts and hr8 start racing

Naina marrying some body else?💔...how can she??😲

he never thought the possibility of some other guy being in naina's life other than him and he never had or may be he will never have anybodyelse in his life.except naina. but now??

He takes mobile and goes on dialing naina's number like mad though its saying switched off..he just want to confirm its not for some match making naina's mother called her...but no luck...tired he puts down his phone...impatiently walking here and there in room..just then the thought comes...

What if naina never comes back..???🥺😲😭

Next day morning he is on his way to darjeeling...😉

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LadyMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh lucky, poor thing! why give him so much tension?😳😊

And kaki, nice timing... u just blew up dakshu's heart completely!

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lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Bharadwaj mansion

Just assume ki anjali accepted naina as her daughter and she wanted to spend some time with her..iss liye she asked naina to come back to darjeeling for few days...Naina ko ye baat wapas aane ke baad hipata chala ...

Tho now everything is fine b/w anjali and naina...😛

Next day morning...the same morning when daksh started his journey to darjeeling...😛

After getting ready naina comes down for brk fast...anjali is already waiting for naina

Naina; goodmorning mamma..😛

Anajli; good morning beta.😛..

Both sit down for brk fast...just then naina remembers she forget to call ayi..

she rushes back to her room to get her mobile which is in charge...and comes back

. She switches on her mobile and is about to call ayi...uke mobile main ek ek karke..loads of msg's starts pouring in beep beep karke nearly 25 msg's..😲.aur kiske hamare hero ke...😆😆

Surprised Naina opens msg's...msg's like kaha ho?😲 phone kyu switched off hain??😡..I am missing u badly..jaldi wapas aajavo😕..kyu bulaya tumhari momma ne😲..kab laut rahi ho😛..tum teek ho na.😕.ek baar call karo..Main wait karunga.😛..mujhe bina bataye kyu chali gayi.😡.etc etc...'

Naina; oh god!..ayi ko nahi pehle na daksh ko phone karna chahiye..

Anjali ; daksh?...😲

Naina ; haan daksh...ayi ka chota beta...and she goes on telling about daksh..ki woh aisa hain waisa hain..how they become friends...and all that and anjali notices the happiness on naina's face when she is speaking about him...😛

Naina; Bahut khayal rakhtha hain mera...aap hi dekho 25 msg's beja usne iss liye kyunki maine usse call nahi kiya..ye daksh bhi na...abhi usse phone karti hoon warna phir se KP banjayega..😡.nahinahi ab tak tho bangaya hoga...smiles and calls daksh..lekin iss baar dakshu ka phone not reachable aa raha hain.😕.

Naina goes on trying...gives a brk when anjali asks her to come and have brk fast...brk fast ke beech main phone baja tho..

Naina; daksh ka hi hoga...jumps and runs near phone..lekin customer care ka hain..disapponited she sits back..

Anjali; naina...daksh..tumhara best friend hain?? Naina nods her head saying yes

Anjali completes her brk fast and gets up and says; R u sure ki woh sirf acha dost hain usse se jyada kuch bhi nahi..❓

Naina ; surprised by question; aap ne aisa kyu poocha...❓

Anjali; bas aise hi lekin mera question ke baare main sochna jaroor..and she leaves from there...naina padgayi soch main..😲.Brk fast kahtam karke naina ayi ko call karti hain and she asks about daksh comes to know that he's out of town for some case...

she goes back to her room and reads all the msg's sent by daksh once again...and stops at msg saying..

I am missing u badly...pls come back soon..pls...I miss u a lot naina...

Naina ; I miss u too daksh...miss u too...

Tho iska matlab dono ko hogaya hain pyar sirf baaki hain ikraar..😉..😉..very soon..😉

DEkhthe dekhthe raat hogaya..

Naina; phir se ek baar daksh ko call karti hoon..

is baout to call daksh once again..tabhi radha aunty aati hain aur kehti hain ki koi aaya naina se milna.

Naina ; mujhse milne yaha?😲..comes down...sees somebody sitting in sofa..He turns back...lol hamara dakshu..

Naina shocked excited..daksh ki chehre par 1000 watts smile naina ko dekh kar.😃..

Naina; daksh..tum...comes running and hugs him..🤗.tight..dakshu ka hrt brt ek min rukh gaya phir zor zor se dhadkne laga.❤️..dhak dhak...itnepyar se ladki ne hug kiya woh bhi kaun..lol..

Dakshu slowly rises his hand to hug her back.😛..

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Edited by lucky.m - 12 years ago

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LadyMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Neethu

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Posted: 12 years ago

yaar.. just read it.. oh... dreaming dreaming dreaming... 😍😍😍 how wonderful ur FFs r...!!! 👏👏 i loooved it.. u gave me our smart Dakshu back...!!!! umhaa... 😳🤗

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