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Posted: 12 years ago
As today is Valentines Day,am posting this self composed poem of mine about my feelings for him...😳. This poem is just just just for him.Tell me if u like itπŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


             (Suggest me a title tooπŸ˜†)              
 

       filmon ke hero ab lubhate nahi hai;
       sapnon ke rajkumar ji behlate nahi hai,
       jab se dil mein mere tera khayal hai aaya;
       tere siva kuch aur khayal mujhe aate nahi hai.


    time pass ke zariye ab ubau ho gaye;
    aisa laga bekhayali ke bhi paon ho gaye,
    dost kehne lage ki tum ab humari sunti nahi;
    aur hame laga ki dost hamare pakau ho gaye.


    computer to jaise apna dharma ho gaya hai;
    tere post padna jaise niyam ho gaya hai,
    tere lafzon ne is kadar baandh diya mujhko;
    apne man ki sunna bhi ab kam ho gaya hai.


    tujhe dekhne ki hasrat mein yeh nain jagte hai;
    teri taraf hi mere man ke teer bhagte hai,
    jab meri baton ka nahi milta koi jawab;
    to har pal baichani se bas screen taakte hai.


    jane anjaane tu ek taakat, ek hasin ehsaas hai;
    mere dil ki baichani ka kya tumhe andaaz hai,
   kya  tere liye bhi hungi main utni hi zaroori;
    meri is zindagi mein tu jitna khas hai. 


    hai bharosa zaroor milenge, waqt ke kisi galiyare me;
    tab tak tera aks khojungi, sundar chand-sitaron me,
    tujhe milne ki rahengi hasrat zindagi bhar mere man mein;
    aur yahin dua karungi har tuthte tare mein.😍

Thank uπŸ˜†πŸ˜›


   

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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: -Naiina-



       filmon ke hero ab lubhate nahi hai;
       sapnon ke rajkumar ji behlate nahi hai,
       jab se dil mein mere tera khayal hai aaya;

       tere siva kuch aur khayal mujhe aate nahi hai.

Dis para is really awww one πŸ˜†



    time pass ke zariye ab ubau ho gaye;
    aisa laga bekhayali ke bhi paon ho gaye,
    dost kehne lage ki tum ab humari sunti nahi;

    aur hame laga ki dost hamare pakau ho gaye.

paon n pakau🀣 πŸ€£ its hilarious  


    computer to jaise apna dharma ho gaya hai;πŸ˜†
    tere post padna jaise niyam ho gaya hai,☺️
    tere lafzon ne is kadar baandh diya mujhko;☺️

    apne man ki sunna bhi ab kam ho gaya hai.

hawww πŸ˜² itni paagal hogayi ho πŸ˜†



    tujhe dekhne ki hasrat mein yeh nain jagte hai;
    teri taraf hi mere man ke teer bhagte hai,
    jab meri baton ka nahi milta koi jawab;

    to har pal baichani se bas screen taakte hai.

🀣



    jane anjaane tu ek taakat, ek hasin ehsaas hai;☺️
    mere dil ki baichani ka kya tumhe andaaz hai,☺️
   kya  tere liye bhi hungi main utni hi zaroori;
    meri is zindagi mein tu jitna khas hai. 


    hai bharosa zaroor milenge, waqt ke kisi galiyare me;
    tab tak tera aks khojungi, sundar chand-sitaron me,
    tujhe milne ki rahengi hasrat zindagi bhar mere man mein;
    aur yahin dua karungi har tuthte tare mein.😍

Thank uπŸ˜†πŸ˜›


   

Thnk u naina for sharin the poem with us if u have an fb account den post it on Hasan's wall na 

wait i wil do it 

n it seems like u r madlessly n hopelessly in luv wd Gautam πŸ˜†

but great job luvd d poem πŸ‘ πŸ‘

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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww so shweet. Naina you's the best. This is so beautiful and I couldn't agree more with you. I wish I could write so well, but I make up for it by making siggies.
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!! loved it!!

m Soooper happy today...

will share my views tomorrow pakka..
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: arsh4life

Thnk u naina for sharin the poem with us if u have an fb account den post it on Hasan's wall na 

wait i wil do it 

n it seems like u r madlessly n hopelessly in luv wd Gautam πŸ˜†

but great job luvd d poem πŸ‘ πŸ‘



Thank u Thank uπŸ˜†
And I think I am in love with Hasan😳 rather than Gautam...and yes hopelessly,bt stillπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
I have written this poem jst thinking about Hasanβ˜ΊοΈπŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: khota_sikka_sri

Aww so shweet. Naina you's the best. This is so beautiful and I couldn't agree more with you. I wish I could write so well, but I make up for it by making siggies.

 



Awesome siggy yaar...woww..its so beautiful
And if u can't write,I cant make siggies as wellπŸ˜†
Aur har ek fan jaruri hota hai...so u and me,both are neededπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: jasminedayal

wow!! loved it!!

m Soooper happy today...

will share my views tomorrow pakka..



Thank uπŸ˜›
Teri raai bahut maayne rakhti hai coz u r a real writer na..
Tujhe pasand aa gayi to achi hi likhi hogiπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey naina 

you know hasan has liked d poem i asked my friend to post this link on his wall he posted it 

n now when i checked it hasan has liked the link maybe he has read d poem n has liked itπŸ˜› 

You lucky gal πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: -Naiina-



Awesome siggy yaar...woww..its so beautiful
And if u can't write,I cant make siggies as wellπŸ˜†
Aur har ek fan jaruri hota hai...so u and me,both are neededπŸ˜ƒ

 
 
That's true. We both need each other and we're both needed as fans. πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok...I will paste his reply here -

58 minutes ago

  • naina...naina...naina...!

    ur soo sweet...
    thanks..
    i do sometimes read ur posts...you and sri khota sikka...
    makes me smile...god bless u...

    feel free to share gautam pics on the forum ..
    tc..
    hasan..


Edited by -Naiina- - 12 years ago