my first OS: love hate#updated Part 4-page 11

Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys, i am not a newbie...i am an active member of IF n of this forum but have made this new id just to see the reactions of my first OS...i am sorry i can't reveal who i am...

just read this OS,if u like it, do comment n i will continue n tell u who i am otherwise i will forget it as a bad dream n close the account😭
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part 1

next day after arhi intense fight scene...

arnav was as usual busy on laptop with work, but loads of things were going around his head...yesterday he lost his cool again with khushi. he can't understand why he does these things to her which hurt him more than her. unintentionally but he had hurt her n no one can deny or justify his actions. his self control is slipping away day by day, he cant hold the truth any longer, its just getting ugly. she has broken his trust, she is house wrecker than how can she feel so strongly for his di n what was all that on holi...

arnav's mind was on utter mess when someone knocked on his door.

Arnav: come in

hari prakash with first aid box entered the room.

HP: arnav bhaiya, khushiji asked me to bring first aid box

khushi's hand was hurt because of his careless slamming of door, he has tried to help her but she refused it. this all was his fault, this can not be continued physically or mentally, it is torturing both of them.

arnav: keep it. i will tell her.

HP left room without intruding further.

arnav saw the first aid box that was kept on bed...how could he hurt her and that too physically,even unintentionally,but it does not justify anything, all things are getting messy, everything is becoming blur, not only literally but also significantly...he doesn't know anything anymore, what to trust? whom to trust?
his heart doesn't for a second believe that khushi can do something like this or his brain who screams what all he saw on terrace is true.

suddenly he realized that he needs to find khushi n give the first aid box to her.

just then the door opened again...

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how was it? this is my first OS, should i continue? am i really very bad?be honest, i will continue if u all say so or will forget about it. 
do comment n tell me about it.
thanks  

Part 2 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2904908&TPN=3

Part 3 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2904908&TPN=6

Part 4 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2904908&TPN=11
Edited by arhicommited - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Hello, It;s really good. Please continue.
Awesome.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈ
Loved it.
Looking forward to the next update.
Thanks.πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
OMG, six comments and twelve likes...its like a dream, i will surely continue...thankyou so much, this all gives so much motivation...thanks once againπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Its really nice..i liked it!!!
plzz continue :)
Posted: 12 years ago
please continue  really interesting 
Posted: 12 years ago
😊 continue .. sounds promising !
Posted: 12 years ago
luved it continue soon and pm when u do 
Posted: 12 years ago
Who is it? Meant at the door hee hee. Pls continue
Posted: 12 years ago
got to know who is on d door...

do continueπŸ˜ƒ

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