OS:Take me out! (pg. 12 part 2A, part 2B pg.16) - Page 6

Posted: 11 years ago
I loved it...completely different idea...and well written as well...khushi's thoughts and behaviour were very well projected...waitng for the next one...
Posted: 11 years ago
too good and very different, please continue
Posted: 11 years ago
wowww...luved it to the core...quite different...
but very lovely...pls update it soon...n pls accept my buddy reqst...
Edited by -vaidehi- - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago

i had already made a post...i making it once more...after reading it again...

really..outstanding os...so that each words has life...
 awesome...awesome...awesome...
Edited by -vaidehi- - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it... maybe he told aman to bid for la and aman misunderstood... any way looking forward to what happen next
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by test2test2


Is there a part 2. This is amazing.
Please do continue, even if for 1 more part to give proper ending.


Hey yeah there will be. 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by -vaidehi-


i had already made a post...i making it once more...after reading it again...

really..outstanding os...so that each words has life...
 awesome...awesome...awesome...

Aw thank you 🤗
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by samiya.tas


I loved it... plz update soon... nice concept

btw plz update retribution... dying to know what happens next😊

Thanks and yep that is another thing on my agenda. I might go mad and don't even have that many works running simultaneously at the moment! 😆
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow. Nice.
Continue soon. :D

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by kawkabon


that was awesome. like seriously loved it. especially laad governer having his Bluetooth removed via surgery lol.
 definitly waiting for part 2.
u shud get bored mre often if this is what u cum up wid.😛
thanx 4 pm😊

OK I literally love you man! You always comment such lovely comments on everything I write-my trustee reader. Remind me to dedicate a chapter to you next time. 🤗THANK YOU SO SO MUCH!

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