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LEAP PREDICTONS ,, MAA (PART 15 page 19)

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PART 5 : PAGE 4
PART 6 : PAGE 5
PART 7 : PAGE 6
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PART 9 : PAGE 8
part 10 : page 10
part 11 : page  12
part12 :page 14
pART 13 : page 16
PART 14 : PAGE 17
Last Part [15] : page 19 


Hey frnds...
for a long time i was not getting any new story about raya,,, but after i heard about the leap track
i got a story track... hope guys will enjoy

Episode starts when priya opened Dr.Patil's bag for the medicine... she took out two of his books and a photoframe out but she gave no attention to 
them at all . Taking out the medicines and keeping his things back to the bag she was about to close it when her eyes fell on the bangles ,,  she stoped herself
from closing it and took them out " yeh kangan,dr.patil ki bag mein!!" her eyes fell on the frame,, ''shayadh unki patniki photo hain, dekhu kya !!!hmm ! kya jatah hain!"
she turned the frame and her eyes just could say "what?", she was totaly shocked seeing niharika's snap on his bag,, she decided to ask the matter... she kept those 
things again in the bag, and very disturbed priya made her way in to her father's room...

ON THE Room

Priya entered the room, before she could ask anything " aa!! layie dijie dawai''dr.patil said
priya decided to stay quiet , she stepped a little back and took a snap of dr.patil to reach a mark...
before his arrival he repeated "jaisa ki meine pahele hi kahan ki mein age se visit pe nahin aa paunga to apna kheyal rakhie ga !!"
priya interrupted "kyun??? " 
dr.patil replied " actually mein parsu ke flight se out of town ja raha hun kuch kamse "
priya smelled it fishy... "okay !! thanks doctor"

after the doctor went out she was curious to know his truth but her ways wre stopped by a letter...
shipra asked what th letter consist off !!!
priya replied it to be kartik's termination letter...
obviously shipra made a scene in front that includes smthng which clearly indiactes , why ram is doing this with kartik
priya was realy disgusted of ram and went her office for a clear coversation...

OFFICE 

PRIYA : Mr.kapoor , kyun piche pare hue hain mere bhai ki???

RAM  : hah !!! isliye ayi ho na kyunki kartik ka termination letter ghar paucha hain tumhare

PRIYA : hah ! to apko pata hain , i was right !!!

RAM : tum to galat hi nahin ho sakti na???!!

PRIYA : kyun kar rahe hain ap aisa ????? mere bhai ne...

RAM : just shut up !! kitne baar yeh bologi mujhe , ki mere bhai ne kuch nahin kia and all that,, the fact is that ki jab taq tumhare bhai ke tarafdari meri
         bahen nahin karegin, am goin to blv ur brother, understand !!

PRIYA : kahanse puchhenge natasha ko !! kaha hain natasha ?????

RAM : EXACTLY ., my point...kartik ko kaheti kyun nahin natasha ko wapas karne ke liye...

PRIYA : Mr.kapoor , sunie aap, kartik ko in sab se nikaal layi ye... mein sirf do din mang rahin hun,, apko proof chahie na,, mein lake dungi but plz...

RAM : oH !! shut up !!! Priya yeh mera office hain,, u can leave now...

PRIYA : kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hain ki mein kyun apki khatir apni bhai ka future daao pe laga rahi hun... 
she came out of his cabin and decided not to waste much time...

SHE made her way to JAYESH KARIGARS place

she managed to get the lady of the previous day !!

''arrey sunie bahenji,, mujhe apko kuch dikhana hain'' priya said
the lady replied ... ''haanji kahie''
priya : zara is tazvirr ko dekhie ,, kya aap inhe pahechaanti hain???
lady carefully looked the snap,,, "arrey haan !! yahi to hain,,,,, jayesh karigar "

priya : Kya??????? yeh jayesh karigaar hain...?????
lady : haanji bilkul...
priya : ek ek second... kya aap inhko pahechaanti hain,, ???  (she showed niharika's pic from her cell )
lady : haan !! jani pahechani si to lag rahin hain...
priya : yad ! yad kijie na !!!!!
lady : ek second... yeh bhito yahi raheti thi jayesh ki sath,,, shayadh...haan yeh inki patni hain...
priya :kya??? ap thik to hain na????? yeh kaise inki patni ho sakti hain
lady : haan lagta to aisa hi hain... haan bilkul ,, yeh patni hi hain inka,,,,
priya : thik hain thanx...
priya got disturbed...


SHE WAS WALKING  THROUGH ROAD WHEN A PLAN CAME ON HER HEAD...





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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting please...its nice...they were tending to drag the story line...so this is a kind of relief...thanks๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜›
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Nice story.waiting for d next update.
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๐Ÿ˜ƒ hey this is gr8 ,what a relief  from the actual serial ,thanks take a bow and plz pm me when u update.
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SHE WAS WALKING  THROUGH ROAD WHEN A PLAN CAME ON HER HEAD...

hello ,,, dr.patil??? haan mein sudhir sharma... unki beti bol rahi hun,, mujhe aap se kuch zaroori baat karni thi mere papa ki health ke bare mein
can u plz cme and meet me in front of meriman dhaba...??

PATIL : mujhe koi problem nahin hogi,, lekin aapke papa bilkul thik hain...
priya : jaanti hun !! phirbhi ekbaar ,,,, please...
patil : Okay !!  mein shamko 6 baje aunga... okay ??
Priya : thank you,,, mein pohuch jaungi.. ookay bye...

she went to kapoor mansion

finding neharika near by...she started pretending a call 

haan kise?????? kiski saath ??? jayesh...jayesh karigar???????????
(niharika's way stopped, she started  hearing her call)
kahan??? meriman dhaba ke samne???? thik hain mam mein pahuch jaungi !!???
sham 6 baje na???? thik hain,,, okay bye...

NIHARIKA : priya !!! kiska phone tha???
PRIYA : aapse matlub??
NIHARIKA : priya ... baby dnt act harsh... sirf agar batana chaho to...
PRIYA : ngo mein kuch kam ke liye, kisi jayesh karigar ko contact kia gaya hain...
to mam ne kahan ki agar mein kahu unse ki mein... mrs priya ram kapoor hu,,,, to wo yeh kam kar denge...mein jaun????
NIHARIKA : sure...(yeh jayesh wohi to nahin... jiske bare mein...) priya ? kya wo jayesh bandra mein rahta hain??
PRIYA : aapko kaise pata ?????
NIHARIKA : just a guess...bye...

so u can better get what priya wnted reached its success...

priya reached the place at sharp 6, whre she could find DR.patil already  sitting...
but oh ! shit,,,, she expected niharika to reach before her...but no she was not there...
she waited a bit then  made her way to the doctor...
thanx for coming doctor...

dr.patil : but there is no place to sit mrs.??
mrs.kapoor!...replied priya

patil : okay i know a place nearby... shall we go and have a sit here????

(priya hesiteted first, bcz she wnted to catch bth niharika and patil together... but getting her plan ruined she just said say okay... she now wnted to get
a clear information frm patil now...)
dr.patil took her to a distant place which was a bit interior and lonely than other places...
they wre face to face now...

DR.PATIL : kahie mrs.kapoor... kya kahena chahte hain...

PRIYA : JAYESH KARIGAR KAUN HAIN??????????

DR.PATIL : kaun ho tum ???

PRIYA : PRIYA RAM KAPOOR...apki patni niharika kapoor ki sautele bete ki patni,,kya hain niharika kapoor ki raaz??? kya hain Mr.kapoor aur krishna kapoor ki atit???
      aap mujhe sab sach sach batayenge... abhi isi waqt...


DR.PATIL: yeh baat sach hain... aur aaj mein apko sab kuch sach sach bataunga...

PRIYA : shuru kia jay !!!!

DR.PATIL : niharika meri patni hain..jo...

(SOMEONE covered priya's mouth back with a chlorofrm napkil... and hold her tightly ...priya lost her senses)

when she opened her eyes she found herself on an unkown room and found two known faces 




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Posted: 11 years ago
part 2
SHE WAS WALKING  THROUGH ROAD WHEN A PLAN CAME ON HER HEAD...

hello ,,, dr.patil??? haan mein sudhir sharma... unki beti bol rahi hun,, mujhe aap se kuch zaroori baat karni thi mere papa ki health ke bare mein
can u plz cme and meet me in front of meriman dhaba...??

PATIL : mujhe koi problem nahin hogi,, lekin aapke papa bilkul thik hain...
priya : jaanti hun !! phirbhi ekbaar ,,,, please...
patil : Okay !!  mein shamko 6 baje aunga... okay ??
Priya : thank you,,, mein pohuch jaungi.. ookay bye...

she went to kapoor mansion

finding neharika near by...she started pretending a call 

haan kise?????? kiski saath ??? jayesh...jayesh karigar???????????
(niharika's way stopped, she started  hearing her call)
kahan??? meriman dhaba ke samne???? thik hain mam mein pahuch jaungi !!???
sham 6 baje na???? thik hain,,, okay bye...

NIHARIKA : priya !!! kiska phone tha???
PRIYA : aapse matlub??
NIHARIKA : priya ... baby dnt act harsh... sirf agar batana chaho to...
PRIYA : ngo mein kuch kam ke liye, kisi jayesh karigar ko contact kia gaya hain...
to mam ne kahan ki agar mein kahu unse ki mein... mrs priya ram kapoor hu,,,, to wo yeh kam kar denge...mein jaun????
NIHARIKA : sure...(yeh jayesh wohi to nahin... jiske bare mein...) priya ? kya wo jayesh bandra mein rahta hain??
PRIYA : aapko kaise pata ?????
NIHARIKA : just a guess...bye...

so u can better get what priya wnted reached its success...

priya reached the place at sharp 6, whre she could find DR.patil already  sitting...
but oh ! shit,,,, she expected niharika to reach before her...but no she was not there...
she waited a bit then  made her way to the doctor...
thanx for coming doctor...

dr.patil : but there is no place to sit mrs.??
mrs.kapoor!...replied priya

patil : okay i know a place nearby... shall we go and have a sit here????

(priya hesiteted first, bcz she wnted to catch bth niharika and patil together... but getting her plan ruined she just said say okay... she now wnted to get
a clear information frm patil now...)
dr.patil took her to a distant place which was a bit interior and lonely than other places...
they wre face to face now...

DR.PATIL : kahie mrs.kapoor... kya kahena chahte hain...

PRIYA : JAYESH KARIGAR KAUN HAIN??????????

DR.PATIL : kaun ho tum ???

PRIYA : PRIYA RAM KAPOOR...apki patni niharika kapoor ki sautele bete ki patni,,kya hain niharika kapoor ki raaz??? kya hain Mr.kapoor aur krishna kapoor ki atit???
      aap mujhe sab sach sach batayenge... abhi isi waqt...


DR.PATIL: yeh baat sach hain... aur aaj mein apko sab kuch sach sach bataunga...

PRIYA : shuru kia jay !!!!

DR.PATIL : niharika meri patni hain..jo...

(SOMEONE covered priya's mouth back with a chlorofrm napkil... and hold her tightly ...priya lost her senses)

when she opened her eyes she found herself on an unkown room and found two known faces 




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Posted: 11 years ago
oww...poor priya,...unconcious !!!!!!!!!!!! do update fast...the suspense is too much to bear...but
great thoughts...keep it up...๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome๐Ÿ‘ please continue..
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Please update soon its too good
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really awesome...please continue A S A P...