Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

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Chapter 10: Was that a right step?

Viraat touches  Maanvi 's hand and she quickly wipes her tears. Everyone eat their dinner and go back to their rooms.  Maanvi  sits in front of the dressing table removing her bangles thinking about Diya when  Viraat walks in. He touches her shoulder and she smiles.

Thinking about Diya?

Yes. How did you know.

I know you better than you think I do. So now it's no more my thoughts.

Why should I think of you. You are a part of me.

Viraat  leans towards  Maanvi  when she pushed him.

Go and sleep.

But  Maanvi .

No buts.

Okay fine. Good night

Goodnight

As  Viraat  walks out,

Viraat 

Did you call me

I love you

Love you too

That night, Maanvi  and  Viraat  were thinking about each other.  Maanvi  sits upright and says oh god why can't I sleep. She decides to get some water and goes out of her room. As she walks along the aisle, she suddenly changes her course towards  Viraat 's room. She opens the door slowly and walks in to see  Viraat sleeping. She bends down an strokes his hair. She then gives him a kiss when he smiles.

You were awake won't you

Yes your thoughts are haunting me

The same case here

Maanvi  come let's go to the poolside

At this time?

Come on

Viraat  holds  Maanvi 's hand, picks up the blanket and goes to the poolside recliner. They sit down and  Viraat wraps the blanket around.  Maanvi  leans onto him and they star gaze.
 
Riinng...

Viraat, wake up.

5 minutes Mum.  Maanvi  what are you doing here. I thought you had gone back.

 

Guess we both fell asleep. Now how.

Come on.

Viraat  quickly manages to send  Maanvi  back without anyone noticing. Well that was what he thought. There was a witness who saw that. Vanshika. She had full trust on both of them but she felt everything should happen faster. She walks back to her room and talks to Amar.

At the breakfast table,

Jeevika we will be having a Godhbarai for you next Friday.

Mum what's the need

I never did one for you. Please let me. It will give me peace

Your wish

Well Di we will take care of everything

Of course Shlok. You will have to oversee everything right Chotte

Yes Di

Well  Viraat  after the Godhbarai it will be our turn to oversee your wedding preparations

But Dad

No buts. I have spoken to  Maanvi 's dad and he has agreed.

That's great. So I get to witness Chotte's wedding. It's good that I came.  Maanvi  is blushing now

No Di. I...

U know  Maanvi  I felt the same when I knew I was getting married with my love Viren. So have you planned for your honeymoon?

Di stop pulling her leg

Look Chachu.  Viraat  is supporting  Maanvi  already. Okay Okay. Calm down

Suddenly they hear a voice

Ma Ma
Ma mi

Jeevika turns.

Sorry Diya. I forgot about you.

After breakfast,  Viraat  meets Maanvi at the hallway. They both go to find Amar and Vanshika.

Edited by JasmineShabir - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good part! Continue soon. Thanks for the PM! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
diya is so cute...more cute is de way she say'x Ma ma Ma mi...!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all the parts...truly loved it!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 11: The Confrontation

Dad Mum we need to talk to you.

Viraat come.  Maanvi  you too. Sit down. What is it about?

Ma. We wanted to know why...

Yes Bitiya. Don't be scared.

Mum why are you rushing the marriage suddenly.

Well son. We are really happy to have  Maanvi  as our daughter in law. And we would love to see her in this house soon. That way you too won't have to sneak out to see each other so secretively at the poolside.

But pa it was...

Maanvi . I know what you are going to say next. You are our children and we know you won't do anything wrong. But the societal point of view is different, it is not usual to have unmarried couples under the same roof.

But Dad. You were the one who taught me to be firm in each and every decision. You said that tongues will wag. It only matters if what you think is right and it is indeed right. It looks more like you don't trust...

Viraat  you know well how much your papa trusts you.

But...

No buts. Why  Viraat . Have you forgotten how much papa trusted you. In fact more than anyone could and now you have questioned him. We all love  Maanvi . Everything is fine. Please stop here.

Mum we have decided. Unless we have a solid reason here why the wedding is shifted forward, we will not go on.

Vanshika raises her hand to slap  Viraat  when  Maanvi moves in between. She gets the slap instead.

VANSHIKA.

Pa. it isn't Ma's fault. Ma it was wrong of me to interrupt. I am sorry. But I can't see  Viraat  getting slapped.

 
With that  Maanvi  turns and walks out.

Mum Dad I am really disappointed. I always thought you would share everything with me. But I guess I was wrong.

He then turns and follows suit, leaving Vanshika and Amar. Vanshika sits on the bed and begins weeping

How could I tell  Viraat  the truth. He will die if he knew it.

But one day he has to know like you did Vanshika. But my only concern is that will you take care of  Viraat  as much as I do. Ever since Shlok came, he became much more closer to you than  Viraat . Will you?

How could you ask me such a thing. They are both our sons and are the same to me.

Viraat  must be very upset right.

In  Maanvi 's room,

Viraat  don't feel okay. I know what you are going through. I am here with you okay.

Then why are you packing.

It isn't right for me to trespass the hospitality

But you are family now

But we aren't married

Does that make a difference in the bond we share

Viraat  please

 

Maanvi  why. Why hurt yourself and me

Viraat  I gotta go but I am always yours

Maanvi 

Don't worry. I can take a cab back

No I will drop you

Go and apologise first to Ma and Pa. That's more important.

No they made life like hell

Viraat  please

Maanvi  no

She then walks out angrily. In the hall, Jeevika was playing with Diya.

Diya see Mami is here.  Maanvi  why are you holding on to your bag

Nothing Di. Just going home

Anything wrong

No just missed the place

Oh okay. Take care okay

Yes Di you too. Take care of the baby, Diya and at the same time  Viraat  please.

Yes I will. Now don't you worry

Maanvi leaves the house and goes back.
Edited by JasmineShabir - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aisa kya ho gaya ki they're shifting wedding forward.. ?? 

btw gr88 update
continue soon :) :) 

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey just read all the parts...it was amazin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ‘
loved each and evry chapter...
pls update soo...cz i cant wait 2 read mre...
nd pls pm me wen u update๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its awesome, all parts are so good,
and you update so fats,
I really appreciate it.