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wow! a very good update😊 i loved it! all the bondings between all characters are beautifully written about. i especially liked vv bros bonding . waiting eagerly for nxt updt

really nice yr so smooth ur such a good writer i really lovd it n thank u for the pm😃

Great work 👍🏼 

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

That was an awesome explanation,

and the bonding of the brothers...

I like; Ahw!

But Jeevika too, you kept her character

so sweet and pure, wanting the best for everyone

and accepting Maanvi as her already!

I love it!

Nice update... hope we get the next part soon!

Nice update

wow once again a super update ... 

Awh... Loved it. Specially precap... Eagerly waiting 4 next part.

great writing skills

Really good update yaar...
The story is really interesting and you write everything to the point. I'm really loving everything so far and am eagerly looking forward to the next parts. Thanks for the pm. Update soon..
Love,
Athira

your part 3 was fab,keep me waiting on what happen next and now part 4 is super good,keep up the good work 👏 and continue writting😊and thanks for pm ing me..
Edited by jacinta_91 - 11 years ago