||-Life Betrays-|| (One-Shot)

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OMG! How I wish it was longer & didn't end at that part. :( I could feel the pain she was going through. You've beautifully presented each & every emotion she has been through, a great bonding with grandma & her friend. Very emotional & good piece of work.
Awh :( I wish she had got a little of happiness she deserved.


great one! keep them coming :D loved it overall :)


Arezo.
Edited by Arezo. - 11 years ago

an emotional OS...

u can never know what life throws at u...u just have to accept it...

Wow...that was very very intense and emotional. Beautifully written!

super.
well written..

sooo emotional os

Awesome yaar...
It is sooo painful yet touchy...
U hv described every emotion so nicely that i could feel it...
A really sad story bt   Written amazingly...
Keep it up

hey...very emotional os...
U made me cry...
Y our lyf is nt simple????
Do pm me if u write another story...

very beautifully written 

awwesum Os ...sooo touching ...amazing ...thnxx fo pm