||-Life Betrays-|| (One-Shot) - Page 10

Originally posted by: MeghPiyashi

superb...

Wow...that was very very intense
and emotional. Beautifully written!

I loved the way you described the pain...emotional, yet not overdone...

Originally posted by: PoojaSheth

Wow...that was very very intense
and emotional. Beautifully written!

irony of life well written.
i could feel the pain.

Hey Dear,

That was so Touching! ❤️
I could feel the pain,the betrayal she felt, you are one amazing writer.
Beautifully written! 👍🏼

i was looking for some OS to read and came across yours bulletin...
really beautifully written...was able to feel the pain that ayesha went through..very sad indeed.

i have to read all of your stories now...you have got me hooked now!

plz do pm me whenever you write more!:-)

wow dear 

beautifully written

Reserved! Will edit tomorrow morning!

nice...
emotional but shows d real face of life..
pm me also nxt tym
Edited by mishtypiya - 10 years ago