||-Life Betrays-|| (One-Shot) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
AMAZING
but it was painful
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Posted: 11 years ago
are you really a new writer coz i swear i wont beleive it!!!!
its was such a beautiful update dat i'm speechless and not able to put my feelings in words..
i did read the whole os wid full concentration and it really touched somewhere deep in my heart.
while reading dat para which says ...
I ran away from there to my home, the memories of my happy childhood flashing in front of me, then slowly, the times which almost shook my whole life, came in front of me. The faces I always longed to see, of my parents; the faces I always saw and loved, of Alisha and grandma; the lovely memories; the harsh memories came across me, as I ran across the road. So much noise, the noise of shouting of the people, the noise of the horns of the cars and bikes, the noises ware filled in the air. But in my mind, I had other noises- the memories.
i was in tears..
and once again i'm saying i still dont believe its ur 1st attempt..
loved it dear..and love you and thanks for giving such a beautiful os..
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks a lot rashmi for pm..
 
@ AfflicteD pls add me in ur buddy list so dat i may get the pleasure for reading such a beautiful os/ss/ff in nearby future..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Emotional and nice os
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Posted: 11 years ago
well written...
beautiful OS...
very emotional too...
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Posted: 11 years ago
woww! That was Amazing OS
beautifull written...loved it


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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow dat was reliii emotional
Beautifully written x
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Posted: 11 years ago
heartwrenching OS>...
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Posted: 11 years ago
such a heartwrenching story
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Emotional update
Well written