||-Life Betrays-|| (One-Shot) - Page 4

Posted: 11 years ago
hey there,
this was so beautifully written, i must now check out your other work, heart wrenching.. loved it.

Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks a lot to everyone who read and liked my OS.  🤗
I hadn't expected so many people would like it. Thanks to Rashmi for sending PMs ^_^
Posted: 11 years ago
omggg really heart wrenching OS..
life is unpredictable..
Posted: 11 years ago
This is very emotonial.I can feel her  pain.There are tears in  my eyes after reading this.
Good work.Keep it up.
Posted: 11 years ago
OMG

u hav written so beautifull..i could feel d emotions between d lines..d unsaid words behind dose tears...

u hav done agreat job i must say...

very beautiufll peice of work..

too emotional 1...

hats off to u..

love

Mish 


Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Arezo.


Res=) Will edit soon!

Edited:

OMG! How I wish it was longer & didn't end at that part. :( I could feel the pain she was going through. You've beautifully presented each & every emotion she has been through, a great bonding with grandma & her friend. Very emotional & good piece of work.
Awh :( I wish she had got a little of happiness she deserved.


great one! keep them coming :D loved it overall :)


Arezo.

Thank you very much Arezo.
BTW, she did get her share of happiness at the end when she finally went to her friend and grandmother.. 😳
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Tyro


an emotional OS...

u can never know what life throws at u...u just have to accept it...

I agree..we never know!
Thanx :)
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by MrsRaizada101


Wow...that was very very intense and emotional. Beautifully written!
-Abi❤️

Thank you so much for the appreciation :)
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by sowmyadharini


super.
well written..

Thank You! 😊
Edited by AfflicteD - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by uteem


sooo emotional os
how can parents treat dere children lyk dis

Well...I can't really comment upon this.. 😛
Thanx, anyways!

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