||-Life Betrays-|| (One-Shot) - Page 8

Originally posted by: sridevi_n

awesome one. no one knows when the life will change. its just matter one sec the life can change completely either to get happiness or to just get sad or loneliness.

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

pretty emotional

Originally posted by: mandymore

Beautiful os...wid sad end

Originally posted by: NinaArief

hey there,
this was so beautifully written, i must now check out your other work, heart wrenching.. loved it.

Originally posted by: angel_mew

i am speechless...

Originally posted by: shristi1

Awesome dear.

Originally posted by: priti11

omggg really heart wrenching OS..

life is unpredictable..

Originally posted by: aroramaina

This is very emotonial.I can feel her  pain.There are tears in  my eyes after reading this.

Good work.Keep it up.

Originally posted by: Angelic_mishty

OMG

u hav written so beautifull..i could feel d emotions between d lines..d unsaid words behind dose tears...

u hav done agreat job i must say...

very beautiufll peice of work..

too emotional 1...

hats off to u..

love

Mish 

Originally posted by: SobtiObsession

Very well written :)