FF - Fatherhood LAST CHAPTER,PAGE - 125

Posted: 11 years ago

This is a new FF which will be a little bit different from all other FFs written till now in this forum.This is neither an INSHI nor a SARA FF but will include three of them.There will be no love triangle or a game of revenge between the trio nor it will be concentrating on any love story.It will mainly focus on a complex relation between Sameer and a new character Sonia which will include both love and hatred and we will be able to find how sometimes someone's hatred turns a person completely from negative to positive and rebuilds him.

I hope u will like this FF also like my other one which will be continued simultaneously with this one.


REGARDS
PAULOMI


INDEX:

CHAPTER - 1               PAGE - 1
CHAPTER - 2               PAGE - 2
CHAPTER - 3               PAGE - 3
CHAPTER - 4               PAGE - 5
CHAPTER - 5               PAGE - 6
CHAPTER - 6               PAGE - 7
CHAPTER - 7               PAGE - 9
CHAPTER - 8               PAGE - 10
CHAPTER - 9               PAGE - 12
CHAPTER - 10             PAGE - 12
CHAPTER - 11             PAGE - 13
CHAPTER - 12             PAGE - 14
CHAPTER - 13             PAGE - 15
CHAPTER - 14             PAGE - 16
CHAPTER - 15             PAGE - 17
CHAPTER - 16             PAGE - 18
CHAPTER - 17             PAGE - 20
CHAPTER - 18(a)         PAGE - 21
              18(b)         PAGE - 22
              18(c)         PAGE - 24
CHAPTER - 19             PAGE - 26
CHAPTER - 20             PAGE - 28
CHAPTER - 21             PAGE - 29
CHAPTER - 22             PAGE - 31
CHAPTER - 23             PAGE - 32
CHAPTER - 24             PAGE - 34
CHAPTER - 25             PAGE - 35
CHAPTER - 26             PAGE - 36
CHAPTER - 27             PAGE - 38
CHAPTER - 28             PAGE - 39
CHAPTER - 29             PAGE - 41
CHAPTER - 30             PAGE - 43
CHAPTER - 31             PAGE - 44
CHAPTER - 32             PAGE - 46
CHAPTER - 33             PAGE - 47
CHAPTER - 34             PAGE - 49
CHAPTER - 35             PAGE - 51
CHAPTER - 36             PAGE - 53
CHAPTER - 37             PAGE - 55
CHAPTER - 38             PAGE - 57
CHAPTER - 39             PAGE - 58
CHAPTER - 40             PAGE - 60
CHAPTER - 41             PAGE - 62
CHAPTER - 42             PAGE - 65
CHAPTER - 43             PAGE - 67
CHAPTER - 44             PAGE - 70
CHAPTER - 45             PAGE - 76
CHAPTER - 46             PAGE - 78
CHAPTER - 47             PAGE - 80
CHAPTER - 48             PAGE - 84
CHAPTER - 49             PAGE - 88
CHAPTER - 50             PAGE - 91
CHAPTER - 51             PAGE - 94
CHAPTER - 52             PAGE - 96
CHAPTER - 53             PAGE - 100
CHAPTER - 54             PAGE - 103
CHAPTER - 55             PAGE - 106
CHAPTER - 56             PAGE - 108
CHAPTER - 57             PAGE - 111
CHAPTER - 58             PAGE - 113
CHAPTER - 59             PAGE - 116
CHAPTER - 60             PAGE - 118
CHAPTER - 61             PAGE - 121
CHAPTER - 62             PAGE - 123
CHAPTER - 63             PAGE - 125

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Edited by -Paulomi- - 10 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow FF includes Sameer as postive character  😳

i didnot read your FFs till now but i feel so happy that you are writing more and more 👏
me will sure read and comment soon
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by preethimadhavg


Wow FF includes Sameer as postive character  😳

i didnot read your FFs till now but i feel so happy that you are writing more and more 👏
me will sure read and comment soon
ye 2nd hai isse pehle bas ek hi likh rahi hu jo abhi tak khatam nehi hua aur isme sameer dheere dheere positive banega  aur ha tumne mujhse promise kiya tha ke weekend mein tum mera 1st ff parogi aur comments bhi dogi so bhulna mat
Posted: 11 years ago

                            CHAPTER – 1

[THE STORY STARTS AFTER MANDIRA RAPE CASE TRIAL]

After winning the case,SF,especially Indira and Rishi gathered great round of applause from the media and public.Everyone praised Indira's job of how she stood against such influencial Diwan family in order to get justice for her sister Mandira raped by Sameer Diwan.Rishi too was appreciated for his job of getting justice for Mandira against his own brother.

                                                 Everyone was happy in SN.Mandira also understood her sister and her sacrifices.From then onwards she totally became a changed girl.She started behaving politely with Indira and presented a sister – like attitude towards her.

                                                Days passed by and Mandira too slowly slowly overcame her trauma.Kutumb and Munna decided that Mandira should be married away.But Mandira decided to concentrate on her career and to be self dependent.She was supported by Indira and Rishi.Kutumb exclaimed,"Haaye rabba tu samajhti kyu nehi hai ke ek ladki jiska balaatkaar hua ho vaise bhi usey dhang ke ladke nehi milte aur upar se yeh mari Indira ki bhi shaadi nehi hui hai.Do do jawaan bin bihaayi betiya jab ghar mein bethi rahe to ek ma pe kya guzarti hai tu kabhi nehi samjhegi."Indira got irritated,"Ma ek to Mandira apne aap ko itne mushkilo se sambhaal rahi hai,upar se vo khud kuch karna chahti hai,kaha tumhe uska hausla barana chahiye,tum ye sab keh rahi ho."They argued for some more time and then Kutumb gave up.Mandira was silently sitting and weeping.Indira and Rishi consoled her and ensured her whether anyone supports her or not,they will do.

                                              Mandira started going to college.She faced many taunts and ugly proposals but she faced them with courage and continued her studies.

 

 

 [THREE MONTHS LATER]

Everything was going on normally and quiet well.Indira and Rishi's relation also got improved and their love story was also going on in full swing.

                                                One morning,Mandira woke up on her bed feeling very sick.She went into the washroom and vomited.She did not pay any heed to it thinking it might be due to indigestion.But this sickess and vomiting went on for few days.She got scared and doubtful.She immediately went into Sunaina's room and took out a small packet from the drawyer named PREGNANCY TEST KIT.She went into the washroom and tested.She was stunned when her worst nightmare came true.She tested many times to console herself but the result was still POSITIVE.Mandira is pregnant with Sameer's child.She got very terrified on the thought of how she will be facing the whole society especially her family.She kept quiet for some days but these things cannot be hidden.One day Kutumb caught her while vomiting,"Haaye rabba,ari o beshram,ye tune kya kiya,bin bihayi ma ban gayi tu?Ye din dekhne se pehle main mar kyu nehi gayi"and started beating Mandira.Indira and Rishi stopped her and everyone got shocked at the news.Mandira decided to abort the child.When three of them went to the clinic for abortion,the doctor,after check up said,it will be very harmful for Mandira if she gets an abortion.Mandira wanted to commit suicide but Indira stopped her saying,its neither her nor the child's fault so she has no right to punish both of them.Eveyone became worried for Mandira's life and future.                                       

Edited by MultiPAULOMI - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
@Paulomi-- You are really doing  a great job continue writing 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update but aap inshi ko aalg mat karna
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Avni30


Nice update but aap inshi ko aalg mat karna
Dont worry maine kaha na ye love story hai hi nehi aur na koi tragic drama hai yaha pe sirf 2 characters honge sameer and sonia jispe ye pura FF mainly based hoga
Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER – 2

During the time of pregnancy both Indira and Rishi took good care of Mandira,especially Rishi who was was doing it more out of guilt for his brother's deed.Kutumb noticed the fact.

                                              Munna,one day,when everyone was home said,"Mummy kya Mandira saari umar aise hi ghar mein bethi rahegi?Kaun aisi ladki se shaadi karega?Kaun iske bachche ko apna naam dega?"Kutumb stood up and moved towards Rishi,"Tune meri beti ko insaaf dilaya hai kya tu usey pure samaaj ke saamne sammaan nehi de sakta?"Rishi got the biggest shock of his life.Kutumb hold his hand and almost pleaded,"Tu meri beti se shaadi karle beta,koi toh use shaadi karnewala hai nehi aur vaise bhi tu achcha nekdil ladka hai aur mujhe yakeen hai tere saath vo khush bhi rahegi."She joined her hands,"Meri beti ka uddhhaar kar de main tere saamne haath jodti hu,tere per parti hu"and was about to touch his feet,Rishi hold her,"Yeh aap kya kar rahi hai auntyji ?Please aisa mat kijiye."Indira trembled,"Yeh-kya-keh-rahi-ho-ma?"Kutumb angrily said,"Kyun?Kya galat keh diya maine?Na yeh hamari zindagi mein aata aur na vo Sameer Diwan aur na ye sab kuch hota.Kya apne bare bhai ki galti ka praayashchit nehi kar sakta yeh?Aur kya tu apni choti behen ki izzat aur zindagi ke liye itni choti si kurbaani nehi de sakti?"Indira sat on the ground with a shock.Her mother was not just asking for Rishi,she was asking for her life,if she sacrifices it,there will be nothing left for her.

                                                            Indira slowly went to her room and closed the door.A storm raised inside her which was smashing her completely from inside.On one side there was Rishi who was welcoming her in the world of happiness with open arms and on the other side there was her sister looking disastrously at her with another life growing inside her.She fought with herself for a long time and finally took a decision.She didn't come out for the whole day.At night she opened the door and went to Rishi's room slowly.Rishi too was sitting quietly with a blank vision.When both of them saw each other and they could not control each other and hugged and started crying.Indira requested,"Rishi meri behen se shaadi karlo please."Rishi was shocked and releasing her from his grip,he said,"Makaanmaalkinji aap?Aap aisa soch bhi kaise sakti hai?Main aapke siva kisi aur ko apni zindagi mein shaamil nehi kar sakta."They argued over it for a long time.At last Indira kneeled down and requested joining her hands,"Please Rishi meri baat maan lijiye yehi samajh lijiye ke ye meri aakhri khwahish hai aur iske baad mein aapse kabhi kuch nehi maangungi."Rishi gave a disbelief look and held her hands and helplessly replied,"Aap mujhse meri zindagi maangti main uff tak nehi karta lekin aap jo maang rahi hai uske baad main vaise bhi aapko kuch aur dene ke laayak nehi rahunga"and finally he surrenders.Indira smiled sadly and thanked him.She got up and when she was about to leave,Rishi asked,"Kya meri ek akhri khwahish aap pura karengi?"Indira turned towards him.Rishi with opened arms and in a very sad tone said,"Bas ek aakhri baar mujhe apne seene se lagaa lijiye taaki mujhe fir koi afsos na rahe aur is ek yaad ke sahaare main apni puri zindagi bita saku."Indira couldn't stop herself and they hugged tightly.

                                                             The marriage was fixed after three days and it will be a court and social marriage both on the same day.The three days were very tough for Indira and Rishi whenever they had to face each other.On the auspicious day both Mandira and Rishi came in their wedding attire in front of the registrar.The registrar forwarded the paper and pen towards Rishi.He slowly took the pen and looked at Indira with watery eyes.With that one sign both Indira and Rishi's life will change forever.Indira was not able to see this so she moved away a few distance.Rishi with shaky hand signed the paper.The registrar moved the paper and pen towards Mandira.She took the pen and called Indira to stand by her side.When Indira came,Mandira handed over the pen and paper to her.Indira,Rishi and all others who were present there were surprised.Indira gave a disbelief look to Mandira.With a smile Mandira said,"Aapko kya laga didi main sach mein Rishi se shaadi kar lungi?Nehi didi main yeh baat achche se jaanti hu ke aap dono ek dusre se kitna pyar karte hai aur ek dusre ke bina jee nehi paayenge.Is shaadi se teen zindagiya barbaad ho jaati.Sameer ke gunaaho ki sazaa aap inhe kaise de sakti hai?Aap mere bachche ke liye itni bari qurbaani dena chahti thi?Kyu?Agar aap maasi ke bajaay maa bankar mere bachche ko pyar karti to kya aapka pyar kam ho jaata?"Indira became confused and Mandira continued,"Ha didi main yeh bachcha aapko saupna chahti thi.Kya aap dono isey apna naam nehi denge?"Indira hugged her and cried.After that Indira and Rishi got married both socially and legally with everyones blessings.

                                                     Just on the completion of wedding,Mandira shouted with labour pain.She was taken to the hospital and the doctor immediately called for operation.After few hours the doctor came out of OT and called both Rishi and Indira to her cabin.In the cabin,she told them that due to premature delivery a condition arised where either they had to save the child or the mother,but the patient desperately needed her baby and requested not to inform them about this condition,so they were bound to save the child.

                                                     All the family members were shattered and Indira started crying hugging Rishi.Mandira was moved to general ward.After some time, the doctor permitted them to go inside for last visit.When everyone went inside,Mandira was found sitting with her baby.It was a baby girl.Mandira handed her over to Indira and said,"Didi main apni amaanat aapke paas chore jar a rahi hu.Main jaanti hu ke aap isey mujhse bhi zyaada pyar dengi bas ek aakhri request hai,ispe kabhi bhi Diwan khaandaan ka saaya mat parne dena aur isey aap dono bilkul apne jaisa banana aur iska naam aap SONIA rakhna."Saying this she kissed her daughter and then pleaded everyone to forgive her if she did anything wrong with them.Indira hugged and cried her heart out,"Yeh tune kya kiya Mandira?Kyu kiya aisa tune?Hum the na tere saath aur tu aise hi hamara saath chorke ja rahi ha?"She hugged her more tightly.Suddenly she noticed,Mandira's grip was loosened and she was not reacting.Indira called her name many times but she didn't respond.All became quiet and there was a pin drop silence.

                                                   Mandira was no more.

Edited by MultiPAULOMI - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update 1 sawal aap itna sub kaise soch layti ho. Main to bus aap ke update ka wait karti hu. Aap ka update padhkar na soch ne par majbur kar dati hai next part kya honga. Very nice post keep it up please continue.
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Avni30


very nice update 1 sawal aap itna sub kaise soch layti ho. Main to bus aap ke update ka wait karti hu. Aap ka update padhkar na soch ne par majbur kar dati hai next part kya honga. Very nice post keep it up please continue.
Kuch sochti vochti nehi hu yaar jaisa jaisa ata jata hai vaisa likhti jaati hu thats is  

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