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Thank u very much and yes u too coninue ur ff i waited a month to read the next updateWell i have written another ff if u want u can have a look on itINSHI FF - a relation beyond words
CHAPTER – 4
It was late night and everything was dark outside.But in SN a very fishy thing happened.Slowly one after another each bedroom's door opened and one by one,with a tip-toe movement,came and stood outside Sonia's bedroom.They slowly and very silently opened the door and as soon as the clock struck 12,all shouted,"HAPPY BIRTHDAY."It was Sonia's 10th birthday.Every year she used to get this surprise,but today,after seeing the newspaper,she couln't stop thinking about it and slept unknowingly.So when they all shouted,she jumped up on the bed and was surprised.Suddenly she remembered it was her birthday.She smiled.All wished and kissed her one by one and left.
Next morning,everyone dressed in white,got ready to go to the temple for HAVAN as it was Mandira's BARSI.During the havan,everyone prayed for the peace of her soul.Sonia whispered to Rishi,"Pata hai Daddy main jab bhi sochti hu ke mere birthday waale din hi maasi ki death ho gayi thi toh mujhe bohot bura lagta hai.Tab mujhe kuch bhi achcha nehi lagta aur mujhe mera birthday tak manaane ka dil nehi karta."She became sad.Rishi patted her on her back and said,"Sonu beta ab bhagwaan ji ki yehi marzi thi toh kya kar sakte hai?"Sonia sadly agreed and then happily added,"Pata hai sab kehte hai ki main bilkul maasi jaisi hu,ekdum carbon copy."Rishi smiled,"Ha beta ekdum carbon copy"Sonia then concentrated on the havan.Rishi looked at her and thought to himself,"Lekin kabhi kabhi jab tumhe gussa ata hai na toh bilkul apne papa ki parchaai lagti ho"and looked forward,"Apne - asli - papa ki."
In the evening,all her friends and neighbours came at Sonia's birthday party.She received many beautiful gifts.Rishi presented her an i-pod and strictly ordered her not to tell this to anyone especially Indira.Indira gave her a beautiful frock.
At night,after the party,when she was sitting outside with her i-pod.Her eyes got again stucked to that newspaper which was falling on the ground by her side.She picked it up and opened the front page and was again got lost in the name and the picture.She went to Indira and Rishi's room who were making sleeping arrangements.Sonia went inside and they got surprised to see her awake at that time.Indira called her inside and asked,"Kya baat hai beta tum abhi tak jaag rahi ho?Neend nehi aa rahi hai?"Sonia slowly came towards them and sat on their bed.She looked at them and asked innocently,"Mamma,Daddy yeh Sameer Diwan kaun hai?"The question appeared to be a smashing thunder in their ears.Indira fearfully asked with a low voice,"Kaun?"Sonia again asked very casually and normally,"Sameer Diwan?Kaun hai woh?"Rishi anyhow smiled and asked,"Tum aaj achaanak yeh sawaal kyu puch rahi ho?"Sonia replied,"Vo aaj subhe ke business newspaper mein na maine front page mein ek photo dekhi,jise businessman of the year ka award mila hai,niche naam likha hua tha Sameer Diwan…..,ek minute"Incompleting her sentence she ran away and came back with the newspaper and showed them,"Yeh dekhiye,isi photo ki baat kar rahi thi"and then continued,"Main bhi toh apne naam ke saath likhti hu na Sonia Sameer Diwan isiliye pucha."Indira's hands were shaking while holding the newspaper and she exchanged a scary look with Rishi which was interrupted by Sonia again,"Vaise ek baat na maine notice ki hai ke Rish aur Ishu apne naam ke piche aapka naam,yani Ricky Diwan likhte hai,phir mere naam ke piche Sameer Diwan kyu?"Rishi became speechless and started searching for an appropriate answer.He very slowly and carefully replied,"Beta ye tumhara pura naam hai Sonia Sameer Diwan,ab agar main isme Ricky bhi ghusa du toh bohot lamba ho jaayega na,Sonia Sameer Ricky Diwan achcha thore hi lagta hai itna lamba nam sunne mein bas isiliye aur vaise bhi ek naam ke bohot saare log hote hai is duniya mein."Sonia seemed to be convinced with his justification.She smiled broadly,kissed them and after bidding goodnight,she left.
Indira immediately closed the door and attacked Rishi,"Yeh sab aapke vajah se ho raha hai.Kya zarurat thi aapko iske naam ke piche us hevan ka naam lagane ki?Us raakshas ne meri behen ko tabaah kiya aur ye maasum,isko toh is baat ka andaaza hi nehi hai ke jise voh maasi samajhti hai vo uski apni ma hai."She stopped to take breath.Rishi calmly put his hands on her shoulders,"Mujhe pata hai aur main sab samajhta bhi hu Shrimatiji,lekin ye baat to sach hai na ke vo asliyat mein Sameer aur Mandira ki beti hai.Mandira se maine ye vaada kiya tha ke kabhi bhi uspe us khaandaan ka saaya nehi parne dunga aur ye vaada main marte dum tak nibhaunga bhi,lekin main Sonu se uski asli pehchaan nehi cheen sakta.Yeh uske saath nainsaafi hogi.Is naam pe uska pura hak hai."But Indira still argued,"Aapne kabhi socha hai ke kya hoga jab usey ye saari sachchai maalum paregi?Kya beetegi us choti si bachchi pe?Meri toh sochke bhi rooh kaap jaati hai."Rishi said,"Lekin agar usey yeh baat kisi aur se pata chali tab vo hamare bare mein kya sochegi?Kya tab uski nafrat aap bardaasht kar paayengi?"After a few moment,he consoled Indira but said firmly,"Ek na ek din usey ye baat pata chalni hi hai,usey ye jaanne ka pura adhikaar hai,aur sahi waqt aane par main khud usey bataunga."Indira remained shocked at his last words.Rishi looked at her and understood her pain of loosing Sonia.He said,"Ghabraaiye mat Shrimatiji,Sonu humari beti thi,hai aur hamesha rahegi aur usey humse koi bhi nehi cheen sakta lekin is sach ka to usey saamna karna hi parega aaj ho ya phir kal."Indira understood Rishi and nodded her head in agreement but inside her she still could feel the pain and terror thinking about the reaction of Sonia when she will be introduced to her actual identity.
CHAPTER – 5
[DIWAN HOUSE]
A person,with bare body is sitting on the window side taking a photo in his hand.Suddenly,he hit a lighter and held it in front of the photo.It was of Indira's.He then held the lighter in front of his face.It was Sameer Diwan.He held the photo tightly and said in an obsessed tone,"Indira Sharma oh sorry Mrs Indira Ricky Diwan.Tumne aur mere sagey bhai,tumhare so called pati ne milke mere zindagi ke 7 saal barbaad kar diye.Main tumhe aur tumhare khaandaan ko dhul mein mila dunga.Jis tarah se tumne mujhe tarpaya hai thik vaise hi agar maine tumhe tarpa tarpa ke nehi maara toh mera naam bhi Sameer Diwan nehi."He then burned the photo with the lighter.
A few days later,one morning,as usual Indira made all the 4 kids get ready for their school and both Indira and Rishi took them to the bus stand in their car and after their bus departed they both left for their respective offices.
After the school,all the kids were standing outside,waiting for the bus.The bus was late.In the mean time,suddenly Seher held Sonia's hand and exclaimed,"Sonu,vo dekh,ice cream,chal na,bus to thori late hai,hum tab tak ice cream khaate hai."Sonia and the other three went towards the ice – cream van and ordered for their favourate flavour. Suddenly,Sonia noticed,on the other side of the road,an old man was trying to cross the road,but was unable due to high speed of the vehicles.She told others to wait and carefully crossed the road and helped the man.When she was just about to step on the footpath,suddenly,a big car pulled the break hard just an inch apart from her.
She screamed,"Mamma"so loud that everyone who were passing by,stopped with a jerk.The driver came out of the car and scolded,"Ae larki?Andhi hai kya?Dekh ke nehi chal sakti?Sarak ko baap ka maal samajh ke rakkha hai kya?"Sonia,fuming with anger,stood up on the bonnet of the car.She raised her finger towards the driver and said,"Hello Mr Driver mere Daddy ko bich me mat lao,pata hai vo lawyer hai ek minute mein andar karwa denge."They quarreled like cats and dogs.The owner of the car interrupted them by knocking at the window.The driver came towards him and reported the incident.He came out of the car.Sonia's mouth opened out of shock.It was Sameer Diwan,the person whose photo she just saw a few days ago in the newspaper was standing himself in front of her.
She stood like a statue and stammered,"Sa-Sameer Diwan!"The driver enjoyed her stunningness,"Humare sahaab ko dekh ke achche achcho ki bolti bandh ho jaati hai."Sonia annoyingly scolded,"Shut up!"and again started staring.Sameer came in front of her and with a straight face asked,"Ye kya ho raha hai?Aur tum mere gaari ke upar kyu khari ho?"His words brought Sonia back into the present world.She too made a straight face and replied,"Aapke driver ne almost mujhe gaari ke niche kuchal hi daala tha aur aap yeh puch rahe hai ke kya ho raha hai?"Sameer asked,"Tum raasta dekh ke paar nehi kar sakti?"She too asked back,"Aur aapka driver dekh ke gaari nehi chala sakta?"He was surprised by her attitude but controlled his surpriseness.He opened his purse and put a 1000 rupees note in her hand,to mend,if his driver had made any damages.Sonia couldn't believe what she was seeing.She got very irritated and put the money back into his shirt's pocket and said,"Aapke paise aap apne paas hi rakkhiye Mr Diwan,inka dhaus aap mujhe mat dikhaiye.Ek toh aapke driver ne meri jaan lene ki koshish ki aur aap mujhe paise dikha rahe hai?"making a straight face continued,"Aapke driver ko boliye mujhe sorry bolne ke liye,varna……"Sameer cuts her words,"Varna kya?"Sonia jumped down from the bonnet and said,"Aapke car tyres ki na main hawa nikaal dungi."Sameer smiled mockingly.Sonia raged in anger on seeing his expressions and immediately punctured one of the front tyres.Sameer exclaimed,"Yeh kya kiya tumne?Bandh karo yeh sab."Sonia,looking straight into his eyes,stubbornly continued,"Ab toh aap dono ko sorry bolni paregi.Pehle dono sorry bolo varna baaki teen ka bhi….."Saying she moved backward leaned against another tyre.
The passer's by,who stood still,were enjoying the fight of two unequal aged persons.Sameer looked around and smelling the situation to be very embarrassing,gave up against his mind and both he and his driver apologized to her.Sonia showed a winner's attitude and handed over a 100 rupees note to the driver and turning towards Sameer she asked,"Itna tip ke saath kaafi hoga na tyre mein hawa bharwaane ke liye?"Both of them exchanged a revengeful look which was broken by the bus horn.She immediately ran towards the bus but before getting inside it,she turned again and found Sameer still standing there.She got inside and the bus left.Sameer,for the first time,got defeated in a such a way and that too in the hands of a mere school-going small girl.He fumed with anger but unknowingly somewhere inside him,he was very amused and impressed by her attitude and boldness.It appeared as if he was viewing his own younger version in front of him.Continuing thinking about her,he got inside the car and the car left the spot.
Sonia's mood was totally destroyed for the whole day.She didn't talk properly to anyone.Rishi noticed this after returning home.When he enquired about her upsetness,she burst out in anger,"Pata hai daddy jo jaisa dikhta hai na vo vaisa bilkul nehi hota.Chehre se vo kitne innocent dikhte hai par andar se bohot bure.Pata nehi apne aap ko kya samajhte hai?Thore zyaada pise kya hai samajhte hai puri duniya kharid lenge."Rishi confusingly asked,"Beta kiski baat kar rahi ho?"She fumingly answred,"Aur kaun?Sameer Diwan."She uttered the name so loud that everyone in the house stood with a jerk and looked shockingly towards her.Ignoring the looks,she narrated the whole incident outside her school.The incident was overheard by Indira and she furiously held Sonia's hand from the back,"Tu ussey mili?Teri himmat kaise hui aisa karne ki?Manaa kiya tha na maine ke anjaan logo se dur rehna?To kyu nehi sunti hai meri baat?"and was about to slap her,which was stopped by Rishi at the right moment.Sonia couldn't believe that her mum was going to slap her who didn't ever scold her.She was very moved by it and left crying.
Rishi scolded Indira,"Kya kar rahi hai aap?Itni choti bachchi pe koi haath uthata hai kya?Aap kisi aur ka gussa us bichaari pe kyu utaar rahi hai Shrimatiji?"Indira argued,"Dekha na aapne kya hua?Vo Sameer se mili.Sameer Diwan?Aap samajh rahe hai kuch?"She lost words to continue.Rishi explained,"Thik hai Shrimatiji lekin vo toh ye nehi jaanti ke Sameer Diwan kaun hai?Yeh to ek accidental mulaakaat thi,vo koi jaanbujh ke to nehi gayi thi."Indira still argued,"Toh phir ek anjaan aadmi se baat karne ki zarurat kya thi?"Rishi cuts her words,"Yehi baat usey pyar se bhi samjhaayi ja sakti thi na?Aur aapne bina kuch soche uspe haath utha diya.Kaisa lag raha hoga usey?"Indira understood her fault.Both went to Sonia's room and found her crying.They tried to console her.Indira repentfully said,"Iam sorry beta,mujhe tumpe haath nehi uthaana chahiye tha,please mamma ko maaf kardo,main kaan pakarti hu."Saying this she held her ears.Rishi rubbed his hand over her head,"Mamma dar gayi thi beta ke kahi vo agar tumhe koi nuksaan pohcha deta toh?Bahaar ki duniya bohot khatarnaak hai isiliye hi toh mamma tumhe anjaan logo se baat karne se manaa karti hai."Sonia's anger slowly cooled down and she understood.She hugged Indira and promised never to do it again.She told so but somewhere inside her heart she could feel certain unknown connection to Sameer right from the day she saw his photo in the newspaper.After dinner,she slept peacefully,unaware of the ugly game,the destiny was about to play with her in the not so distant future.
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