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Very nice post aaj to sonia ka attitude bilkul indu ki tarha bana diya hitler type. Kahi vo dusri hitler to nahi banegi. But nice post padhne me maja agaya. Hd ka indu or sam ka office wala incident yaad agaya.

This content was originally posted by: Avni30

Very nice post aaj to sonia ka attitude bilkul indu ki tarha bana diya hitler type. Kahi vo dusri hitler to nahi banegi. But nice post padhne me maja agaya. Hd ka indu or sam ka office wala incident yaad agaya.

Please do comment whether u liked sam-sonu intro or not? 

This content was originally posted by: MultiPAULOMI

Please do comment whether u liked sam-sonu intro or not?<div></div>

i like sam sonu intro. Aur aap keh rarhi ho ye surwat hai to khal bali to banta hai. Khup maza angya. Ab to next update ka wait karna mushkil ho gaya.

This content was originally posted by: Avni30

i like sam sonu intro. Aur aap keh rarhi ho ye surwat hai to khal bali to banta hai. Khup maza angya. Ab to next update ka wait karna mushkil ho gaya.

Nice post paulomi. Aap ne pure FF mein ya tho kushi ki ya dukhke aasu mujse nikaal di. So nice. U have a good sense of story telling.

This content was originally posted by: dhanya.r

Nice post paulomi. Aap ne pure FF mein ya tho kushi ki ya dukhke aasu mujse nikaal di. So nice. U have a good sense of story telling.

Liked Sam - Sonu interaction. Keep going. X

dear FF is really good but i noticed few things..

the FF is too serious, make it little fun.. loosen up the characters they are like holding tooo tight.
the love and fun elements are missing...

Sonia and Sameer interaction is good but in that scene sonia sometimes talks like 18+ years girl instead of 10 years old, so concentrate on this just imagine how you will talk and think when you are 10 years old girl.

Sonia asking doubts to Rishi about her name is good one make her more curious to know the facts.

remaining comment I PMed you 😳
Edited by preethimadhavg - 11 years ago

Nice Poulomi...!!