Originally posted by: tweetie19Every poem ou yours is an epic, Sneha...i don't know which words to highlight because every line is so beautiful...i wonder how u manage to do it everytime...all i can say is π€
Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice
Awww Tweetie π€ ... thats a swell of a comment π
Guess just as you do it with ur VMs π
Will be updating the next poem soon... rather in a few minutes π
In you I find my childhood...
And memories that I care;
Unfazed by all around us...
Is the bond that we share.
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You ape my ways and replicate...
All the things I do;
World, my dear one, wouldn't be worth...
Even a dime without you.
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Sometime you lend your ear...
And then sometimes your hand;
I wish to be your Genie and say...
"Your wish is my command ! "
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You are my secret keeper...
And my best buddy too;
A hug from you is all I need...
When I'm down and blue.
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Through eyes we speak volumes...
Not a blink goes misread;
The heart hears the voices...
The ones which go unsaid;
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With you around I'm myself...
I need not pretend;
When in doubt or in pain...
My wounded heart you tend.
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When all desert me midway...
Serving me a mighty blow;
You lunge forward to cling on...
Never letting me go.
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We always bump our heads...
Be it any given day;
Our secret way of saying...
"With you I'll forever stay! "
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And I have to thanks Ana, sidra2007 and Tani91 here... for the wonderful avis they come up with... π...And also to my sis Shaili here who makes these wonderful siggies for the title...π...This goes out to you guys for adding that extra pixie dust π€
Please do let me know your impressions on these couplets π ... It will propel me to write further π
When all desert me midway...
Serving me a mighty blow;
You lunge forward to cling on...
Never letting me go.
We always bump our heads...
Be it any given day;
Our secret way of saying...
"With you I'll forever stay! "
Originally posted by: tweetie19A.W.E.S.O.M.E...πππ
A beautiful write up for the most unique relation...just can't praise u enough Sneha...π just loved these lines...π³When all desert me midway...
Serving me a mighty blow;
You lunge forward to cling on...
Never letting me go.
We always bump our heads...
Be it any given day;
Our secret way of saying...
"With you I'll forever stay! "
Originally posted by: sarah_kellychechi its marvellous!!!π
am not picking up any fav lines coz all are so beautifully etched cant choose any !!!
Sometime you lend your ear...
And then sometimes your hand;
I wish to be your Genie and say...
"Your wish is my command ! "
Originally posted by: stephenieDi this line's awesome..I'm reading it again and again--
Sometime you lend your ear...
And then sometimes your hand;
I wish to be your Genie and say...
"Your wish is my command ! "
Love all your write ups di, nice avis sidra tani and ana..looking forward to read more of these.And yes nice wishes everyone keep wishing..π
Thanks Steph π€ for letting me know the lines you liked.
Hope u get a Genie too π
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