Di๐คthsi Fb is for:-
Wish Penny put in by Sun and Athira :
Raghavi scene where Raghav smiles and gazes at her in jail while she is blabbering.
i would like to correct myself๐ณ..instead of rhymes i would like to call it simply "Effective Pair of words"(EPoW)๐..and the EPoW are as follows:-
A) 1]here-bicker it not only indicates the reaction and thoughts of S seeing the present state of affairs...it also indicates that here at the moment she is alive cos of R and he himself is stuck behind the bars..she is not able to do anything๐ก..so its full of helplessness which is gnawing her...from R's pov..he himself feels helplessness and worried to death that his lady love is out in the world alone to face her past.๐.. R has always been the "protector" of people..he thinks that its his duty to save the loved ones...no matter even dying for them at drop of a hat!! so his protective instinct is not letting him have any inner peace๐ก...
3]ask-resign this set of words is the central crux of the show..in the sense sirf puchne ki deri thi...J ko khudse..ki aage karna kya hey..kaise fight back karni hey uss situationko jisko woh apni kismat maankar beti thi...she just had to ask herself not to bow down the oppression when she was J...although i agree its very tough...but taking right decision isn't exactly taking stroll in a park!!..but she took the easier path and resigned to her fate..๐ก and bardasht karti gayi uss problem ko jisko waqt rehte solve karsakthi thi..you know nipping at the bud...
as for R...he had to just ask S about his love..but being the gentlemen.๐ก.and bound by the circumstance he resighned to his fate...
4]fine-yes this set of words shows how much R loves S...he is in so deep love that he doesnt bother lying about his aching body to her so that to protect her from mental anguish...it shows his pyaar ki hadh...by doing so he set a benchmark for all the true lovers out there...
but this para of two lines is ambigous in nature..it can also be viewed that S was trying to hide her care concern fear and worry associated with the being in love from herself!!i mean thsi propels her to stand in front of her abuser eye to eye .means ..she is also ready to cast away her weakness and fear for her love..(the strength or driving force she dint realise at that time as love) once again nice use of ambiguity in the poem dear..๐๐๐๐๐
5]thinking-devil this set of two lines is also ambigous in nature...i am sure both R and S would be thinking the same thing..although S in a milder way๐...and R in a rash way๐ก
milder in the sense S would have thought of meaningful and useful to be practical...way of fighting devil..useful in the sense that something atleast could be salvaged after all ends..and nothing is completely lost...this shows S/J had always had the optimism and positive approach burried deep inside..which with help of R got surfaced๐..rash here as its always shown that R has tough time keeping his emotions from going overboard.๐ก..and hence he would target the anhilation of all the source of sadness S is going through..
6]again-vain vain part although is coverd in previous point..i would like to observe the pair of words in a different angle..in the sense it could state the desperation irritation and frustration of R & S caused by their moves being thwarted again and again๐ก..and all there actions seems to ahve no intended reaction๐ก hence went in vain..but what they think is going in vain is actually causing an impact๐..and thsi fact they are unaware...and in a way not being aware helps them in try again..as the proverb says..."try try try till you suceed"...constant effort would always pay off...if they got the fact then they would have stopped the fight..long back..there by losing the fight nice insertion of a imp lesson in life.๐.
8]heart-sound it can be viewed as R was relieved that Devil did not harm her..and hence the sound of her heart beat assured him that she is safe for now...increasing his urgency and frustration at being useless stuck in a cell..as he knows this may not be the situation all time..and aware of the severity of the fight
8a] hurt-heart well its self explanatory not only in reference to context but also in relation to R's state of heart๐ญ
9]right then-like other men= the striking similarity that S wrongly percieved about R's thinking level stems from her past experience with men which usually was not rosy...and this similarity might have triggered all her worst nightmares she faced ...thereby threatning like an avalance to break the carefully built wall of courage inside her...
she had pinned all her hopes on thsi particular man that he is not like those other men..and momentarily her hopes were shaken..if not broken
this two questioning lines are shouting at top of there lungs that S has fallen in love with R...๐ฅณ
10]what-demon well apart from the practical act of slapping the Demon๐๐...it can be taken as the very act of standing mustering courage fighting back at..seeing eye to eye with the problem,itself ..and hence half of mindgame already won by R&S...i include R cos he has been constant source of inspiration for S although the actual act was done by S
on a side note...R wanted to give S so much love that even if somebody would ask about her past..she would be clueless...in the sense his love would heal all the wounds and make her forget her all her struggles till now ..
again these two lines herald the arrival of love at teh door step of S's heart..a someone like to prove a point to somebody only when they have love in between them...(any realation this holds true)
11]see-pity this has couple of possibilities
as S was sulking that R saw her self pitying and not her courageous deed of facing the demon on her own๐..aww so sweet๐ (although the use of a negative before the word "see" negates this point...well imagination has no rules right๐?)
or as R never saw that he was not to be blamed for everything...and hence self blame at times pushes him to the brink๐ก
or S never stopped pitying herself๐ก (against R's advice of not to do so)..while she was J and to certain extent even now..
or may be S was hurt by the apparent "scorn " words of R cos she thought R is feeling pity seeing her plight...and no one would want to garner sympathy in there right minds.๐ฒ.
12]walk away-put up well thsi antagonising words suits the charechters of R and S..R many times surrender's to walk away from reality for example:- he buried his love for S...i mean never tried to open up..until now.
S as J always used to put up with the attrocities in her life..never raised a voice..
it also represents that FOR NOW S is going away from R ...but only to put up a fight of which R will be proud of...
and on a lighter note S is really angry at R's accusations..and hence she is walking away without turning even once๐..an dleaving R to put up with remorse of hurting her๐ (like an angry little kitten๐คฃ)
13]tonight-valiant fight tonight here not only means the hour or time of the scene..but also the dark path they are walking on...in search of light...(deliverance from pain and her past is S's light and S's happiness and contentment is R's light)
or the fight with Devil
whereas valiant not only signifies S's resolve..but a strength which till now was missing in S...this apparent chiding by R ignited a strong resolve in her
and also the valiant effort R put by masking his hurt emotions while chiding his angel!!
B) the poem was the inner struggle of sia..something which is captured honestly in every single word of it...๐โญ๏ธ๐๐๐๐
C)anger,hurt,irritation,love,patience,sense of proving ..all the emotions were rolled into this single poem and for that a big round of applause๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
D) as for my reaction? "1st half of fourth line in the poem" (although its an understatement ..but i could find only this..๐
thanks @sun and @athira๐ค...and you!!๐ค
Even though I uttered none...
You could still hear my cries.
I lost hope and was seeking help...
And then I found you again.
u have depicted her emotions more beautifully than the cvs have done.. wait a minute!! what am i saying?? *smacks head*.. the cvs never showed this...๐Even though I uttered none...
You could still hear my cries.
I lost hope and was seeking help...
And then I found you again.
u have depicted her emotions more beautifully than the cvs have done.. wait a minute!! what am i saying?? *smacks head*.. the cvs never showed this...๐The seventh wish to be drawn out of the wishing well is that of my Sis Divs ๐ค
Sis ๐ค
Wish Penny put in by Divs : Siya-Krish relationship
Please do let me know your impressions on these couplets ... It will propel me to write further ๐