**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 - Page 4

The second wish to be drawn out of the wishing well is that of my friend Sun 🤗

 

Wish Penny put in by Sun  : Raghavi separation scene

Sun dear 🤗
I hope these lines were able to describe the scene... If not  then Ana ke avis aur Shaili ke siggies se kaam chala le dear 😆

The below art was created by my li'l sis  Shaili...
and all I can say is
"Love you Sis"

🤗

 Avis credited to:  Ana 🤗

 

I cried out loud,

To set you free...

But all you did,

Was look at me.

Tears then just,

Brimmed my eyes...

Not a soul,

Did hear my cries.

 

 

Thoughts of separation,

Had me in daze...

What brought me back,

Was your call and gaze.

Even while leaving,

You filled me with hope...

Till you are back with me,

I promise to fight back and cope.

 *********************

And I have to thanks my friend Ana here for the wonderful siggies she comes up with...  And also to my sis Shaili here who makes these wonderful siggies for the title...👏

This goes out to you guys for adding that extra pixie dust  🤗

Please do let me know your impressions on these couplets 😍

Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 11 years ago

Even while leaving,

You filled me with hope…

Till you are back with me,

I promise to fight back and cope.

loved these lines😍

😍 😍 

Originally posted by: -vandy-

Even while leaving,

You filled me with hope'

Till you are back with me,

I promise to fight back and cope.

loved these lines😍

Thanks Di 🤗... glad that u mentioned the lines u loved 😃

*dies*

 

Originally posted by: sam123_0

😍 😍 

 

Sorry... I belong to the group who doesnt know how to use words to express myself.. so I just end up doing   😍 😍 

 

That is so beautifully!

 

Thanks for the PM!

Sam dear 🤗

Your  😍 😍 meant a lot and thanks for finding it beautiful... and I do not agree with you when you say that you do not know how to express yourself ... well I have read ur point of views on various threads and you my dear have expressed them wonderfully...😃
What???... you think I'm just being utter sweet to you 😕... well I have got a proof of your wonderfully worded statement ... right here:

"What a contrast between the two characters! One does not need his eyes to be open to see the truth... the other does not see the truth even with his eyes open!!😆"---- sam123_0

And all i could do was 👏

The line in which..I mean the one with...*confused*

I'm one of those who can only say awesome and clap, so I'll do that. Awesome!!!! 👏

 

 

Haar line main itna dard...oh that sweet avi, oh those sweet lines...Sneha you outdid yourself this time!!!! 👏

                                  Thoughts of separation,

Had me in daze…

What brought me back,

Was your call and gaze.

every line was perfect

Thoughts of separation,

Had me in daze…

What brought me back,

Was your call and gaze.

every line was perfect