**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Elysia

*dies*

 

Omigod, Snow  That was so beautifully tragic and yet you ended it with this small flicker of hope! AH! BEAUTIFUL. How do you do it? How? I love the part where she said that she was in a daze, but his call and gaze brought her back to her senses... omigod, just beautiful ❤️

Awww... Ana sweets 🤗

*screams... NAHIIIN(like the old film heroines)*..

*runs and kneels down near Ana and whispers*...

On a tender note... Thanks for your words dear ... you just sprinkled the fairy dust on me... and I'm like 😃

As for ending the couplets on hope...well I'm a hopeless hoper (if that ever makes any sense)😉

OMG!!! Sneha...how can u do this to me everytime i.e Kill me with ur words😍

Ghosh...this was soo beautiful...just perfect for the seperation scene ...Wow!!!!👏

If Sia had to write abt it, she would hav written the same 😳.

Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice

 

Wish Penny put in by Sun  : Raghavi separation scene

 

I cried out loud,

To set you free'

But all you did,

Was look at me.

Tears then just,

Brimmed my eyes'

Not a soul,

Did hear my cries.

 

 

Thoughts of separation,

Had me in daze'

What brought me back,

Was your call and gaze.

Even while leaving,

You filled me with hope'

Till you are back with me,

I promise to fight back and cope.

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This is just so touchy Sneha..😭

Originally posted by: stephenie

The line in which..I mean the one with...*confused*

Ah leave it I won't be able to choose...

                      

                                     EVERY LINE'S A MASTERPICE!

Good..well wonderfull work di..Keep it up!👍🏼

Awww Steph 🤗 ... thanks a ton dear...

I loved Ur comment to the T as they say... see u truly know how to make the smile on my face wider. 😃

Originally posted by: khota_sikka_sri

I'm one of those who can only say awesome and clap, so I'll do that. Awesome!!!! 👏

 

 

Haar line main itna dard...oh that sweet avi, oh those sweet lines...Sneha you outdid yourself this time!!!! 👏

Sri dear... firstly aaja jhappi paale 🤗

A clap goes along way in boosting ones morale and so does the comment.. So u have boosted me double dose here.😉

Well the Avis had to be sweet... Aakhir Ana sweets ne jo banaya hain.👏

Originally posted by: betty123

OMG!!! Sneha...how can u do this to me everytime i.e Kill me with ur words😍

Ghosh...this was soo beautiful...just perfect for the seperation scene ...Wow!!!!👏

If Sia had to write abt it, she would hav written the same 😳.

Awww... Betty dear 🤗... Oye mujhe khooni banane pe kyun tule hue ho??😲... pehle Ana sweets ab tu... 😆

Ab tujhe revive karna hoga😲... koi gal nahi...


* dances with a hula hoop as Betty regains conscious*

On a tender note...Thanks for finding it beautiful dear...🤗

Originally posted by: harshu.sundas

This is just so touchy Sneha..😭

i really felt, dat i cud feel RaghavI...😭

Esp I cried out loud 2 set u free, butall u did was look at me..😍

dat look was so passionate nd divine, he cudnt stop getting amaze by her.😍

I luv em, nd luv uu...😍

i wish sum more painful scenes of RaghavI r awaiting us.😍

Awww Sun... 🤗... Glad to know that it touched you... and that it took  you back to that scene😃

yes that separation scene was a well thought one... And well executed too.👏

Awww... i love u too Sun... Ye le 🤗

*Hides behind the sofa coz of the lil poem*

Thats a sweet poem sneha😳.

Originally posted by: betty123

*Hides behind the sofa coz of the lil poem*

Thats a sweet poem sneha😳.

Peekaboo... I see u...😆
Out ... come out now... There u are...😆

And that was coined for u sweets 😉

 Wow thats a nice thread for  poems  on request.😊