**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: athiraarshi

Thoughts of separation,

Had me in daze'

What brought me back,

Was your call and gaze.

every line was perfect



Thanks for your feedback Athiraarshi πŸ€—

Originally posted by: arunima_LUIT

 Wow thats a nice thread for  poems  on request.😊



Thanks Arunima dear πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago


The third wish to be drawn out of the wishing well is that of my friends Sun and Athira πŸ€—

 

Wish Penny put in by Sun and Athira :

Raghavi scene where Raghav smiles and gazes at her in jail while she is blabbering.

Sun and Athira dear πŸ€—

Lagta hai tum logone wishing well mein badi shiddath se wish penny dali thi πŸ˜†... I really had doubts if I would ever write on this scene.


I hope these lines were able to describe the scene' If not, then like I said before, Ana ke avis se kaam chala lo dears πŸ˜†

The below art was created by my dear friend Shaili... and all I can say is
"Abe Sunn na... thanks yaar" πŸ€—





Avis credited to:  Ana πŸ€—





To find you here... in such a state,
Makes me bicker... at my fate;


As I blabber and... then debate,
You smile a smile... I can't relate;


Then you ask... "Are you fine?"
I answer "Yes"... and then resign;


Back to thinking... I ponder again,
To strike the devil... but not in vain;


That's when you... scorn at me,
Concluding that... with fear I flee;


Hurt fills my heart... right then,
How can you sound... like the other men;


I have done what ... you didn't see,
Slapped the demon... and self pity;


As I walk away... from you tonight
I promise to put up... a valiant fight


 *********************

And I have to thanks my friend Ana here... for the wonderful avis she comes up with... πŸ‘...And also to my sis Shaili here who makes these wonderful siggies for the title...πŸ‘

This goes out to you guys for adding that extra pixie dust  πŸ€—


Please do let me know your impressions on these couplets 😍



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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderfully executed di...Can't even express the deepness in words😍
Posted: 11 years ago
dis is so damn dreamy...sneha, really, ur words r so precise nd exactly fits d situation, exactly d words which i felt 4m d scene..😍
gr8 job once again.πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
So dreamy, so lovely, so deep, so...amazing!!!! πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: stephenie

Wonderfully executed di...Can't even express the deepness in words😍



Thanks for finding it worthwhile Steph... ye le aaj ki πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: harshu.sundas

dis is so damn dreamy...sneha, really, ur words r so precise nd exactly fits d situation, exactly d words which i felt 4m d scene..😍

gr8 job once again.πŸ‘



Awww Sun πŸ€—

Glad that you found it dreamy... and I could bring out the emotions you could identify with

Your comments matter so much... πŸ€—

Aakhir ye couplet teri wish thi πŸ˜‰


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Posted: 11 years ago
My reaction to this 'group of ppl who write these poems and Sneha takes all the credit' is:


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khota_sikka_sri

So dreamy, so lovely, so deep, so...amazing!!!! πŸ‘



Sri... aaja jhappi paale πŸ€—

Ab tu bhi dreamland ki sair pe nikal padi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Glad that u found it deep n lovely πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _dkmystery_

My reaction to this 'group of ppl who write these poems and Sneha takes all the credit' is:




And all I can say to you Sis is teri wish penny bhi hai is wishing well mein so...



And there we go again with our trademark icon🀣

On a tender note thanks Sis πŸ€—



Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 11 years ago