**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 - Page 8

Posted: 11 years ago

Your poems/writing is amazing Sneha. Beautiful.

 
The separation scene one was just superb. Every line matched with the scene. Just loved the last four lines <3
 
The recent jail scene one is also fantastic. Its beautiful, loved it a lot.
 
These lines:
 
"That's when you... scorn at me,
Concluding that... with fear I flee;

Hurt fills my heart... right then,
How can you sound... like the other men;"

Amazing, amazing, amazing. Just perfect for how Sia was feeling.
 
Fabulous and great work once again Sneha. Looking forward to reading more <3
 
And dont worry about the PMs, I'll eventually come here and read your poems and leave feedback. :) Its no problem at all :)
Posted: 11 years ago
Hurt fills my heart... right then,
How can you sound... like the other men;"

 
 
i just loved this line
Posted: 11 years ago
Sneha OHMIGOD!!! Its beautiful! The best part I liked was
 
As I walk away... from you tonight
I promise to put up... a valiant fight

 
You sure are talented👏
Posted: 11 years ago
Very  beautiful.  I feel it but can't even express the way you did 

Keep it up Sneha
Posted: 11 years ago
chechi!
i m so sowie for coming late to such a wonderful thread!!!😔
anything u write is a treat to me!!!🤗
Posted: 11 years ago

Even while leaving,

You filled me with hope…

Till you are back with me,

I promise to fight back and cope.

 these lines were just so awesome!!!!!!!😳
love ya loads chechi!!
Posted: 11 years ago
Really nice ... you write beautifully 
Posted: 11 years ago
Sneha cum bak soon..waiting for the pending poems.
Posted: 11 years ago
Oye add my request in ur lambi wali list 😉
I wanna dedicate a poem to my toweliya ☺️ so tu ek poem likh abt my "feelings" for him in not so shareef way 🤣Edited by silky_harshad - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
silky🤣
i second ur request...🤣
sneha i want a poem on our feelings for toweliya...
 
kaise we  get "koochie koochie hota hai feelings" for him🤣

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