**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 - Page 9

oh God! abi tk kisi ke dimaag me ye baat ni aai thi 😡 kamino, kia hoga tum logo ka mere bina 🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: _dkmystery_

🤣🤣

yeah, apni team ko bol 'fatafat' likhe or u will fire them n get new ghostwriters 🤣🤣

seriously sis, how do u manage to pen down your thoughts so beautifully? 😍 👏

I hope Snape clapping for u was satisfactory 🤣

Dont worry Sis... Agar unhe fire karna pada to kar doongi aur fir tujhe appoint kar loongi... What say 😆

Gah Gah Gah *hides behind the sofa*(Betty style)... guess just as you come with the witty humorous lines 😉

Snape clapping for a mere Muggle like me was unbelievable... But i'm happy with it... coz if i say otherwise... then next i find is that... u send Voldemort to do the honors 🤣🤣




 

Originally posted by: _dkmystery_

come bk soon Sneha!

I'm back Sis 🤗 ... But still have some disappearing acts before I come back as before.. 😆

Originally posted by: -vandy-

goshh...

this poem is a real beauty😍

Thanks Di 🤗

Originally posted by: -vandy-

Hurt fills my heart... right then,
How can you sound... like the other men;"

 

 

i just loved this line

Thanks again for letting me know the lines that you loved.

Originally posted by: betty123

No no...all RaghaVi scene are so adorable ki if u ask me...i will want u to write a poem on all scene 🤣..

Will put my penny later 😳

The first half of your comment I agree... they are so adorable... 😍 ... No wonder Lalala land hamesha bhara rehta hai... 😆

With the second part of the comment ... u leave me 😲 ... 😆

Originally posted by: betty123

Sneha cum bak soon..waiting for the pending poems.

I'm back Betty dear 🤗... but guess the poems will have to wait a few days though... Still on with the disappearing act 😆

Originally posted by: siddhi209

Your poems/writing is amazing Sneha. Beautiful.

 

The separation scene one was just superb. Every line matched with the scene. Just loved the last four lines <3

 

The recent jail scene one is also fantastic. Its beautiful, loved it a lot.

 

These lines:

 

"That's when you... scorn at me,
Concluding that... with fear I flee;

Hurt fills my heart... right then,
How can you sound... like the other men;"

Amazing, amazing, amazing. Just perfect for how Sia was feeling.

 

Fabulous and great work once again Sneha. Looking forward to reading more <3

 

And dont worry about the PMs, I'll eventually come here and read your poems and leave feedback. :) Its no problem at all :)

Thanks Siddhi 🤗

For finding it a worthwhile read and  taking the time to comment.

Glad that you felt it depicted Siya's thoughts and also that you made it a point to mention the lines that did so for you.

Originally posted by: sam123_0

Sneha OHMIGOD!!! Its beautiful! The best part I liked was

 

As I walk away... from you tonight
I promise to put up... a valiant fight

 

You sure are talented👏

Thanks Sam 🤗

For finding it beautiful and mentioning the lines that you found worthwhile...it really feels good when someone mentions what actually touched them. 😃

Originally posted by: april10

Very  beautiful.  I feel it but can't even express the way you did 

Keep it up Sneha

Thanks Shivu 🤗

For finding it worth the time you spend reading it... And if i may add... I love your comments... not only the ones to my threads but also to other threads... You do express your point with style... Proof: Ur comments on Episode feedbacks... they are bang on.👏

Originally posted by: Soaps1

Really nice ... you write beautifully 

Thanks Soaps 🤗

Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder... 😉 .. Your comment does matter 😃

Originally posted by: sarah_kelly

chechi!

i m so sowie for coming late to such a wonderful thread!!!😔

anything u write is a treat to me!!!🤗

It ok Omane... i know ur busy with studies... 🤗

Glad u liked the thread 😃

Originally posted by: sarah_kelly

Even while leaving,

You filled me with hope'

Till you are back with me,

I promise to fight back and cope.

 these lines were just so awesome!!!!!!!😳

love ya loads chechi!!

Thanks for letting me know the lines u liked... and Love you loads too dear 🤗

Originally posted by: silky_harshad

Oye add my request in ur lambi wali list 😉
I wanna dedicate a poem to my toweliya ☺️ so tu ek poem likh abt my "feelings" for him in not so shareef way 🤣

Silk 😲... Oye toweliya 😲

Toweliya in to Shareef writing out 🤣... Well all i can say is I'll try 😉

Originally posted by: -vandy-

silky🤣 i second ur request...🤣 sneha i want a poem on our feelings for toweliya...

 

kaise we  get "koochie koochie hota hai feelings" for him🤣

Di app bhi 😲 ... Opps bhool gayi thi aap to lead kar rahi ho toweliya gang ko.🤣

 "koochie koochie hota hai feelings" 😕... hmmm... I'm putting the penny in but not sure of the outcome 😆

 Again , another wonderfully subtle poem by you 😊👏

Originally posted by: arunima_LUIT

 Again , another wonderfully subtle poem by you 😊👏

Thanks Arunima 🤗
Your comments truly matter a lot dear 😃