RaHi FF|Journey To My Heart|Part 7-Page 20

Posted: 11 years ago

 Journey To My Heart ( RaHi FF)


(Part One)

Lehra ke balkha ke tu, duniya bhula ke naach
Dhun koi gungunaale, gaale tu gaake naach
Rangeeniyon mein kho ja, peeke peelake naach
Mad bhare naino se tu, naina mila ke naach

Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, It says I wanna dance with you
ooo ooo'


She was dancing. Dancing with her full attitude. She was dancing crazily. This time she promised herself ''no crying''. She wanted to forget something. Wanted to forget those words. Those words he said to her. Life is a mystery. Moment of happiness, and next moment all equation can change. First time she was in a night club. She was surprised that really she was in a night club, alone. Loud noise, crazy people and smoky dance floor. "Loud noise is far better than silent thoughts, silent thoughts are poison", she muttered. She gulped her drink in one go. Those words-

"For god sake stop interfering in my life"


I'll forgive you for your attitude
And always bringing me down
I'll forgive the way you act perfect
Only when your girlfriend is around

But the trust you broke when you said all those words
I can't forgive you for that


Suddenly a strong hands pulled her. She knew that touch. She knew the place, where she always wanted to stay, but everytime he pushed her.

"What the hell is this? What are you doing here Moti? you and night club? And why you are dancing with all those guys? Answer me!! Damn it! ", Ranveer was mad. He can't imagine his moti dancing with some random guys at 1am in a night club. And she was drunk.

"Stop shouting Ranveer Shergil! you have no right to ask me this. Just leave me alone", Panchi said angrily.

"Just a little misunderstanding Moti. Why you are overreacting so much?'', He said with a disgusted voice.

"Just a little misunderstanding, huh? All time you can't be right .I always interfere in your life na? here I m promising from today I will not interfere in your life. It's your life, u can do anything, who I am to interfere", she said with choked voice.


He did it again..

Pulled her against him.Hugged her tightly. But she pushed him. Pushed him hard.

"Don't you dare to touch me
. Now you are interfering in my life'', she shouted.

Don't you dare to touch me.

You changed, You changed
You were gone you were gone to long doing who knows what who knows where
You act like you didn't care when I told you, I wouldn't be there, cause you changed..


He knew his words changed everything.Their frindship is not tht strong, what he thought. He has to change eveything again. He has to care all wounds, he gave to her.


INDEX


Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3136014?pn=2

Part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3136014?pn=4

Teaser: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3136014?pn=5

Part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3136014?pn=8

Teaser: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3136014?pn=10

Part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3136014?pn=11

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3136014?pn=15




Edited by Sweet-bird - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing start really waiting for the next update and please pm me when u update
Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic start...really loved it...👍🏼... continue soon n plz pm me... 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
dis is beautuifullu written :D *claps*
totally BANG on stuff


cont soon nd pm me :)
Posted: 11 years ago
unwaah unwaaah i want next part soon ... 

it was bang on ...
Posted: 11 years ago
Good start, will stay in tune!
Posted: 11 years ago
The start ws Amazing !

PM me whenever u Update Next :)
Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for the late cmmnt
well loved the starting!! ..an intriguing one..do update soon..eager to read further :)
Posted: 11 years ago
hey really nice start...loved that line- "Loud noise is far better than silent thoughts, silent thoughts are poison"...
    please update soon...and please do pm me!!😊

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