D3 FF : Bereaved [Multifandom] #1 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey Nivirti
i read all d cheter& all were amazing i love wahole d pats & swaym's love & concern abt Shkshi
& i don't like orthodox dadisa
bt hope Sharon come to kn d real reson of swaym's leaving country so plz update soon Plz Pm me..:)

Edited by beeny - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Nivriti...Loved this part...m loving swayam n gunjan's equation...swayam's relationship and care towards her twin sister...its very sweet...the part where u gave the family history...it was nice and touching...swayam's parents  blushing...so cute...can't wait for the party ...where swayam will face sharon...m loving the way u r unfolding the story ...i love ur style of writing...update soon 👏😊😃 Edited by dips098 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...mind blowing...i m luving this ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...mind blowing...i m luving this ff...pls continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...mind blowing...i m luving this ff...pls continue...update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nivriti it was awesome update to say the list...enjoyed every bit of it...

this update showed us more of swayam's family and how all of them are...i loved the way you showed swayam's mom and dad and their love story it was very pleasent reading...than came a rigid dadi sa as you can see bound with traditions and not able to accept sakshi but swayam being the caring brother always took care sakshi and her need...the bond of swayam and sakshi as brother-sister was very nicely shown...

now the convo of swayam,sakshi and gunjan was the main highlight of the update...i loved reading it it was so much fun...gunjan and swayam do share a very good raport and sakshi is in love with gunjan's brother is a new interesting turn...and swayam asking gunjan to be with him was so cutely written...

i am also confused about one thing does swayam have any feelings for sharon? and the secret swayam is maintaing is being taken out so nicely it has still maintained the level of interest to know what swayam is hiding...

excellent work nivriti...loved the update to core...

regards

pratik...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc part kuch 😕😕 hai but nyc
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice story
awosome update
continu soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...nyc!!!it will be a very good ff...
u nicely described swayam's history...it was a good post...hope u update soon...

really want to knw wats wrong with swayam!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
I m dying to knw wat happens to swayam