There is a marked difference between constructive criticism and bashing. The first words you used to describe this fiction were 'the most boring fan fiction I ever read' or something on those lines. I have said worse about, say, Chetan Bhagat and Stephanie Meyer, the reader has as much right of involvement in the character's being as the writer does. So, if you don't like this story's Swayum, sure, you don't like him. We get it. But what you keep forgetting is that you cannot influence what the writer writes. There, you cannot and will have no influence. If you want people such as myself to not swear, talk like we're civil, you might start by making a better choice of words yourself. For, I don't read this fiction myself and I have no right to argue with you upon its plot or story or whatever. I merely come here to support my friend who has hitherto been a silent reader of our bickering, for some odd reason I cannot point out for you.
But I will say this, I have been writing for six years and at times people don't understand what I want to say, at yet other times, the feedback seems like a chocolate-coated slap across my face because its inadequacy is insulting. There's all sorts of readers and there's all sorts of writers, I have accepted that because, at the end of the day, our existences are codependent. If you find my candor uncouth, or my wish to help out a friend, unnecessary, I cannot help you. However, I will go from here before this thread is locked down or before you hurl one more judgment at me, because I can be more judgmental than is it okay to be and then this fanciness I have painted for you will leave and this will drag on. I know we both have it in us.
My final words here would still be those I meant to imply at the beginning. You might benefit in leaving here and reading other works, much better suited to your taste. I'm certain you come here, not to dampen your mood by arguing with people with abrasive tongues who won't stop but to enjoy your time and explore what this site has to offer.
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