D3 FF : Bereaved [Multifandom] #1 - Page 5

AWESOME update 😊 ...loved the suspense u built around the new girl...sharon's jealousy and swayam's illness...can't wait for the next part...plz plz update soon...

Omg Omg Omg:-D Jus read this ss:-D What a FANTASTIC ff yaar:-):-):-) I cant tell u How much I loved it:-):-) the Concept is Hillarious:-):-) love love love Swayam a lot:-):-):-) PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PM ME DEAR WHEN YOU UPDATE :-):-):-) Please Update the next chapter soon, Cant wait... And Please convert it into a ff:-):-):-)You are an Amazing writer:-):-):-) Wats ur name???

Guys, if you want PMs for this FF, please add this user in your buddy list! :P

Hey Guys! :)

Nivriti loved the story you posted on karan wahi and shakti mohan...and you very interstingly combined both stories in to one...loved that...

and waiting for you to update the 4th part of this story...so please update soon...i really enjoy to read what you write...

pratik...

Awesome OS...Update Soon & Plzz PM Me 😊

Hello nivriti! i got a pm from rose about your ff,and thus thought about checking it out.I went through all the parts in one go..very well written.its clear that,you have worked a lot for this ff.coming to this ff, first of all i congratulate you for writing on swayam! and you have tried to justify alk the characters.i specially liked the way,you described swayam's room,excellent job.But i just can't stop myself saying,whenever i read any os/ss/ff on swaron, i really expect swaron chemistry;P .though you have clearly mentioned that this is on swayam but...you know..;P anyways, continue writing coz you have a lot of potential and i would surely request to try your hands on swaron together!!!

love tania;)

Wow Wonderful ff:-) Thanks to Rashi:-) She PMed me abt ur ff:-) warna Itna Beautiful ff miss kar deti, I loved it:-) You writes really well:-) please continue:-):-)

Superb yaar. Update soon. 👍🏼

swayam going ny...waiting next part😃