Originally posted by NocturnalBeing
Okay. Now this matter has really gone to far. I tried to keep silent about it and avoid a battle ground, but I believe that was my biggest mistake.
I understand the fact that you don't like the way the characters play out in the fiction, and seriously, I don't think that is something to apologize. I have read my pieces, where I don't like the kind of story, but others love it, so I refrain from commenting. And that is not to keep a golden picture of myself, but because as a writer I know what goes into writing.
Also, as thegameison, who is a very dear friend, pointed out, criticism is welcomed to the point it is constructive, and helps me understand your grouse. I cannot for the life of me fathom, why you think changing the characteristics of a character makes me a lesser writer. I could have stomached if you said you did not like my story (which you clearly don't) , or that my writing is confusing, but the fact you are trying to limit my freedom space, is something I dun understand.
I have personally come across so many fictions where the characters only have the name and their personality differs like sun and stars. What irks me is the fact you are trying to say that just because I changed the way Swayam is, you think I am doing injustice to all of the characters. Also, it is my call who gets what screen space in my fiction, and really, you cannot comment on it.
I dunno if you write or not, and it is not really necessary to know how to write to comment on a fiction, but I really hope you empathize with the amount of efforts that goes in. I told you before, I will take criticism in it's true and healthy spirit, but what has amounted here is clear bashing of my writing and my characters. And really, by publicly not writing the stuff that you PMed me, does not make it less.
If you look forward to mush and romance between the two, I say, please read some other fiction. Also, please read up the introduction of my fiction, which I have not touched, and it clearly says, "I wanted to do my own justice to him and his character, and build up a new image of him. I hope I succeed in it." him as in Swayam.
I have always, and always refrained myself from writing mush, and there have been some times I have wrote it, but never liked so much so. So please, if you look out for that, I would have to politely let you go from here. This is my writing style and my way of imagining the characters, and I shall not change it.
Let's hope this is the end of this.
N.
First and formost Nivriiti Iam not the one who dragged this far its your friend thegameison.Second of all in case you havent noticed i have only criticised your work the first time and you have answered me back. Baat Khatham. the later on bash ups started by your friend which you could have easily stopped was never about your work. It was mostly how rudly she was cursing and used bad language againt me. Not once I have criticised your work. I have Just answered the very rude thegameison in her own coin to make her realise that this not the way to do it. I have never ever said that you havent put in hard work or that you are a bad writer that you should write the way i want to. and i just went to your index and you have edited your index after my comments. the date is visible for me to see. Second i respect your thoughts. but would you take one min to go bacck ans read what you wrote to me first and now what are you telling me are poles apart.
"I respect your views, and when I say criticism is welcomed, I mean it. And I am actually glad that somebody has criticised my work because it connects me more to my readers, and brings me down.
But, I just want to make one thing clear, this is not a SwaRon FF, this is a clear Dil Dosti Dance Fan Fiction, and maybe being it a mutlifandom is confusing, but you have to respect that it cannot be only based on Swayam and Sharon for that matter. I accept that grouse that people from other shows are there and it makes you lose connect, but it's imperative that you understand others have the space too.
I can try to limit the characters from other shows, but I cannot compromise with the space shared by other fellow D3 characters. I had made it clear before as well.
Anyhow, thanks for reading, and thanks for dropping your valuable view. I shall alter the way I have promised, and made clear."
Now you are giving some other explanation to which angle i have not even thought about. Nivriti i just read your FF in one night and wrote remarks on it and you have replied. Thats it. Nothing more to it. No disrespect was ever expressed in my writings or called anyone names either.Just because i didnt like certain things and mentioned it does not mean your efforts are not appreciated or you are a bad writer and that you havent worked hard for it. Where do you both get these ideas that i am trying to hurt you or are you trying read in between lines? very simple matter compliated to the core. Streched like a chewing gum. I am very hurt now. Lets just end it here.