Ashutosh ke Nazar se- FF/ Chap 6 Final Chap pg 39 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: turags


then how about this??  (some delicious chinese food) and this  too: 


๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra



I don't know...I had not planned to take it any further, chalo I'll think about it.
But no promises.



So what can I do to convince you? Choc cake? PF Changs -
Personally I am a succor for CPK :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Binat



So what can I do to convince you? Choc cake? PF Changs -
Personally I am a succor for CPK :)


CPK?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Anu... read the OS... loved every bit of it... 
Also made me realize that we want Ashu Nidhi coming together of their own accord and not because of Mallu Mata pravachan...

I was thrilled to read you address the morning tea issue... 

Nidhi helping Amar shave was highlight of the chapter for me... Donno about Nidhi but i was disgusted to see Ashu comb Mallu's hair... He could have easily asked Nidhi to do it... ๐Ÿ˜ก ... but well that's gone...


So I loved this scene... โค๏ธ

What they say is true... god opens more doors before he closes one... You write more OS and FFs before you end the first and love you for that... 

The last scene reminded me of Lamhe... and curious how things proceed... are you planning to write part 2 soon??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Anu... read the OS... loved every bit of it... 

Also made me realize that we want Ashu Nidhi coming together of their own accord and not because of Mallu Mata pravachan...

I was thrilled to read you address the morning tea issue... 

Nidhi helping Amar shave was highlight of the chapter for me... Donno about Nidhi but i was disgusted to see Ashu comb Mallu's hair... He could have easily asked Nidhi to do it... ๐Ÿ˜ก ... but well that's gone...


So I loved this scene... โค๏ธ

What they say is true... god opens more doors before he closes one... You write more OS and FFs before you end the first and love you for that... 

The last scene reminded me of Lamhe... and curious how things proceed... are you planning to write part 2 soon??


Thank you for that beautiful review Divya.
Those two scenes were my favorite also.๐Ÿ˜ณ

I haven't decided yet, if I am going to take the OS forward or not, yet.
Sorry.๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra



Thank you๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thank you for the 'brilliant'. Compliment.
I am so glad that you liked it.
I just decided to add Rohan on the spur of the moment.
I love his character.  He was so cute.๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I don't think I will be going forward with this OS.


Please write one more part... Let them get together... I hate to see them separated... I will have to start using cute emoticons to blackmail you else...  ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra



Thank you for that beautiful review Divya.
Those two scenes were my favorite also.๐Ÿ˜ณ

I haven't decided yet, if I am going to take the OS forward or not, yet.
Sorry.๐Ÿ˜ณ


Divya...we are trying to bribe Anu into wriying the next part...come and make your own contribution๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago

๐Ÿ˜† we wouldn't have asked if Nidhi had gone and hugged Ashu...par yahaan toh Rohan aagaya...ab aage ka toh sunana hi padega na...

Completely agree... Had Nidhi rushed to hug Ashu we would have be happy in our own forumland... 
Yet Anu chose a googly... and Nidhi rushed to hug Rohan...

Picture abhi baki hai mere dost... 
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: turags


Divya...we are trying to bribe Anu into wriying the next part...come and make your own contribution๐Ÿ˜‰


ya right... if I were that talented... you think I would have spent.. time from February just reading ...
I finally shared with my husband that I was logging into india forums and reading... (he laughs at me for spending so much time on a TV serial... and I have to hide from him to login... Worse than having an affair... ๐Ÿ˜‰) But anyway.. I was telling him... about you Anu and Sujatha... and he suggested the same thing to me... why don;t you attempt...

Well this is my contribution... 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great OS Anu ji ...u hav expressed every emotion so well, and it's so true that whatever we give life gives it back to us ,sumtimes  much more. Whether its good or bad...Ashu is having a taste of his own medicine, very happy...๐Ÿ˜‰
Pls continue soon, with a part 2...we'll all luv to read it...๐Ÿ˜›