Ashutosh ke Nazar se- FF/ Chap 6 Final Chap pg 39 - Page 6

Aapka ye os main kal se padhne ki koshish kar rahi hu n now I have finally succeeded... I have a habit of reading the end first wen the story starts pinning me... N dat is wat I did... Wen I saw no nidhi-ashu reunion, I decided to avoid reading it any further... But any how I have read it fully... Dont mean it dat I dint like it, I did, Ashu got a piece of his mind... But however we get mad at him, at the end of the day I love him a lot... N in noways can see ashni apart... Plz do think 2 write another part n reunite them... It really feels suffocating seeing them apart... Plz...

i dont have any thing to say libra

only i can say hats off to you

kp sir bhi itna acha nahi likh sakte jitna aapne likha

simply superb



sonali

I am completely besotted with merely the sheer length of this update!!👏

Loved the way how u used Amar to show piece-by-piece how at every juncture Ashu has misbehaved with Nidhi...some people need all the detailing to learn about their acts of cruelty😉

Also, i appreciate that till the end u made Ashu work for this repentance...but does this mean there's a part 2 for this OS?...i know i m being demanding😃😛

Btw, i loved how maturely Anji-Rangnath behaved in this piece...i guess this proves Maturity has nothing to do with your age...its a matter of perspective!!!

Completely hooked to this one...will give a second read!!

hope u have many more OS's in future for hungry readers!!

Originally posted by: Libra

CPK?

California Pizza Kitchen - for some reason I thought you were from north America

Please could you post the next part of this OS it's awesome

Originally posted by: Binat

California Pizza Kitchen - for some reason I thought you were from north America

Please could you post the next part of this OS it's awesome

Great OS - very beautifully written.  Keep them coming.

Originally posted by: Libra

@bold

I am. And now I live in the south and we have California pizza kitchens here also.  I had never heard any one using the initials before that's all.  Plus I simply Hate pizza.  I think it's disgusting.🤢

I will write further. But first in need to write the chap to both my FFs.

So depending on when imcan do that and the time I have I'll post the next part of this.  

I just cannot give u a time line right now.

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Today's episode proved KP's Ahu has no nazar... He was joking with her... 😡🤢

Hope you can complete this OS soon... 

Edited by Libra - 11 years ago

Divya...not to worry...ff version 2 ka mera chap is on the make...ashu ki dhulai there too...won't leave him I tell u...Kp ka mallu redemption Ho gaya...now everyone is so angry at ashu that we appreciate mallu backing off from his friendship n his jokes...I wonder how he plans ashu redemption now...or may be he doesn't need one...we are too immature to realize his sense of humanity n friendship...

But yeah Anu...you really need to continue now with this...may be put in a scene where rohan or amar give him a kick or two...

Originally posted by: turags

Divya...not to worry...ff version 2 ka mera chap is on the make...ashu ki dhulai there too...won't leave him I tell u...Kp ka mallu redemption Ho gaya...now everyone is so angry at ashu that we appreciate mallu backing off from his friendship n his jokes...I wonder how he plans ashu redemption now...or may be he doesn't need one...we are too immature to realize his sense of humanity n friendship...

But yeah Anu...you really need to continue now with this...may be put in a scene where rohan or amar give him a kick or two...