SS: Kiya To Her Co-Detainees Rescue-Pt.10 on Pg.12

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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 1
Banga is making d detainees except Kiya clean d corridors much to der helplessness n frustration. All 5 r standing in d same sequence like on dat day while cleaning. Panchi n Juhi r watching all dis 4m behind a wall unknown to anyone. They r feeling pity on them. Kiya who sees only d duo hiding behind a wall comes to them.
Kiya: Hey guys, wat u both r doing here? 1st lecture ko sirf 10 min he...lets go now.
D duo draws her attention to d cleaning scene. Kiya gets angry on seeing Banga humiliating them especially on seeing KD weak 4m his injuries n sufferings during d jail track. Her eyes became moist on seeing KD's condition but she controlled any tears 4m cumn.
Kiya(calling d mind talk camera image): How dare he? Enuf of ur pretending, Kiya. Plz come to ur real self...come to ur real self...come to ur real self.
She thought of all her moments wid d students, moments wid KD and her mom. A couple of tears came to her eyes but she wiped it off before letn d duo to notice.
Kiya: Don't worry, dekhte jao, thode der me ye scene kaise badalta hai.
Panchi n Juhi luks @ her wid wide eyes.
Panchi: Kya karogi tum , Kiya?
Juhi: Tell na babes, wat u r up to?
Kiya: Just wait n watch, dear. Aur haan, jab tumhe mera saath dene k liye time theek lage to muje join karne aa jana.
They nodded in unison while Kiya disappeared 4m d sight while d duo lukd on n then changed der attention back to d cleaning scene.
Banga: Jaldi jaldi haath chalao. Ye farsh kohinoor heere ki tarah chamakna chahiye.
Samar: Sirji, kohinoor heera kaise chamakta hai ye dekhne k liye hum sabko London se safar kar k aana padega.
Piddi(amusingly):Sabke paise aap hi bharoge na, Sir.
Bobby: Abey, Saale, Choohe, apna loudspeaker band kar.
Banga: Shut up! Chup chaap kaam karo.
Piddi: Sir, KD bhai abhi b bahot weak he, unhe chhod do.
Banga: Huh...itna b weak nahi hoga ki thoda bahot kaam nahi kar sakta. College ka naam to pehle si kharab kar diya jail ki hawa kha kar.
Ranveer: Par Sir, isme KD ki kya galti thi? Vo bechaara to innocent he. Us Kunal aur uske gang ne fasaya tha.
Bobby(a little louder): Aur police ko b aap hi bulaye the.
Samar: Sir, KD Sahab ki is haalat k jimmedaar aap b hai. Aur aapko in par jara si daya nahi aa rahi hai.
Banga(shouting rudely): Stop complaining, muje kuch nahi sunna hai.
Panchi n Juhi were still watching them. They were hvng tears in der eyes.
Panchi(angrily): Hell wid dis Banga, how can he be so humiliating?
Juhi: Ya babes, he is so cruel par Kiya kaha reh gayi hai?
Someone tapped them 4m behind. It was Kiya smiling sweetly @ them. She had a bucket n a mop wid her which
puzzled d duo but she moved 2wards d cleaning scene.
KD: Sir, Kiya b humare saath thi, use b saza milni chahiye.
Banga: Kiya ko tum sab ne fasaya tha. Uski koi galti nahi thi. Vo aisa kar hi nahi sakti hai.
Kiya: No Sir, KD is Right. Me b in sab me involve thi to saza mujhe b milni chahiye.
All were astonished n turned der attention to see Kiya standing a few distance away wid a bucket n a mop. Her hair was tied back in a ponytail. Banga's jaw was dropped. All 5 were lukn @ each other. Even Panchi n Juhi were shocked. She was staring @ all of them even hvng an eye-lock wid KD for a few seconds.
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago

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Part 2
Banga: Kiya, tumhe nahi lagta he ki ye sab kaam kar k tumhare family reputation pe kya asar hoga?
Kiya: Sir, mere family reputatn ka pata nahi par agar aap meri partiality karenge to RA k reputatn pe jarur asar hoga.
Saying dis she moved 2wards d other 5 detainees n pushed kd slightly aside wid her shoulder to make her way much to his shock n started doing d cleaning like others.
KD(whispering): Hey Chicklet, muje pinch kar na qki muje lagta he ki main sapna dekh raha hu.
Kiya pinch him hard playfully on d shoulder enuf to make him shriek a bit. He rubbed a little to ease it.
Kiya(smiling n whispering @ him): Stoneface, ye sapna nahi sach he.
Banga: Tumne to kuch kiya nahi na, Kiya?
Kiya: Sir, mene jaanbujhkar Jaitley Sir pe juice giraya tha. U know y? Muje laga ki J Sir koi pakao uncle honge jo hume bhaasan de-dekar paka daalenge. Par J Sir to bahot acche nikle. (turning to KD n smiling slightly)Unhone KD ko bachaane k liye air-port par last minute pe trip cancel kar diya. (turning back to face Banga) I am sure vo bahot acche ex-student honge RA ke aur poore school me b bahot famous rahe honge.
Hearing abt J's praises 4m Kiya, he started to sweat n making a terrified face thinking abt J's prank to him.
Samar(whispering to Ranveer): Janaab, J Sir ki tareef sunkar ye B Sir k chehre ka rang q ud raha he, lagta he daal me jarur kuch na kuch kaala he.
Ranveer: Muje to pura ka pura daal kaala lagta he.
Kiya: Sir, ye aapko kya ho raha he? Accha, ab samajh me aaya.
Banga: K-k-k-kya samajh me aaya?
All except Banga n Kiya r laughing widout making a noise @ Banga's state.
Kiya: Samajh me ye aaya ki aap us din k accident k vajah se aap ab tak bahot dare hue he aur gehre sadme me hai. By d way, aap k gale ka patta kab nikla? Aur aap abhi kaise feel kar rahe he?
Piddi: Bobby, ye Kiya aaj bahot badli badli si lag rahi he.
Bobby: Haan yaar Piddi, aur Kiya ne to galti se J Sir pe juice giraya tha na then y is she taking wrong blame on herself?
Banga:
H-h-h-haan pehle se bahot better he aur patta to kal hi nikla.
Kiya(trying to control a laugh): Par aapko dekh k to nahi lagta ki aap thik ho.
Banga: No Kiya, I am alright, ok.
Kiya: Well Sir, aap bol rahe hai to maan leti hu.
Piddi(whispering): KD Bhai, ye Kareli Banga par meethi choori q chala rahi hai?
KD(whispering): Muje b nahi pata par jo ho raha bahot accha hi ho raha hai. Enjoy d show, dude.
Everyone except Banga were able to see Panchi n Juhi peeping 4m behind d wall laughing n making faces.
Juhi: Babes, kya show dekhne ko mil raha he. Vo b free me.
Panchi(in a happy n pleased tone): Muje lagta he ki 4m now on , v vl see d real Kiya.
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago