SS : JJ New Teacher n KISHA ( Prt 3 )

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Posted: 11 years ago
 Part 1
JJ & Princi r sitting in d princis office nd discussing abt what all happened...
Princi : jaitly  aaj tumne proove kr diya that u r real junglee of  royal...thank u very much 
          aaj sirf tumhari wajah se KD jail se bahar aaya h
 JJ : sir, ye sb maine  apne liye kiya h,, main nhi chahata jo barso pehle mere sath hua tha wo kisi aur k sath ho...
jj & princi looked each other then princi continues...
Princi : naina bta rhi thi k tumne apni job chhod di h
JJ : yes sir
princi : bt jaitley tumhara promotion ???
JJ : wo to hota rahega sir bt I have decided something
he continues...
ab main yahi rahunga is school ko meri jada jaroorat h...sir ye students bure nhi h bs jara bhatak gaye h..
princi looks very happy with his deceision nd announce 4 assembly within 1 hr.

After 1 hr..
all d students r in assembly hall except Kiya...then princi nd Jaitly come 2 stage. princi announce jj as RAs new staff member( Teacher )
all d students starts whispering.. 
RV: shit man ye uncle fir aa gaya.. this is nt so cool
Bobby : bloody hell. ab ye hume padhayega
Piddi : (to camera) oye yaar ye to humare L laga dega 
Piddi 2 Bobby :aoye bobby tu chinta mt kr... ise fir se gayab kr denge ( he laugh )
Bobby : (with anger) abe chuuu... he  bakwas band kr tujhe b jail jana h kya ?
Panchi, Juhi & Samar looks cool with this news...
 
Meanwhile JJ decided 2 show d kunal video 2 all d students so tht baad mein KD ko koi jail wali baat k liye comment na kare...afterall he is innocent. jj play tht video( all students starts whispering again abt video)
JJ : silence please
( all students alerts ) 
then jj calls KD on stage ...
KD enters in d hall but  his eyes r looking 4 someone in d crowd (of cource KIYA).. bt after all effort he cant see her
princi congrates KD and bless him..princi dismiss assembly 
all d students rush 2 their classes
KD's eyes still searching 4 kiya he was thinking continuosly abt kiya..
piddi comes 2 KD asked
Piddi : kya KD bhai kisi ko dhoond rahe ho??
KD : (as usual in his attitude ) main kyu kisi ko dhundunga..
(bt actually he wants 2 knw abt her)
KD :  achha piddi ye Chicklet nazar nhi aa rhi
Piddi : bhai wo hospital mein h( Kd looks worried abt her)
KD : kya hua usse?
Piddi : bhai wo kunal aur Uncle ki fighting ke bich mein kareli ko thodi si chot lag gyi
KD is now looks more worried abt her as he knws everything abt she saved him...
booby comes n joins kd and piddi 
Bobby : abe chu...he class attend nhi krni h kya ? chal..
bobby nd piddi leave bt KD is still thinking abt Kiya
now he decided 2 see her in hospital...



this is my 1 SS so guys plz comment nd ur critisism is also welcom.. so tht i cn improce my writing
 
Part 2

Same day after school KD in Hospital
KD to receptionist : kiya Gujral kis room mein h ?
Rec. : Room No. 4
(KD step towards room no. 4... Kiya is alone in d room seems like tht she is sleeping )
KD enters in room n see kiya sleeping she was looking beautiful like always bt this time KD first time realise tht she is d most beautiful girl in d world... Kd was continuosly looking at kiya with a mixture of emotions 4 her ( like he looks so worried abt her health bt at d same time he is happy 2 knw tht she actually cares 4 him)
KD come near kiya's bed...

Kiya feels his presence n open her eyes. n see KD standing in front of her. they both look each other
( both have concern 4 each other in their eyes. kiya smiles very sweetly bt suddenly she thinks abt what her mom  said 2 her )
Kiya : tum yaha ???? kyu aaye ho ? agar mom ne tumhe yaha dekh liya to wo mujhe boarding me bhej dengi... vaise b wo mujhse bahut naraj h kyuki maine jaitley sir ki help ki thi ab agar tumhe yaha dekhengi to mera school change kra dengi .. tum jao yaha se.. abhi ( she has concern 4 KD in her voice )  ( She said all this in 1 breath )
she still saying:::  mom doctor se baat krne gyi h agar wo aa gyi to... oh no.. main royal nahi chhodna chahati..tum chale jao
suddenly KD put his finger on her lips 2 stop her.
they look each other... thay have almost 30 second eye lock... 
(KD comes near her ears )
KD : tum thik ho na ? 
Kiya kuchh nhi kehti she keeps looking into his eyes
after tht kd put his finger down, n wait 4 her answer, 
kiya : ( thoda nakhra dikhate hue) tum chale jao yaha se... 
KD knows tht she is pretending bt doesnt say anything n leave d room ...

Kiya smiles after KD goes...
KD also smiles when coming out of d room...

Part 3

Next Day in school
Banga comes 2 school vats tells him abt jj appointment . banga looks scared thinks abt jj's pranks..
reaches 2 princi office n complaint abt it..
Princi : Mr. Banga .. i m d pric. of this school & my decision is final.

Samar & Piddi reading a new notice on notice board...then bobby comes n join them..

NOTICE
                      To all detainees, 
  Detention class will b continue from 2morrow 

Piddi : oye yaar salle ne to aate hi L laga diye
Samar : janaab, badi mashakkat k bad aazadi mili thi fir se chhin li
Bobby : bloody uncle kahi ka, ab mere football tournament ka kya hoga
             oh no

KD enters d room & join them
Piddi : achha hua bhai aap aa gye, ye dekho uncle ne kya kr dya..
KD : achha h na ghar se aur 2 ghante door rehne ka mauka milega...
KD saw kiya coming frm other side, they look each other for a while
then moves on 2 their ways...

Same Day In locker Room
Kiya comes n see KD with his locker she waits...till KD done...
(KD turns back see kiya n As a gentleman gives space 2 kiya 2 her locker)
they look n gives a smile 2 each other. KD take a look at her wounded hand,,looks worried abt her wound..
kiya turns 2 leave...
KD : (with his attitude) kiya ... aaa..aa aa. thanku...
Kiya looks at him & says : tumhare mu se chicklet jada achha lgta h (& leaves)
 KD : (to d camera ) : kya h ??? isse jada ki ummeed mt krna mujhse...

In NIght
KD waslying in his bed thinking what happenad... he thinka abt what kunal done with kiya ,,,, he feels guilty
KD 2 himself : ye sb meri wajah se hua... meri wajah se chicklet ne us kunal  ko jhela...
other side, kiya thinking abt KD's thanku...she is happy

Next Day...
after school in detention class Samar & rv r busy wid laptop , bobby n piddi playing with football,,,, KD is sitting far away busy wid his mobile
Kiya enters d class look at KD bt KD ignores her...
kiya : ( to d camera ) ye stoneface ko achanak kya ho gya
kiya sits again looks at him bt he still trying 2 ignore her

after class kiya follows him,,
Kiya : hey stoneface... (KD stop walking ) mujhe cutting chai peeni h..
( KD looks confused) 
Kiya : aise kya dekh rhe ho ? 
KD : kya kaha tumne ?
Kiya : jo tumne suna
KD : ( still angry ) theek h ,,,, (they walk 2gether) 

both reaches buddy dhaba kd orders 2 cutting chai...
Kiya : r u ok ?
KD : tumhe kya jaroorat thi mere liye itna bada risk lene ki ?
        bolo... agr tumhe kuchh ho jata to ? ( this is d first time kd shows his concerns abt kiya )
Kiya : bt kuchh hua to nhi na 
( chai wala chai lekar aat h, both took their glass)
kiya take a sip n gives EEWWW expressions...
KD smiles n ask : janta tha tumhe achhi nhi lagegi...kuchh aur logi tum ?
Kiya : no i m fine... she takes another sip...

KD : aaj tk mere baap ne b mujh pe trust nhi kiya to tumne kyu kiya ?
Kiya : i knew tum kbi aisa nhi kr skte..
Kiya : u knw meri mom ne b kbi mujhpe trust nhi kiya, she wants only aaniya di...(she has tears in her eyes while saying thisn she looks very disturbd)
KD : look at her. he want 2 console her.. he raise his hand 2 take her in his arms bt stops...
KD : samajh skta hun.. kaisa lgta h jb apne hi aap pe trust na kre..
KD try 2 make her smiles & says : vaise maine sahi kaha tha,,, tum drama company join kr lo ab to acting b krna lgi ho jaise kunal k sath ki..
Kiya smiles n says : NO thanx... stone face. 
Both smiles slightly           















































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Hey its amazing !
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Beautiful SS!!! Amazing!!
Love the concern and worriedness in KD for Kia love this SS!!!

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loved it.. do write more 👏👏
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loved ur ss!!!!!!!! continue writing...
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awesome. please continue soon!! <3
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Part 2 was really sweet..KD went to meet Kiya :)
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Nice ss.love all kisha part ur awesum writer.do continue
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ur SS is amazing... loved all the parts... do continue...:):)Edited by latika_AshVik - 11 years ago