FF: Fire and Water (Ch. 26-A Updated on Pg.145!) - Page 105

Posted: 11 years ago
 Rose : 


I have become active in this forum of late only, but I have read this FF of your's silently from chapter 1 itself (okay, now don't thrash me for this ). And trust me this is one of the best FF's I have ever read on IF along with a few others. I really don't have words enough to praise you yaar ..love the way you keep incorporating Ariya moments and Rathore-Avantika scenes between the cases while retaining the suspense and the thriller feel intact, but you know something, the way you brought Roshni in Ariya's dreams ..mujhe who thoda filmy laga, but other than that the only thing I can say is , keep going gal ..you rock !!👏


ps : i'll pakka comment regularly on your updates henceforth.😊

 

Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update.
Loved it.
Waiting for next part.
Continue soon pls.
Thanx for pm dear.
Posted: 11 years ago
A wonderful Update
Simply loved it.
What a perfect morning for Arjun, Riya and Sameer.
Love this trio a lot.
Thanx for pm and pls update soon.


Posted: 11 years ago
loved it
recap sounds intresting
cont soon
Posted: 11 years ago
oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it was awesom!!!!!!
loved ever bit of it...
the roshni-god convo...the sameer-avantika moments...the HUG...and obviously the breakfast date...
just tooo goood...
thnks fr all the pms...
 
Posted: 11 years ago
wow dear i am commenting for the first time on ur ff
fabulous , fantastic work dear and u knw i loved ur whole concept
hayyee arjun and riya so awsome..roshni such an angel like a fairy
bond of frienship between shree...chotu...and riya
loved the way u took whole story...sameer and avantika...chatterbox soumya  how sweet

really nice u r a fantastic writter
do pm me...

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